rate_review Reviews

I am loving every second of this story. I nearly stopped in the begining, when I found out what Yammy was doing to Byakuya, but I'm very glad I didn't. Your OCs are adorable, and just about everyone is in-character (Ulquiorra, Gin, and Aizen are particularly hard).

I'm glad for Szayel, but Aizen's not going to be too happy about this, is he? And I know you've written the chapters ahead of time, but can Karin fuse others reiatsu together, like force them to Claim or Mate Claim each other? It's been bugging me and I think it'd solve Orihime and Ulquiorra's problem.

Congrats on your soon-to-be-born baby!

Wow, so, I have finally read POV, after reading The Real King and finding out about it, and WOW. I don't even know where to begin, I pretty much read this whole story in one go. I absolutely hate Aizen and I can't wait until he gets his due, Yammy too *shudders*. This story is so different from any other Bleach fics I have read and I LOVE it. I love the character and relatinship developments. I am so happy for Szayel and Nemu, finally he gets a break. I can't wait for the Espadas to get the rebellion together and going. I really hope that Szayel will get a break, but I'm afraid that Aizen will do something to his babies or threaten to. I can't for next update in both stories, but make sure and get your rest:) I hope your last few weeks of pregnancy go smooth and you have a smooth, uncomplicated labor and a very healthy baby:) Keep up your amazing writing, you really have a wonderful gift.

iI have never left a review before because I am not very good with words or at expressing my self with them but I would really like to try to convey how your I LOOOOOVVVEEEE your stories all of them especially THE REAL KING without doubt my favorite fanfic ever so far I also love this story though I have not gotten very far also(kudos do doing it while pregnant) I can only think you are a genus at full strength anyhow THANK YOU SOOO MUCH for all your stories you seem to put allot of time and thought into writing them as they are really well written I think, but am not an expert but I have read allot of fanfics and no doubt yours being the best ever written enough to want to go back a read a second and third time and believe me I have,but this my first review only because it seems to be so important to you for your readers to leave one and also if I did not express at least some of the emotions I have for your stories I think I might burst so this is a thank you for all your hard work,Thank you and never stop writing!!!! Your loyal fan Becca.

When I first saw your fanfiction here, I checked it out because of the interesting pairing - Karin x Grimmjow. At the time it was about 49 chapters. Usually I get tired of fanfictions, because they're either written poorly, or are just too.... fanservice-y. Well, you get me. But Prize of Victory surprised me a lot, I enjoy reading it a lot and every time I finish the latest chapter, I can't help but wonder, what will happen in the next one.
You must be such a happy cookie because of the baby! *O* I wish you and your baby the bestest bestest things ^O^ And btw, my b-day is on June 14th so it was kinda cool that your delivery date is on 18th ^^" Have a great day!!

ch 94: another great chapter i kinda feel it funny how nemu's babies are in cocoons i think Szayel needed a break from all the torment he has been having. i wish there was email alerts on here so i know when you update lol cant wait for the chapter 95 and idk if i said this yet but congrats on having a baby :D

*ROFLMAO* Oh Szayel, Szayel, Szayel you lovable mad idiot XD Congrats to them :D *applaud* By the way, what do you mean by "Part 1"? Do you mean that POV will break in two parts (like a prequel and sequel)?

Oh, I didn't know that an child's due birth can be somewhat related to the order their parents and kins are born (late or early than due). But somehow it makes sense *looks thoughtful* Oooh, on June too? What do you feel about having your baby being born near your birthday or rather on your birth month? Just curious.

Sorry for not commenting for so long. I'm still following POV, just don't know what to say *shuffles feet in childish nervousness*

squealing inside for szayzel catching break, finally. & for news ori will finally be getting to reverse renji's damage--why she couldn't reverse zanpakto from whatever remnants szayzel has left, i don't get. that way, he could be written into helping w/swarm battles, & help protect babies when born (if there was scene where the kids were in danger). anyway, glad ori will have a chance to shine in spotlight for a bit (she's my fave character). hope you last month is as comfy as possible.

Ch 93: this was a great chapter kinda feel sorry for Szayel he is always taking the brunt of all the pain now. and now everyone seems to be doubting aizen even more things are going to turn to shit soon i think. cant wait for ch 94 :D

glad you didn't make juu blind, though i imagine in some future chap you'll have aizen play out his strategy of finding an excuse to allow ori to reverse effects as 'reward' to starkk, ensuring aizen can save face.

i found the daemus & ajuga interaction a real treat! i love how you've given him a personality & so much language comprehension so soon, even though he can't speak & is only a couple of human months old. having him already feeling chagrined at having been caught by ajuga & worried over ulqui's disappointment made me melt.

happy gestating

daawww, nemu's expecting. happy for her & szayzel but shudder to think how much more aizen will torture szayzel for doing something he himself can't, despite being a self-proclaimed god. shudder to think how much worse it may get for szay, but hope he gets some happy times ahead w/nemu.

now that other arrancar who might care are aware of aizen's abuse, the eventual downfall will be set in motion. am still wondering if ulqui is in the dog house still w/ori over his dick move a couple chaps ago (not sure how much time has elapsed in story since then). hope we get a scene of their heart to heart & real reconciliation. cute daemus frolicking would be welcome too.