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I just started reading this story and I must admit: I couldn't stop! I love it! It made me cry, made me laugh. I love what you've done with the characters and I really hope you continue it. Can't wait till the next chapter! ^^

Just wanted to drop a note saying that I love your story! It's great! I like a lot of things, but something that's especially notable is how well all of the elements of your story are blended together. I have a difficult time saying just what I like about your story because everything has to do with everything else. Even if I were to say something as silly as 'I like your OC', it wouldn't properly convey my thoughts. I suppose a somewhat better way to put it is that she affects all of the characters around her in ways that I like. That it itself is the same as saying that I like how you portray the characters. So basically, wrap that up and you've got the package. I also like the setting and how you juggle the time-line and the dramatic unveiling of the past, and how you can write her thoughts on said events without actually revealing too much before the time is right. You also handle writing from different characters' perspectives and point of view quite artfully. One major instance of this is her escape from Seireitei, and how we never expect it until she's halfway out the door, just like the people we're with when we read it. Very cool. Like it a lot. Also, you write a damn good lemon. Now, I must go check out those pictures you mentioned, so I guess I'll write to you the next time you write to all of us!

klv

The story is really good so far. I hope to finish it tomorrow. Keep going, it's great.

loving it

Love the story so far, I like how the main character is probably as far from a mary-sue as I've ever read before in fanfiction.

this story has really caught my attention - it's well done so far; I'm slightly disturbed by the fact of (and the brutality of) the rape, but I find that I can't look away as I feel compelled to find out more of this mystery - so many questions are raised after just the two chapters so far: Who were the rapists (clearly, there were at least 2 ppl involved, the man and the woman. was this a whole society/group, or just the 2 of them working together)? Were there other victims than her? If so, how long had it been going on, and it is still continuing? Will we ever find out more regarding what happened, or will the identity of the rapists forever be lost to the readers? Does the rape/abduction have something to do with Aizen? (that was my first thought; either Aizen was involved in the actual rape or perhaps Tousen's disgust at the injustice of sereitei stems from his knowledge of such corruption...but I think you've put more thought into this story than to allow for such a simple connection, and such speculation is a red herring). And even more questions: Was she still pregnant? Was she ever really pregnant at all? Did she give birth? Is the baby alive? Do we know the child as part of the Bleach cast?

Honestly, I'm half afraid to continue reading (as I'm worried the rapist(s) will turn out to be some of our beloved characters, who we may even be lulled into trusting as you develop this fic and the search for our missing protaganist). But if you write more chapters, I'm sure I will continue to read them, as you have managed to hook me right away. I do love how you've added a bit of depth to General Yamamoto (he's so unidimensional in the manga/anime, seen only as the unbending head of the Gotei 13 with no indication of any personal or family life...and yet the way you have worked a niece into his life is still entirely consistent with his external official persona in the cannon). And Isane seems like such a good girl in the manga/anime, it's interesting to think she would have this underlying secret kept for the last 80 years, unbeknownst to even her captain.

Okay, so now i'm interested. A very good start!

I like the idea of steady because you've sucked me into this story. I'm looking forward to next week's chapter because this story has amazing potential!