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September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I feel ashamed that I haven't reviewed yet. I have been reading this story since chapter 1 and I always find myself eager for the next chapter. I really hope you choose to finish the story. I have been a dedicated reader but I should have also been dedicated to letting you know how wonderful your story is, and that I appreciate the time you spend writing it. Please reconsider finishing Prize of Victory. And congratulations on your little boy!!! :)
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September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just wanna say I really love this story cause I usually check almost every week and even sometimes everyday to see if there is a new chapter up. I really love the Karin and Grimmjow pairing, they're my favorite pairing thanks to this story. This is my all time favorite fanfic that I have read so far! Sorry about not reviewing up till now. I don't really like writing reviews but if it'll make you happy, I'll be happy to leave a review here and there. I just want to say I'd really love it if you do continue but that's up to you cause I don't want to make you do something you wouldn't want. My last statement is "yes I'm reading this story and I won't ever stop"
Great story and hope your life is doing well. :)
Great story and hope your life is doing well. :)
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September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story and i love it!!! i started reading this on fanfiction and i couldnt get enought of it !!!! when i read ur profile that u had the rest on here i went right to it. do feel bad if u dont get reviews it doesnt mean no one reading i check everyday on fanfiction and adult fanfiction for updates doesnt matter to me if the have little to big reviews. if is good i will read to the end waiting for the nest chapter like crazy!!!! update soon ur a real good writer!!! DON'T GIVE UP THIS WONDERFUL STORY!!!!!!! u should put a author's note on the fanfiction story prize of victory so others can come and read the rest here!!!!!!
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September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING!! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. I check this story everyday and I have reread the story more than I can remember. Sorry for not reviewing up till now but I really love this story. Please keep continuing cause I'm reading and I know a bunch of others are too. Hope your doing well and late congratulations on your baby!
-from a big fan
-from a big fan
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September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hope everything is going well with you and you've just been busy : )
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August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 review
I always liked the UlquiHime pairing. There was just something, about the stoic, mysterious Espada, and the young, innocent human that gave me tingles. In the manga, the two impacted each others lives, especially when Orihime teaches him about the heart. I really wish Kubo wouldn't have killed him, but I'm hoping by ichigo killing Ulquiorra in the manga, Kubo will have Ulquiorra be sent to soul society since, Ichigo did in a way cleanse his soul (I know, wishful thinking on my part)
I really feel that you have Inoue and Ulquiorra very much in character in this chapter, and I love how possessive Ulquiorra is of his "prize". I love how he tells her- "You are mine.” I could have totally seen him saying something like that in the manga.
The rape scene was written well, and believable. From Ulquiorra's viewpoint I can see why he felt the need to assert his dominance over his "prize". I like how he moves Inoue's hairpins to the side that way they don't get damaged. Though he is not conscious of what he has done, I think it was his subconscious wanting to make sure nothing happened to her or her powers.
I really like how you talked about his reiatsu chaining and mingling with her reiatsu. I also liked the part "It was a beautiful song. Her little cries each thrust, the sound of their bodies slapping together, the beat of his wings as he used them to balance on her better. " very poetic in my opinion.
The first chapter was brilliantly written, and I think it set ups the changes that will come about now that Aizen has won.
I always liked the UlquiHime pairing. There was just something, about the stoic, mysterious Espada, and the young, innocent human that gave me tingles. In the manga, the two impacted each others lives, especially when Orihime teaches him about the heart. I really wish Kubo wouldn't have killed him, but I'm hoping by ichigo killing Ulquiorra in the manga, Kubo will have Ulquiorra be sent to soul society since, Ichigo did in a way cleanse his soul (I know, wishful thinking on my part)
I really feel that you have Inoue and Ulquiorra very much in character in this chapter, and I love how possessive Ulquiorra is of his "prize". I love how he tells her- "You are mine.” I could have totally seen him saying something like that in the manga.
The rape scene was written well, and believable. From Ulquiorra's viewpoint I can see why he felt the need to assert his dominance over his "prize". I like how he moves Inoue's hairpins to the side that way they don't get damaged. Though he is not conscious of what he has done, I think it was his subconscious wanting to make sure nothing happened to her or her powers.
I really like how you talked about his reiatsu chaining and mingling with her reiatsu. I also liked the part "It was a beautiful song. Her little cries each thrust, the sound of their bodies slapping together, the beat of his wings as he used them to balance on her better. " very poetic in my opinion.
