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Please keep updating!!!!! this one and you ichi/grimm one please!!!
i love (and sometimes want to cry for the characters-byakuya especially) these guys and really do want to see this to the end.
Good luck with the baby nad writing!
-Savvy

For me it's GRimmjow/Karin. Grimmjow is my favorite character, and it's really refreshing to not see him coupled to Ichigo or Orihime for once. I love seeing him paired with Karin or Tatsuki, since they are both strong females.

D: Poor Gin! He and Szayel have paid for their sins a thousand times over! D: And poor Ajuga, knowing someone she cared about was hurt because of her! You have not only made Aizen a bigger monster than he was in canon, you have made me hate him a thousand times more.

Also, I'm glad to hear you intend to finish both parts of this story!

Look I've never really reviewed but for the love of God plz update

Yay! Tesra and Tatsuki. All of the pairings are great but this one was very unexpected and well written. Something I thought was going to happen in this chapter, was that maybe Gin and Unohana started to care for each other more deeply, romantically. Simply because being put in that kind of position, they have no one else but each other behind the castle doors. Everyone else can wonder what happens in their private chambers, but only Unohana and Gin know the truth. Seeing as Rangiku is adjusting to her life, perhaps it's time Gin found some semblance of peace. That could just be me, Gin has been my favorite character since he first appeared in the anime. Thank you for continuing. :) I am very excited to read part two!

Thank you so much for the fast and fabulous update. Even though I enjoy crying in empathy for well-loved characters (which I did), I am again tortured into waiting for Gin's rescue (like Byakuya). When that happens, I think Orihime should be able to reject the damage done to him as well as anyone who has been abused and 'punished' by Aizen. (have you noticed nobody calls him Sousuke? cause nobody loves him!) I'd like to see her reject everything that he ever had a hand in and erase his existence from history, maybe even from people's minds, but that could lead to a 'repeat the mistakes from your past' scenario.

I don't see the pairings in this story as crack because you did such a good job of making their connections believable, given the circumstances of this plot. I really like the Grimmjow/Karin pairing. Such a strong, passionate duo. They can easily create problems between themselves to add intrigue and drama. Oh, can you give us some more Grimm inner-thoughts? It feels like he's got less screen time, lately. While Tatsuki/Tesra are wonderful, there isn't much room for playing around as they relatively conflict free. I'd like to see what might come of Renji/Nel and Rangiku/Nnoitra as there is still room for development with them.

This chapter broke my heart, poor Gin, and i know i have said this before but holy shit! 10 years, I am surprised there hasn't been any mass suicide attempts from the surviving populace. speaking of the current population, you may have already answered this so i may have to reread but was there ever a number given to the amount of Shinigami and Arrancar currently residing in SS? Also, and i have asked this before so sorry if it seems like i am pestering you but will we get any more info on the daily lives of the other claimed Shinigami(OC or a Pov from Soi Fon) and how they have handled and been treated for the past decade? Outside of Karin's "group" I honestly can't see them EVER being okay with the way things are, mass murder and rape(claim or w/e to some) although you have stated that it has toned down, leaves a permanent stain and many survivors are probably wishing a bloody death to the Arrancars and Aizen. This story is awesome and the scene with Gin and Unohana Felt sooooo raw and actually brought a tear to my eye and it looks like Ajuga's eyes are being opened to the reality of the world she lives in. Keep up the good work.

karin and grimmjow¡¡ i consider the other couples sweet, but we dont read them enough to make them worty of "shockingly enjoying", i have read 3 fics so far of this odd couple and have liked them all, although this one is by far the one where those two have more character development.

Wow....just when I think I can't feel any more sorry for Gin than I already do, I end up feeling more sorry for the poor guy. :(

Thanks for another great update, and the terrific new that you'll be continuing the story with Part 2 after this ends! *hurray!*

Ok I have been reading since the first day I found this, and I have been reading ever since. Now I'd like to ask if you can continue this story with part two, the reason I'm asking is because I found this the only real fanfiction of Bleach to be on point, and well accurate. I love what you have done with the characters and then even how they have grown. I also understand that you have a little one and I respect that in fact how is the little guy. Anyway I'd like to formerly ask for you to continue writing this story as I look forward to reading your work and this story. I don't write many reviews as I find that I'm not that good at what to say, in fact it took me 4 hours just to write this review. I am humble though that you even took the time to write this and beg no plead with you to continue, and I'll try in the furture to write more reviews.

Tori