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by NovaAlexandria

person RyuTora
schedule June 9, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I created an account just so that I could review one of your stories. I have yet to finish this particular one and am waiting for you to add more to cradles in the sand, but I love it so far. I skip the M/M scenes and the dark scenes cause I'm not into that and truthfully I almost skim the M/F scenes to get to the Karin/Grimmjow story. I never thought of it but I love the pairing more than Karin/Toshiro. I hope that saying how much I dislike bad ends and how much I like this story says something.

person RyuTora
schedule June 9, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I created an account just so that I could review one of your stories. I have yet to finish this particular one and am waiting for you to add more to cradles in the sand, but I love it so far. I skip the M/M scenes and the dark scenes cause I'm not into that and truthfully I almost skim the M/F scenes to get to the Karin/Grimmjow story. I never thought of it but I love the pairing more than Karin/Toshiro. I hope that saying how much I dislike bad ends and how much I like this story says something.

person Anon
schedule February 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
All spare time has gone into reading this for the past several days. And homework time so now I desperately need to study for a test this afternoon. I'm torn between studying and finding part 2. I think finding part 2 will win.
person snowflower
schedule November 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
hum sexy. and as far as any arrancar three way tie. grimmjow, ulquiorra and starrk
person snowflower
schedule November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
*tickles grimkitty's fluffy ears* karin's right you are spoiled. (to nova, i couldn't stay away *wink*)
person snowflower
schedule November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i still love this story
person snowflower
schedule November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
be funny to see ulqui's face when grimmjow told him
person maroongrad
schedule October 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
How did I never read this before? :)
schedule February 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So, I'm finally getting around to reviewing this story, or well I suppose the first half of a very long story. To be perfectly honest with you, this isn't the first time I read some of this. About 3-4 years ago, I stumbled across this story just kind of browsing on fanfiction.net and saw the reference to a more detailed version of the story. The idea, of a KarinxGrimmjow intrigued me, as it was something I had never even considered before, and the story took me from the start. Back then though, I was dealing with personal issues, and had to step away as some parts of the story made me realize just how much I missed my significant other, as I was, and still am, away for college. I'm kind of rambling a bit, I hope that's okay, but apologies either way. Outside of spelling and grammatical errors that plague many writers, i saw few if any flaws in the writing.

The way you wrote this story, honestly spoke to me on a level that I have not felt in my lifetime. It brought memories of my own relationship and rivalries, and left me wanting more. I guess what I'm trying to say, is well done. I thoroughly enjoyed reading every page of this, simply for the amount of emotion you were able to convey simply through words. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story, and you'll hear from me again for sure at the end of Part 2, maybe sooner. Thanks again.

-bug_trevor
person Racine
schedule December 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It took me a month to get through this fan fiction and I loved every bit of it. You did a great job of making it believable as if it could really have been a part of the canon. Nice job. Can't wait to check out part 2.