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by crunchysalad

person Person who thinks this fic is hot TT,
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW :D :D Chapter 13 was rather light-hearted and sweet! I really love the interactions with Ichigo's parents :D hahaha Will Yuzu and/or KArin make an appearance? :D To gauge the worthiness of Grimm? Teehee :D

Chapter 14 AT LASTTTT AIZENICHIGO!!!!! Teehee The blowjob was hot :D :D and Aizen's so sneaky! Ichigo didn't seem druunk, more drugged? He should know better! Grimmjow's and Ichigo's interactions were cute too and I'm glad they were truthful about who they slept with! The switch in the locations at the end could sort of been done better? But to end off with a cliffhanger! How could you!! I wonder who the person is! :D :D And how Ichigo will feel in the aftermath of the hot unintentional sex (on his part). :D :D

Can't wait for more more more :D Thanks for the good reading of these hot chapters :D
person Saka_Sandora
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, I LOVE Aizen/Ichigo, can't wait to see waht else you've got cooking!
person Jennifer
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohoo~ ichi, you need to learn to control yourself
another awesome chapter as usual, thank goodness for gin making sure it happened XD
but i wonder who grimmjow's visitor is? ...a parent? ...a former lover?

hope to see what happens next really soon!
great job and keep the fantastic scenes coming :D
~jenn
schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So, I discovered this piece of heaven when you posted the last chapter. Seriously, I should smack myself for not reviewing. (I thought I had)

I hope I don't offend you with this but... Sweet Shiva this is my favorite type of story... A gratuitous smut filled story thinly veiled with a plot. I ish a very very happy fangirl. =D

ONTO CHAPTER 14!
Seriously, I don't know whether to smack Ichi upside the head or high five him for fuckin' Aizen. Well, it really was HIS decision, albeit a drunken one. Gah, this can't end well for our favorite berry-head.
Wonder if that's daddy-dearest entering Grimmy's home... or an old flame. OHHH the plot thickens!

LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!
-Miz
person qwerty
schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* that was hott. hmm i wonder who that mysterious person could be - probably Margera, right? the plot thickens!
great chapter!
person Anon
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have only recently found your account and I am thrilled. And this particular story is amazing. I love the way you write and the pairs you come up with and I hope that maybe you will right more about a Kenpachi/Grimmjow round or maybe a one about Grimmjow and Renji. That would be hot:D I also hope that I did not offend you with this suggestiom I just think you could create something really awesome. XD I wish You the best :)
schedule June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww. Grimmjow is so romantic. <3 This story keeps getting better and better. <3
person Helen
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yesss. Quick updates makes me so happy during lectures. It's so cute how lovey dovey everything seems with Grimmjow and Ichigo coming back together - but I have to say, I do miss Grimmjow's coerciveness haha. I can't wait to see how the plot unfolds with Aizen involved! Update soon!
person Lethargy
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh lawd. Reading this, I feel that no one should ever have parents.

I love how irresponsible Ichigo is. XD It's weirdly cute in this story.

I'm glad that you're going to be doing more stories in this 'verse, though I'm sadly not that interested in pairings that don't involve Ichigo. When it comes to Bleach, I have a weird Ichigo-fixation. Want him to be EVERYONE's bottom. -_-; Sometimes I'll read Gin/Kira or Aizen/Gin, but only when I'm in a weird mood.
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay they are back together, and have parental approval now they just gotta deal with the sex tape that will be a fun conversation, great job on the scene as always