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for Prize of Victory

by NovaAlexandria

person A Fan
schedule September 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Reading, and aside from the fact that Yammy still lives, (please make his extra painful, I'm talking worse then whatever you have planned for Aizen) loving the story, please don't stop writing, definitely looking forward to future chapters when you can find the time to write them
person Rin
schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I feel really bad now that you are questioning if you should work on part two. I admit that I am a ghost reader but I also apologize. You work very hard writing this amazing story but never get enough feedback. I love your story very much so and it would be sad if you didn't continue it, but I also know that you have a life outside of fanfiction that includes taking care of your child. Therefore, I believe that you should take as much time as necessary in-between writing part two so that you don't feel stressed or bothered about putting up new chapters. I really do hope that you don't give up on this story completely but I also hope that you focus on yourself and your child before continuing. I wish youand your family the best in health and happiness :)
person Rawth
schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know u are feeling a little unappreciated for this fic and wanted to let u know that my husband and I hang off every update. We also love ur story the real king, but I fear its near completion. No matter how much I wish it would go on and on. But I wanted u to know we support u and completely understand why ur so busy. Feel free to take whatever breaks u need. But please promise to finish. Why stop now when you've come so far.. u write so beautifully and have such an awesome plot working here.
person Yeather
schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would be terribly sad if you stopped writing this story before Yammy and everyone got what was coming to them. I have been reading this for a long time so naturally I've been waiting patiently for that part to come. I understand that you have a lot on your plate and I was just letting you know there are still people reading this who don't review. I love this story and I would love to see the downfall of those horrible bastards that need to be brutally murdered. I hope you decide to continue! Even if it takes a long ass time this story is worth the wait.
person seberu
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm de-lurking to review! I never review on AFF.net because the site is clunky and hard to manage, so I never even bother. I hate that there isn't a way (that I've found) for there to be an alert sent when a new chapter is up. I usually try to check up once a week though. Back to the story, I hope you continue to write and finish it. I love this story and The Real King. I love the idea of this darker storyline, where Soul Society didn't win.
person Kristin
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please continue your story, Prize of Victory and The Real King are my favorite stories on here. I totally understand not having a lot of time to do extra things, with a little one, especaially a newborn, I have two kiddos myself. This story is so awesome and you are such an amazing writer, you have to finish it please, please, please. I have to know what is going to happen with everything and everyone. I might not be able to read as often as I was, but I will always look for your stories on here and make sure to read them, they are that great and I really love them, and if it takes longer for you to update, I won't mind one bit, as long as I get to read them. I like these Household Changes chapters, they are great for updating us. The Byakuya household change chapter is my favorite because he got to see that Renji has his soul back and figure out that Aizen isn't sitting as comfortably on the throne as everyone thinks he is. Please continue writing these stories, you have a great talent and these stories would be missed greatly :)
person hitsu
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for you efforts! I find your story very interesting and I would be happy to read its continuation!
person moodymel
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. It was very well written and really deep. I do hope that you continue this story, because I can't wait to see the Horrible end that you have in store for Yammy and Aizen. My vote is for more please.
person iloveseiran
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating! While it's interesting to see how things are working in the different households, I hope we can see more action soon. :)
person gollumsfriend
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM


I'm very sad to hear you're considering wrapping up "part 1" in a couple more chapters, and not writing the intended "part 2" due to a lack of reviews.

I do understand how limited your free (and writing) time is now that you have a baby....but please don't just ditch the entire ending of this story based on number of reviews.

I have read every single chapter at least once, and some of my more favorite chapters at least 3-4 times. I just feel that leaving a review that says "Well done, loved the new chapter" each time is kinda lame on my part, so I don't do it.I've been a faithful reader of this story for quite some time, and I apologize for not reviewing each and every chapter. I'll do my best to so such a thing from now on, if you need it to prove that you do indeed have readers. Your hit count should be proof enough of that, but...I understand some writers prefer high review counts instead.