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for Growing Up Hisagi

by crunchysalad

schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know, if I had a penis it would definitely feel funny around Kensei too!

Loved Kensei's cluelessness about Shuuhei going through puberty, and how quickly Shinji figured out what was going on. LOVED how you described Shuuhei's first masturbatory explorations....and then you put Akon in! YAY! Go Akon! (He is rapidly going to become Shuuhei's go-to-boy for all things smexual).

Great chapter, can't wait for the next!
person Amy
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, Akon-sensei, teach us about sex !
You can't even start to imagine how satisfied I am right now. Shuuhei's descriptions of Kensei, his discoveries, the way he experiments stuff ... Hot damn, everything is perfect. And Kensei being completely oblivious, haha.
And of course, including Akon makes the whole thing even more perfect.

I'll probably come back to review some time later, when I stop thinking about hot men and their dicks in public baths. You're turning me into such a pervert, I swear. (Okay, okay, maybe I was already a bit perverted before ...).
This fic is definitely one of my faves ! Keep up the awesome work ! (And take the time you need for writing ; even if waiting is torture, I'm ready to wait years for your fic *_*)

PS : YAY ! Don't Stay Gold ! It's my absolute fav from her ! Gotta love the Mad Dog <3
And I think the one with the samurai is called Craft ; but I couldn't find the complete scanlation on internent =B But maybe that's because she hasn't finished writing/drawing it yet ?
person Amy
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hum, shit, sorry, my review got cut off ...
I was saying that the samurai one is called Craft, I think. But I couldn't find the complete scanlation on internet =B
person Shadow469
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how I hope this will be updated soon !
Loved it !
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aaww, gotta love Shuuhei. This is not going to be Shota/Pedo, right? 'Cause,.. just, no.. XD. Nomatter what, it's interesting, so I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Amy
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Me again =3
Just needed to repeat my words : I.Love.This.Fic.

And the friendship between Shuuhei and Akon is sweet (even if you didn't really describe it ; my brain started imagining a lot of things xD). I hope we'll see moments between those two in the later chapters =)

Aaaand. You need to update, like, now.
person brukleflesche (too lazy to sign in)
schedule August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
KenseiShuuhei is my absolute favorite Bleach pairing, and I'm so excited to see another fic about them (for there are mournfully few)! I think it's off to a fantastic start. Keep up the great work!
schedule August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You are friggin' AWESOME! I loved the care you put into in writing this, and cannot wait to read the rest of it. Please, please, please update soon!
person Amy
schedule August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I sincerely hope you're gonna update this regularly ! I'M IN LOVE !
This was so cute ! And so well-written !
The next chapters sound promising, so I hope we'll have them soon ^-^
person mevenia1
schedule August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this beginning, good pace and very accurate characterization. I've enjoyed your other stories so far but really like the plot/background for this pairing. Looking forward to the next chapter.