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by crunchysalad

person Pickles
schedule December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Argh argh arggghhh! Ichi really needs to get laid in the hot springs! Rawrrrrr!!
person Person who thinks this fic is hot TTM
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW.
Another great chapter :D
Yay, Grimm's getting endorsed and have an awesome publicist! GIN! I do hope Gin would appear again! He seems to would like teasing Ichigo with "Kuro-chan"! Hahaha and honestly, I am rather shocked by Uke!Byakuya, he always seem like a Seme to me :D And Grimm is thinking with his wrong head but he still always end up getting what he wants and fulfilling others secret fantasy! I do hope for Ken/Bya! I wonder who Bya practices on >.> The punch was rather hilarious, I bet Grimm was gonna stuff his dick up Ichigo's ass but got a punch instead! That would teach him to not do other holes in front of Ichigo! :D Is this the bad thing that Ichigo believes would occur after so much good things occurring? Not getting much lovin' from, Grimm. But since there has only been 2 good things, is the third his hot spring fantasy ? hahaha i bet the bad would be the sex tape scandal! haha Approximately how long do you take to update? Just wondering :D Can't wait for the next chapter
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, got distracted. ^^* The last chapter was amazing though, lots of people forget the fact that despite being a loud crass idiot that Renji is actually pretty shy. You remembered it and you portrayed it well so congrats. For this chapter, yay for non-con~ I hope to see more of your bondage stuff. ^^ Till then be happy and be safe
person SugarMagnolia
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ugggh while I do love every bit of this story, I was not a fan of adding Byakua (however you spell it) into the mix. I guess it was the lack of Grimm/Ichi in the chapter but I was a little disappointed. Also the sex/rape of a 16 year old (fictional or not) just didnt sit right with me. I do love your work though and can't wait to read the next chapter, more Grimm/Ichi smex!! This is one of the best stories around :)
person Jennifer
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hot damn, that was good :3
hopefully more grimmxbya in the future?? hint hint lol

this chapter was awesome, seriously
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO!!!! I died when Ichigo punched Grimmjow
that was the funniest shit ever sweet LAWD.
And omg KENPACHI/BYA woooooo!
I can't wait for next chapter where Ichi gets his wonderful grimm package back XD
person Qiedia
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Tsk, tsk, what a naughty little boy Grimmjow is. I seriously think that he deserves some spanking more than Byakuya, but I must say that it was really hot non the less. :) And Grimmy got signed by Coca Cola! Good for him! I am sure he's gonna make one hell of a sexy advertising for the company, ne? Anyway, what I really wanted to say was that this was a great chapter. This story is still as amazing as it was in the beginning and I can hardly wait to see what will happen next. Longing for the next chapter and more delicious smut so update soon and keep up the awesome work!
person satterb
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap! Grimmjow raped Byakuya! LMAO! I still want to see Grimmy truly and deeply jealous of someone elses attention to Ichigo, because that someone has made Ichigo consider dumping Grimmy! O_o! I think Ulquiorra would work wonders in that capacity. Just a X-mas wish, I love the story you're writing though, you really don't have to change a thing. Thanks for all your hard work!
person Person who thinks this fic is hot TTM
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG. This chapter is just as hot as the rest! :D Too bad Renji didn't get to tap Ichigo's ass! I hope Ichigo's hot spring sex fantasy comes alive!!! Preferably with Grimm AND Renji hahha or even Byakuya! I kinda suspect Byakuya will get a chance with Ichigo, considering how Grimm approves of his looks! :D :D I seriously love your style of writing, it's is detailed enough to make readers hot and bothered, and not SO detailed it becomes meh, and it's not boring at all! :D :D I really enjoy your fics, like How to raise an Arrancar! :D I'm Ichigo-biased! Hahahah Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! I also hope for some AiIchi! SEX TAPE SCANDAL! HOTHOT. I hope Aizen will be able to have a tyrst with Ichigo and he can give as good as Grimm so Grimm will be sort of threaten and more smex ensues. I am a pervert >.<
person Lethargy
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm not usually a Renji fan, but his crush is pretty cute. Gotta love Grimmjow's attitude towards Ichigo and other men; it's both hilarious and brilliant as a porn enabler. XD