The first chapter was brilliantly written, and I think it set ups the changes that will come about now that Aizen has won.
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August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 review
“I have Claimed you, your soul belongs to me now. Your body is owned by me, your reiatsu is owned by me, your being is owned by me.” that is something Ulquiorra would say. once again I applaud you for keeping him and Inoue in character.
Claims are interesting idea, one I have not heard of before. The claimed not being able to move, unless their master/the one who claimed them allow them to.
I love how Inoue panics because she doesn't see her hairpins (very important to her since they were a give from her brother and the source of her powers, i too would be frantic if i lost something as important as that) only for Ulquiorra to just give them to her- "Her searched ended when a fist crossed her eyesight and she stared at it in shock as the fingers unfurled to reveal both hairpins completely fine. She sighed in relief and took them, mumbling a truthful thank you and preceded to return them to their rightful places." I like how she thanks him for it. It is just like Orhime to remain civil/polite even after he forces himself on her. Orihime is not someone to be rude/mean/vindictive to someone who has hurt her (ex. When Loly and Menoly beat her, only for Grimmjow to come and beat them, then Orihime heals them even though they didn't deserve it).
I'm glad Ulquiorra allowed her to heal Renji and Byakuya.
I'm glad Grimmjow took Yuzu and Karin with him. At least they will be safe, even though he plans on using the as bait.
“I have Claimed you, your soul belongs to me now. Your body is owned by me, your reiatsu is owned by me, your being is owned by me.” that is something Ulquiorra would say. once again I applaud you for keeping him and Inoue in character.
Claims are interesting idea, one I have not heard of before. The claimed not being able to move, unless their master/the one who claimed them allow them to.
I love how Inoue panics because she doesn't see her hairpins (very important to her since they were a give from her brother and the source of her powers, i too would be frantic if i lost something as important as that) only for Ulquiorra to just give them to her- "Her searched ended when a fist crossed her eyesight and she stared at it in shock as the fingers unfurled to reveal both hairpins completely fine. She sighed in relief and took them, mumbling a truthful thank you and preceded to return them to their rightful places." I like how she thanks him for it. It is just like Orhime to remain civil/polite even after he forces himself on her. Orihime is not someone to be rude/mean/vindictive to someone who has hurt her (ex. When Loly and Menoly beat her, only for Grimmjow to come and beat them, then Orihime heals them even though they didn't deserve it).
I'm glad Ulquiorra allowed her to heal Renji and Byakuya.
I'm glad Grimmjow took Yuzu and Karin with him. At least they will be safe, even though he plans on using the as bait.
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August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 review
I glad Ichigo was able to escape to the human world. Although now fights between Ichigo and Ulquiorra lead to Ulquiorra coming home to reinforce his claim in Orihime. I can understand why Ulquiorra does this, every time he comes back from fighting with Ichigo. Every time he confronts Ichigo, he is reminded of Orihime's love for Ichigo. He probably thinks Ichigo is trying to get back Orihime, forgetting that Ichigo is probably also trying to save anyone else who may still be alive in Soul Society, not just Orihime.
I agree with Tatsuki's theory of why he changes forms when he takes her- "Tatsuki was more a believer that the form change came from his lose of control over his emotions and the change was part of the manifestation of that."
His loss of control of emotions, especially any rage/fury he feels at the thought of Ichigo trying to take Orihime away from him, is something that could trigger his release form. Ulquiorra believes Orihime to belong to him,which she does according to the Claim he has over her, and therefore the thought of someone taking away what is his would make him lose control.
The thought of Ulquiorra going down on Orihime is quite hot- "Any other thoughts were quickly erased from her mind and a whimper of pleasure found its way out of her throat. Her eyes darted down to the pair of horns and mop of black hair between her legs. As if sensing her he stopped to lock his green eyes onto hers. She found herself breathless and he licked his lips before crawling up her body. She turned her gaze away from him."
I also like how you write Ulquiorra's thoughts especially- "The only time he could get relief was in his release and when she was moaning and panting beneath him. It gave him a feeling he couldn’t describe that left him wanting more." and "He enjoyed the taste of her core but more so he took pleasure in hearing her whimper, knowing that all her thoughts were on him and him alone. Perhaps that was why his instincts enjoyed doing this to her. For the brief time he used her he knew her thoughts were solely on him."
Wow just wow, you write such awesome/hot scenes between the two.
