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Chapter 6 review

Awesome chapter, love the confrontation between Grimmjow and Ulquiorra. I'm glad Grimmjow explained some things to Ulquiorra.

I like when Ulquiorra told Grimmjow- “Her talents are not to be wasted on trash.”, it shows that Ulquiorra is starting to value Orihime (in my opinion), since he doesn't twang her to bother with those he views as trash.

I feel for Ulquiorra, he is in love with Orihime, just doesn't know how to properly express his emotions to her, since he didn't lve anything before her. Love is something that is new to him, and if he thinks she is thinking about someone other than him, his jealousy and emotions kind of get out of his control.

I'm glad Ulquiorra asked Grimm for advice to fix the situation between him and Orihime.

I love Grimm's cockiness- “Of course. But I have yet to find a woman who didn’t want a piece of this.” but its true, any woman would want Grimmjow.

I really love the changes you are making with Ulquiorra, I think if he wouldn't have been killed in the manga, and Aizen would have been killed, Orihime would have been able to make him into an ally.

I like how he apologizes to Orihime, and how he doesn't force her. I love the discussion they have about love, and how she helps him realize he has come to love her and respect her- “That could also be a sign.” She conceded though. “Do you respect me for who I am?”

“Yes.” He answered.

“Also a sign. If I asked you now not to have sex with me, would you?” She asked.

I also like how he tells her that he would try- “It would be difficult, but I would try.” He finally admitted.

I love how Karin goes to Grimmjow without him calling for her, and she wraps the injuries he got from the his "discussion" with Ulquiorra.

The lemon between the two was quite hot, especially as she gives him oral (you are bringing out my inner pervert). Also when she gets on top and does not let him flip her onto her hands and knees. Again awesome lemon, love to see Karin take charge in the bedroom.

I like how Karin is used to him wrapping his arms around her to sleep.

Golden eyes, must be Yoruichi.

Chapter 7 review

Poor Shunsui, I liked him. I'm glad he was able to have Stark claim Ukitake as well as take care of Nanao. After reading stark with Unohana in Crossbreeding the Future, I had gotten used to that pairing.

And Nanao was pregnant with Shunsui's child. Poor Nanao and Ukitake they must miss Shunsui alot. I'm glad Stark is taking care of the three.

I love the interaction between Lillinette, Ukitake and Hana. Ukitake is like Hana's cool uncle. I love how he gives both girls lollipops, reminds me of the anime where he gives Toshiro candy.

"Neither one of them ‘enjoyed’ doing this, but it was the only way Aizen would not only suffer him to live, but to stay in command of his Division. ", kind of feel bad for both Ukitake and Stark, having to do this, when they would rather not do it. But it is good that they do it, I don't want to imagine what the consequences that would come about if Stark didn't reinforce his claim. Other arrancars who are crueler/meaner, would no doubt want to claim Ukitake, and would no doubt.

I'm not one for yaoi (I don't have anything against yaoi, it's just not my cup of tea), but I like the way you write incorporate into the plot, where it is believable, especially since the only powerful female Espada is Tia. And judging by how Tia behaved in "Crossbreeding the Future" I wouldn't want Ukitake with her, due to his health.

I like how Tsark asks Ukitake if he sure he wants to this- “Are you sure you want to do this?” Starrk asked, as he had the other four times.", so they only share a bed, once a year. I always figured both Ukitake and Stark as straight, so I can see them only reinforcing the claim when it needs to be reinforced.

I'm glad Ukitake isn't in too much pain, and he gets at least some pleasure from it- "Each forward thrust poured more of the Espada’s reiatsu into him, and each thrust left his body sweating from the intense pleasure of it."

Really good chapel, helps explain what has happened with Nanao, Ukitake, and Stark. I love how Lilinette is showing Hana how to pester Stark.

I really think you captured Ukitake and Stark well.

I have enjoyed your story so much. It was better than reading the books that come out today. I am glad that your little one is doing good and that you are well. I cannot wait till the next part comes out. The story is so good and unique. I will be readng your other stories now that I have finished this one for now. Thank you for the wonderful entertainment.

their baby is super cute/funny

I've been reading your story and I love all of it so far, I think it's interesting the way you had Karin beat up Nnoritora :D all in all great story!

I am enjoying this story I found it today and have not been abe to stop readig. Your writing is so good a person does not have to struggle tounderstand and the pairings are interesting

This was also another great update. I never liked Noitra, but he's still not as bad as Yammy. Thanks for updating. I personally know how busy and tired you must be. Hang in there. I look forward to more.

I might have missed it but what happened to Kukaku Shiba?

Hmmm ... So neither one feels they'd be parent material. Sounds like they both need to see if they can rise to the challenge, even if it happens unexpectedly. I'd honestly love to see how Nnoitra would change if he found out that a badly battle wounded Rangeku is pregnant. My guess is that he'd put her on a pedestal and treat her like the most fragile creature in the universe... But that is just my guess. His denial in regard to being a daddy sounded like he was trying to convince himself so he wouldn't be disappointed if it didn't happen.

another thing that just popped into my mind, assuming the good guys do eventually get rid of Aizen, whats gonna happen to the arrancar population that isn't with karin's little click? I'm assuming her people will be protected for the most part but after 10 freaking years of the hell they have been put through (rapes,murders etc) I just dont see the surviving shini population and Ichigo's crew letting them get off scott free. Also is ichigo's accelerated skill advancement in this story? cause if so shouldn't he be able to curb stomp the higher ranked Espada? that is assuming he has been training for the last decade. It's just hard to imagine him sitting around and twiddling his thumbs. this is pretty much a continuation of my last review, sorry for all the questions just few things that have been on my mind while reading this story and wondering if there will be a high level of karma houdini. Also any chance of an OC female shini who is claimed? you mentioned earlier that almost if not all of the female population was claimed and it would be nice to see how they are fairing.