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i really liked this chapter, i guess i like toshiro's character. I also like that you have been getting him more involved in the story as of late, keep up the good work.

Again a lovely chapter. Have to say Toshiro is not one of my favourite characters but I loved him in this chapter. Harrible is also being slowly swayed and shown here not to be just a mindless follower but someone that observes her surroundings and like the tide change and adjust accordingly. The last chapter has left me at a dark place with Gin in his cubby and this chapter gave me some hope that things will change now for the better. My favourite paragraph in this chapter: Privacy… who knew it would be such a turn-on for the little dragon? Then again, she told herself, every iceberg, no matter how large, melted in time. All the ocean had to do was surround it for long enough.

First off, beautiful chapter! The relationship there is perfect! I also agree that there should be more Karin/Grimmjow stories. And blackstorm has an art that illustrates the annoyance of calling Grimmjow's hair teal.

http://blackstorm.deviantart.com/#/d4rt2jq


Can't wait til next time.

I'm impressed and happy with what you did with Toshiro and Harrible, It's great that they are gonna turn on Aizen :3
Please tell are they going to join with Karin's group to fight him?

Aww poor Gin!!! and Unohana, I like how we see more of Aizen slowly losing his control and how the state of his Arrancars is affecting him. I just can't say that enough, to be honest I was worried for a minute you were going to off Gin! I've come to love him, he's awesome, and I really do enjoy how you get into everyone's point of view. Ajuga oh dear, she'll need to be careful now Aizen is going to be watching her. I love how you had Ajuga tell Hana it was so cute and Hana has matured and I look forward to seeing more of her as well.

I have to say I adore Karin and Grimmjow!!! They are my favorite! It's the best crack pairing!
Then I have to say it's Tesra and Tatsuki it's refreshing to see them together, they are so adorable together. It's a lovely change from the darkness that happens.
Third is Rangiku and Nnoitra they are great, I like their interatctions and how their relationship is getting better.

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! Keep up the great work! You and Black Fox are doing so well!

I was surprised by Nel and Renji's pairing but I was happy with it, and I want to see if when the claims are all said and done what will happen, who will stay in their 'relationships' or if things will change. (At least I'm assuming it will get there at some point)

I can't wait to see what happens with Ggio and Soi Fon, that is relationship I can't wait to see develop!

I hope you and your son are doing well!

Keep up the great work!

-Aviary

I just read your chapter involving Toshiro. I'm surprised you went with "aging' him. Especially when Kubo-sensei, himself, stated that Toshiro was full grown. I find myself somewhat disappointed. You've stated how much you dislike OCs because it screws around with the canon characters too much, but then ignore it. Plus, Halibel's hollow hole in located in her womb, ie, she doesn't have one. It'll be interesting to see how you're going to work around that. I love your creativity when it came to Szayel's children. The chapter was well written, but it is apparent that you have had trouble with this pairing. It feels like you are scrambling to establish their relationship too quickly rather than seeing it develop over several chapters like the other pairings.

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Well good to see a development in Toshiro and Harribel's relationship/pet-master thing, and it sucks that Rangiku is STILL getting chained up by that dick Noitora. It's a pity so few Arrancar have gotten their shit together and are still running on instinct and less ......pleasant emotions.

In order for Hallibel to fully abandon her loyalty to Aizen, he would need to cross (or attempt to) that last line of hollow law that she suspects he might. I expect, given that she seems to be reasonable, she would align herself with the growing opposition if that happened. That implies more horror in store and the probability that Szayel's family would be the target is high. I can't stand it anymore. I'm coming to expect the torture as a normal part of the story's progression. I hope that the transition to part 2 will show the growing strength of the rebels and give us hope for an overthrow and especially vengeance. Toshiro's expanding power is a portent of the developing force that will rise up and take back the Seireitei. It's heartening to see Toshiro's situation improve, at the very least, and perhaps he will feel more for Hallibel than he thought possible, if she gains his respect.

I cant believe you are ending this I love this story!

So glad you decided to continue it :3 It is truely awsome and I do love Karin and
grimjoww and Tatsuki and Tesla