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This story was a crazy, torturous ride from begining to end. I haven't read too many stories that kept that sickly feeling in the pit of my stomach, which only represents how well you captured the essence of every day torment these characters had to go through durring their enslavement. The constant raping was a little unnerving. And, Although I did enjoy your more affectionate love scenes and loving scenes, I never got a complete sense that parties involved truely 'loved' eachother wholeheartedly. It felt like the enslaved more or less acquiesced to their predicament and some slipped into more of a Stockholm syndrome of acceptance. Maybe it's the animalistic tendencies of the Espada that made it seem more like they cared for their Claimed more like objects than partners. I know that there are many instances where that is true in the pairings, but I also still feel the most important paired Espada's (e.g. Grimmjow, Ulquiorra, Szayel, and even on a smaller level Tesra) 'humanity' has so be flushed out more in order for me to have a more fulfilled feeling about their respective relationships. On the whole, this is a very well written and detailed story. I enjoyed reading this during the last month and have a great understanding of the world you created. Gonna start the second part tonight and hopefully all my little concerns will be satisfied along with some much needed satisfactory reversals of fortunes- Crue, torturous DEATH to Yammi! Relief for Rangiku! Abolishment of Aizen and solace for Gin! Onward!

Ugh, just like a stupid man to not give foreplay. Worst! I've read up to here so far and I usually don't comment on chapters from so long ago, but I just needed to put my two cents in. Can't wait to read the rest, great fic.

This is a beautifully written story! On to part 2;)

Wow. I have never been so happy to stumble across something as I was last week. I was browsing through some art on deviantART when I came across one of blackstorm's illustrations for your fic. I've been on a major GrimmIchi kick lately and thought the idea of Grimmjow with Ichigo's sister was interesting. I've hardly been able to do anything else but read this amazing piece of work since I found it. This was amazingly well done. Major kodos to you and your beta. I can't wait to start to read the second part (although, I may have to wait until after exams lest I be too distracted) to find out what happens next! You've developed so many different characters so well that there were points I would forget there was a main pairing. Superb work and thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece of art with us!

I can tell you actually spent time hashing and rehashing this story. It was a very good read. I never thought I'd ship Grimmjow and Karin, you proved me wrong. Kudos!

I can tell you actually spent time hashing and rehashing this story. It was a very good read. I never thought I'd ship Grimmjow and Karin, you proved me wrong. Kudos!

grimmjow is such a moron. and hiyori i just wanna kick her ass in. to the question: grimmjow's fault

haha omg i would be laughing at a sullen grimmjow jaegerjaques turned grimmjow kurosaki

i gotta say well done hime. congrats nova on ur pregnancy. currently 11/15/13 as of i am 22 weeks along with twins at 24 yrs old. i wish you luck.i had become pregnant before but lost the baby. i got hit by a car. but i did name my child: cana marie. if you have seen fairy tail then you know where cana came from. and to ur question: i have a thing i dont like when ppl refer to toshiro as shorty and byakuya as a feminine male. reply back if you want: cool_ash23@hotmail.com

that was pure putrid aizen! i hate sharing same birthday as him! ugh .