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for Prize of Victory

by NovaAlexandria

schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I've been reading this story, considering the amount of chapters as well as how long since it had been written! And now you've finally finishing up in a few chapters. That's great!
person Nightqueen
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Please,Please continue on with the story! I love it! All the characters have become so familiar and I look forward to every update. The story is powerful and so creative, I find myself loving characters I never thought I would. You've created such an amazing Bleach inspired world that I consider oftentimes better that the original Manga. I would be heart broken if I could discover how this part ends and how the whole story come together into its final conclusion. I don't want to sound selfish, but I would sorely miss this fabulous piece of writing if you were to stop.
person Raymy
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story was one of the first few 'epic' fan fictions I've read. I hadn't been reviewing much then but vowed to review everything I read recently as I know how lack of reviews affect the writer. I think I reviewed this one after I read the entirety of what was available so didn't contribute to each chapter prior. From now on, I will be. I think there are at least 5 times more readers than reviewers (could be 100 times) if you compare reviews to hits. I guess many people don't want to review but still enjoy the read. I understand your frustration as to whether to put effort into something that isn't reaching many people. That is your decision. I hope you write for yourself, first and foremost, though. To share your stories is for our benefit but hopefully not your sole motivator. I would be extremely happy to continue to read and review your updates. I've enjoyed this story immensely and it prompted me to read 'The Real King' and 'Breaking a Butterfly'. I hope you could be content to receive 6 or so reviews for each chapter while knowing that there is actually so many more readers. Hope this helps.

I'm very grateful that your chapters are so long. It gives me a chance to sink back into the story and as Yammy would do, gorge myself on the goings on of the characters. This chapter made me happy to see Byakuya find out about Renji. I recall my earlier review had said that it would further boost his inner recovery once he found out but I had neglected to think about the worry it would cause him. Thanks for pointing that out. Considering that he noticed the ulterior motive for Aizen's party, I wonder how many others made the connection. Byakuya certainly has his hands full walking on eggshells around Yammy. It's somewhat tortuous waiting for some improvement in his situation. So, great update, and looking forward to more.
person Kalla
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE!!! EVEN IF YOU HAVE TO HAVE ONE UPDATE A MONTH!!!
person soul
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
No no please don't stop this is one of the greatest works I've ever read
person Vi
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Still reading, sorry I haven't been responding to often, just been so busy of late.
person Viv Clark
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Started reading it on fanfiction.net but switched to this site. Please don't stop writing.
person Aryun
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I read! I'm a sad sorry non-reviewer but your writing is stunning. Both the characterizations and the plot are fantastic and it's made me cry, laugh and cry even more. I love it a lot and it's, quite possibly, one of my favorite Bleach fanfictions. Everything is quite believeable and highly thought out. I really do enjoy and would love to see the ending of the piece.
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please keep going, I'm a big fan and I want to see how it ends.

I don't think you should go by the number of reviews, some people like me come in and read from beginning to end. Maybe the people that read it like it but just don't feel like offering reviews.
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*Raises hand* I read this and refresh periodically just waiting for an update. (It's permanently open in my tabs) ^^ I just don't have an account or a tendency to review as I usually lack the time........^^; But if it will motivate you I will make the effort to review!