I'm glad that Orihime has her best friend with her, for support. Though I'm sure Tatsuki hates not being able to stop Uquiorra from forcing himself on her, especially since in the manga, Tatsuki has always protected her from bullies and perverts (Chizuru). I'm very happy Ulquiorra took Tatsuki with them. He didn't have to do it, but he did and I think by allowing Tatsuki to live with them , he is showing he does cares about Orihime.
Great chapter!
I glad Ichigo was able to escape to the human world. Although now fights between Ichigo and Ulquiorra lead to Ulquiorra coming home to reinforce his claim in Orihime. I can understand why Ulquiorra does this, every time he comes back from fighting with Ichigo. Every time he confronts Ichigo, he is reminded of Orihime's love for Ichigo. He probably thinks Ichigo is trying to get back Orihime, forgetting that Ichigo is probably also trying to save anyone else who may still be alive in Soul Society, not just Orihime.
I agree with Tatsuki's theory of why he changes forms when he takes her- "Tatsuki was more a believer that the form change came from his lose of control over his emotions and the change was part of the manifestation of that."
His loss of control of emotions, especially any rage/fury he feels at the thought of Ichigo trying to take Orihime away from him, is something that could trigger his release form. Ulquiorra believes Orihime to belong to him,which she does according to the Claim he has over her, and therefore the thought of someone taking away what is his would make him lose control.
The thought of Ulquiorra going down on Orihime is quite hot- "Any other thoughts were quickly erased from her mind and a whimper of pleasure found its way out of her throat. Her eyes darted down to the pair of horns and mop of black hair between her legs. As if sensing her he stopped to lock his green eyes onto hers. She found herself breathless and he licked his lips before crawling up her body. She turned her gaze away from him."
I also like how you write Ulquiorra's thoughts especially- "The only time he could get relief was in his release and when she was moaning and panting beneath him. It gave him a feeling he couldn’t describe that left him wanting more." and "He enjoyed the taste of her core but more so he took pleasure in hearing her whimper, knowing that all her thoughts were on him and him alone. Perhaps that was why his instincts enjoyed doing this to her. For the brief time he used her he knew her thoughts were solely on him."
Wow just wow, you write such awesome/hot scenes between the two.
I'm glad that Orihime has her best friend with her, for support. Though I'm sure Tatsuki hates not being able to stop Uquiorra from forcing himself on her, especially since in the manga, Tatsuki has always protected her from bullies and perverts (Chizuru). I'm very happy Ulquiorra took Tatsuki with them. He didn't have to do it, but he did and I think by allowing Tatsuki to live with them , he is showing he does cares about Orihime.
Great chapter!
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August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 Review
Karin is alot like her brother, she is very selfless putting others above herself.
Karin is one of my favorites in the manga. I think it's because she has much in common with Rukia (my favorite female character). They both have over protective brothers (Ichigo and Byakuya respectively), they are both strong women in my opinion seen when Karin takes over Ichigo's shinigami duties when Ichigo loses his powers, as well as when Rukia takes on the ninth Espada and defeats him, they aren't damsels in distress, they are warriors. Rukia looking out for Ichigo when she willingly goes with Byakuya and Renji in order to spare Ichigo's life. Also when they go rescue Orihime in Hueco Mundo, Ichigo doesn't want to separate from Rukia because he wants to protect her, while Rukia rationally tells him he doesn't need to protect, that they can rescue Orhime faster if they separated. Also when the ninth Espada told Rukia to give her life for taking Kaien's, she was willing to do so on,y after she rescued her friend Orihime. Rukia is selfless often putting others ahead of her, and I view Karin as the same, taking over Ichigo's duties, protecting him and her family, after everything Ichigo has done for her and Yuzu.
Not that I'm putting down Orihime, Orihime has her own unique abilities that are important as well, it's just that she is kindhearted and is one who looks for peaceful situations rather than resorts to violence (she reminds me alot of Unohana). Plus Orihime's powers are quite powerful, and her abilities are unique, no way is she weak. I love how Rukia had taken Orihime to Soul Society to train, after Urahara told Orhime she would be useless.
I must admit I never thought of the grimmKarin pairing. The two never met in the manga, so the pairing never popped into my head. I think just like I fell in love with the GrimmRuki with "Crossbreeding the Future" I'm going to fall in love with this pairing as well.
I love the way you write Grimmjow, he is so in character, I can see him acting the way he is acting in this fic.
The lemon with Grimmjow and Karin was quite hot, very well written. I love the scene, love Grimmjow's thoughts on her- “Probably because the other broads gasps are for show to try and please me so I don’t rip their fucking heads off. Hers are honest. Innocent.”
