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by NovaAlexandria

person TeamGRIMMYKINS6
schedule June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh...My...GOD! I never knew how Grimmjow and Karin could even be a couple !!! -Sigh- Thank you... Thank you sooooo much! I love this Fanfic so much and your style of writing is so Kick Ass!!! WELL DONEEEEEEE!!!
schedule June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just read Chapter 88, barely getting through it due to the fact that I was bawling the entire time. I am loving your story. It has thoroughly captivated me. In fact, It has me inspired to write about Toshiro, since he has been woefully neglected. Unfortunately, it would involve my OC and him. I know of your wariness of OCs; therefore, I have not written a word before I get permission from you. Please keep up with your wonderful writing. It has gotten better and better. The only criticism I have is the spelling and grammar.
person Mel
schedule June 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on the new baby boy! n.n Was wondering what happened to you but I'm happy to see you're back and healthy! Thanx for another great chapter and keep up the good work!
person bright
schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on the little boy! Glad to hear you're both doing well. Hope you heal quickly : )
person JOler
schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, glad Renji is back.

Was worried that something had happened. Glad you are both alive and making progress health-wise. He should settle into a longer sleep schedule as his stomach grows a bit ... doc can give a better timeline but my kids settled around a month or two (but they are still bottomless pits even though they are now full grown so he might settle a bit quicker). Hope all goes well and all benchmarks are fully attained and on schedule. The health of you and him comes first so waiting for chapters is not an issue. Make sure you have a comfortable car seat for him to sit and sleep in; it will help if/when a cold hits to hel prevent ear issues and aide with sinus draining.
person bleachfan17
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
1st congratulations! its great your child is doing well now & so are you. from what i've seen in friends & families, infants grow like weeds, or faster, actually. enjoy the cuteness and sweetness while you can. you'll have a teenager who's too embarrassed to be around you soon enough. good luck with finding time to rest & of course, we all wish you both health and happiness & nights that you get to sleep through.

so happy to see in this chapter orihime get to do something useful with her powers. great to see renji back. wonder who will claim him. i love having the kids in scenes too. daiemus' personality sounds very analytical. reminds me a bit of uryuu, in addition to ulqui--but having him hiding behind orihime's legs was such an adorable image to invoke, i squealed at the cuteness in my head. ajuga in defensive mode is heartwarming. wonder if once they grow to adolescence or adulthood, they will be paired off. as two half humans, their own offspring has a small chance of being fully human, right? hard to remember my alleles/darwins's pea story... anyway, it was a good chapter. update when you can.
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least Renji is back to normal. I suspect they're going to offer to let Karin Claim him since that's the most gentle variation, that or Szayel will attempt to do it the way Karin does...or someone else will...I don't really want to think about it....

And on the other great news, Congratulations! I hope both you and the baby will do well in the coming weeks. What's his name, by the by? Well, laters.
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter, as always, and congrats on the new baby! ^w^
person Dan Papcin
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this was a really cool chapter i think renji's reaction was....subtle lol cant wait to hear karin's amd orihime's explination to him that should be fun. and im glad everything turned out alright for you and congrats on your baby boy :D
person midnightwakeonu
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on the baby and god bless yall r doing good so what the tikes name..and take time to recovet please