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That was one of the hottest, best fics I have ever read. The fact that it was Kensei/Shuuhei made it that much better. Thanks for writing this and great work!

Oh my god!! My friend told me about this fanfic and I am in love with it! I am now totally a fan of your writing and this couple. Please tell me you are thinking of writing another story with this couple? If not please think about it. Now I am off to look for more stories concerning this couple. Thank you for writing this!!

Ooh Kensei why did you do that for?! You meanie! Thank you so much for updating!! One more chapter to go. ;_; You should think about writing more about this couple. There is just not enough around.

Okay, I'm finally in the mood for reviewing (meaning : not crying my heart out anymore).
This chapter was perfect. Absolutely perfect.

Seriously, write some KenShuu and you have LOVE. Make it angsty and sad and heartbreaking and you have SUPERLOVE. Add to the mix some pervy-nonchalant-Akon and you have SUPERDUPERLOVE.
I SUPERDUPERLOVE YOU AND THIS FIC !

And I'm already so sad the next chapter is going to be the last one ... Please-please-please, tell me you're planning to write more of this pairing (or maybe some AkonShuu ?). I truly love your writing skills and I know that, after this fic, I'll be content (more than content tbh, haha) reading Sex&Football but ... KenShuu is such a rare pairing, and you write it so well ; I really want you to write something else with them afterwards T____T
I'll draw crappy fanart in exchange ! xD

About this chapter, now.
Duh, the wet dream. Shuuhei, you naughty boy.
And him being a bit insecure afterwards ... afraid to tell Kensei or try anything. That was terribly cute, and a tidbit sad too.
Then Akon-sensei ! Yes, teach us about voyeurism now, haha. Ah, I love how you write him ; he's absolutely perfect. And I wonder if he truly is insensitive and very "clinical" about sex and his relationship with Shuuhei or ... if there is more ? Like him having feelings for this best friend ... Gaaah, you make me want AkonShuu now !
And then, the final scene. It breaks my heart everytime. I lost some pieces of it and they're too small to be put together, THANK YOU !

Now I want you to stop your studies/abandon your job/your family/your friends/give up your hobbies/... and keep writing for the rest of your life.
Please.

I hope you realize you killed me and broke my heart in a thousand pieces ? Yes ?
Okay then. I'm gonna cry some more and try and mend my poor bleeding heart, and then I'll come back for a better review. But now ? Duh, I'm a mess.

This is a really, really good fic so far! I can only imagine what the next two chapters are gonna be like - I really like how you're skipping a few decades, it gives Shuhei a chance to grow up without dragging things out too much, and it also lets us see how things change between them. This is quickly becoming my favorite Bleach pairing, and it's so hard to find fic of them, so when a good fic like this one comes out it's a relief. :D I hope poor Shuhei doesn't embarrass himself too much in the next chapter lol - the whole wet dreams thing frightens me..I wonder if he talks in his sleep haha. Well, whatever happens, I'm sure I'll enjoy it! ♥

Loving it! You are an awsome writer! Can't wait to read more from you

Oh my god. This story is so cute and hot at the same time. I love this pairing so much and I love you for writing this story.

I am seriously loving this story.
It's written very well. I love the idea for this story too.
I had never really thought much about this pairing,
but after reading this story I really like it.
I cannot wait to read the rest. Awesome work!

I love your depiction of Shuuhei's sexual awakening because, despite how he's growing up, so to speak, he's not exactly losing his innocence. I also had to laugh at Kensei's confusion and him wondering if it's Shuuhei's rebellious period. XDXD It's cute.

I'm eagerly awaiting the next part, then!