The scene between Grimmjow and Karin is so hot, scene was realistic, sexy, and beliveable. makes me wish you would write a GrimmRuki one shot too, where Rukia loses her virginity to Grimmjow. But I know your busy.
I like how you write Yuzu. The twins care about each other quite alot that they don't want to make it harder for the other.
Great job in this chapter.
Karin is alot like her brother, she is very selfless putting others above herself.
Karin is one of my favorites in the manga. I think it's because she has much in common with Rukia (my favorite female character). They both have over protective brothers (Ichigo and Byakuya respectively), they are both strong women in my opinion seen when Karin takes over Ichigo's shinigami duties when Ichigo loses his powers, as well as when Rukia takes on the ninth Espada and defeats him, they aren't damsels in distress, they are warriors. Rukia looking out for Ichigo when she willingly goes with Byakuya and Renji in order to spare Ichigo's life. Also when they go rescue Orihime in Hueco Mundo, Ichigo doesn't want to separate from Rukia because he wants to protect her, while Rukia rationally tells him he doesn't need to protect, that they can rescue Orhime faster if they separated. Also when the ninth Espada told Rukia to give her life for taking Kaien's, she was willing to do so on,y after she rescued her friend Orihime. Rukia is selfless often putting others ahead of her, and I view Karin as the same, taking over Ichigo's duties, protecting him and her family, after everything Ichigo has done for her and Yuzu.
Not that I'm putting down Orihime, Orihime has her own unique abilities that are important as well, it's just that she is kindhearted and is one who looks for peaceful situations rather than resorts to violence (she reminds me alot of Unohana). Plus Orihime's powers are quite powerful, and her abilities are unique, no way is she weak. I love how Rukia had taken Orihime to Soul Society to train, after Urahara told Orhime she would be useless.
I must admit I never thought of the grimmKarin pairing. The two never met in the manga, so the pairing never popped into my head. I think just like I fell in love with the GrimmRuki with "Crossbreeding the Future" I'm going to fall in love with this pairing as well.
I love the way you write Grimmjow, he is so in character, I can see him acting the way he is acting in this fic.
The lemon with Grimmjow and Karin was quite hot, very well written. I love the scene, love Grimmjow's thoughts on her- “Probably because the other broads gasps are for show to try and please me so I don’t rip their fucking heads off. Hers are honest. Innocent.”
The scene between Grimmjow and Karin is so hot, scene was realistic, sexy, and beliveable. makes me wish you would write a GrimmRuki one shot too, where Rukia loses her virginity to Grimmjow. But I know your busy.
I like how you write Yuzu. The twins care about each other quite alot that they don't want to make it harder for the other.
Great job in this chapter.
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August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 review
I love the morning after, especially when Grimmjowwakes up and finds himself still inside Karin.
The shower scene was funny especially, when he expects Karin to wash his back. Karin is so lucky she has Grimmjow
It's a good thing Gimmjow is training her. I love how he ends the sessions- "He always ended their sparring sessions with her on her back and him pinning her to the ground.".
Can't believe those Arrancar tried To take Karin and Yuzu. It's a good thing Grimmjow got there on time.
It was also nice of him to go get Orihime to go check in Karin and Yuzu. I think he is getting attached to Karin.
I love Ulquiorra, he realizes his woman isnt at home so he goes to where she is to take her back with him. I'm glad Karin stood up to him and told him his reiatsu was hurting Yuzu. She is just like Ichigo.
Also I give Tatsuki props for standing up to him, and explaining things. Most would be to scared to stand up,to him.
I love the morning after, especially when Grimmjowwakes up and finds himself still inside Karin.
The shower scene was funny especially, when he expects Karin to wash his back. Karin is so lucky she has Grimmjow
It's a good thing Gimmjow is training her. I love how he ends the sessions- "He always ended their sparring sessions with her on her back and him pinning her to the ground.".
Can't believe those Arrancar tried To take Karin and Yuzu. It's a good thing Grimmjow got there on time.
It was also nice of him to go get Orihime to go check in Karin and Yuzu. I think he is getting attached to Karin.
I love Ulquiorra, he realizes his woman isnt at home so he goes to where she is to take her back with him. I'm glad Karin stood up to him and told him his reiatsu was hurting Yuzu. She is just like Ichigo.
Also I give Tatsuki props for standing up to him, and explaining things. Most would be to scared to stand up,to him.