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by crunchysalad

person Karas-chan
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wonder. I really like the story so far, but is it just going to be just sex? Or is there going to be some type of relationship development? Not that I mind either way, but I think it would be cute for Grimm to eventually view Ichi as more than just a sex object. I'm a huge fan of GrimmIchi, keep up the good work!

<3,
Karas-chan
person YaoiFan
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, chapter three was amusing :D I liked chapter two a bit better, but the fourth is making me .... Ugh! The little spoiler at the end of the chapter is keeping me on my toes xD
Great work once again.

*smells jealousy in the air*
Can't wait anymore .... ;)
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Very hardcore!
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay! I'm officially not washing my eyes again! Ichi/Grimm/(?)[won't tell. I'm not a spoiler], never would have thought it! It was naughty and G.O.O.D.
person Amy
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I feel bad for never reviewing this fic before ; it's just that I'm not used to reviewing on AFF.net (except for pestering authors and asking them to update, haha).
Sooo. I feel really dirty for liking this fic so much. Hello, we are in fantasy-porn land. And while I usually read realistic sex, I truly enjoyed your fic. Yes, some things were overly exagerated but not to the point of being ridiculous (only to the point of being extremely hot), so no complaints here ^-^
You probably are the most kinky author that I've ever read (oh yes, I'm a poor innocent and naive girl) and god, you nearly make me crave sex with your fic. And you made me want to go to a sex shop for meeting an overly-serious Shuuhei talking about dildos, haha. That was excellent.

Thanks again for writing this ! (and I'm so happy you're working on Growing up Hisagi, now, heheeee~)
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god hot hot hot as hell!! I loved every second of it! I can't wait for the next chapter, I'll have a box of tissues ready for the massive nose bleed that I'm sure will follow when it come out! Keep up the good work :D
person YaoiFan
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, my gawsh ... This fanfic was amazingly hot. I commend you for your effort :] Superb, it should be said.
Hopefully the next chapter'll come out? I'm dying to read it P:
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOLY ESPADA!!! Grimm is so demanding and sexy. I'm speechless about the level of sexiness >.< I'll hold back judgement on Ichi simply cuz I'm jealous of him lol
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
freaking great lol! I love it. And im already dieing to know what happens next ^.^ Oh the ideas I have as to who his company could be ;) keep up the good writing.
schedule August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh,man! I almost passed out reading this! It's GREAT!!!

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