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i saw you had more chapters on here than on fanfiction.net so i read them and ill say it again this is an awesome story i really cant wait for the next chapters :D

This chapter infuriated me. The things I ws thinking about wanting to do to Aizen were very unladylike and made me a little nauseated. This isn't a bad thing. You've made me hate him far more than in the original manga. FAR MORE!

I look foward to reading more chapters and even reading more about how your little one is coming along. ganbatte!

I so want Orahime to be beyond consolation after seeing Jushiro ... and everyone's reactions at the next claim meeting ... Especially if those in the know let the others know what happened and that it could be anyone else's pet the next time. It would just be so nice to see Aizen having to mind his Ps and Qs because everyone has been warned that he's not to be trusted ... then for him to make a hinted suggestion concerning those with young family members ... A threat Ulqui would take seriously. Baby Ulqui is cute ... Glad he's learning to fly. Can't wait for the next chapter. Though I do wonder how the others are doing ...

I know I haven't wrote anything in a while but it's because I haven't been in the mood to write anything, not even a review. I am reading the chapters every week even now and I love your story as much as I did when it started, probably even more. I'm also reading your other story, the Ichi/Grimm one, and gawd do I love it. xD
I'm still waiting for the day when Yammy gets what's coming because besides Aizen he is the one I want to see suffering the most.

On a different note, congratulations for the baby, I don't think I've told you that until now.

Love your stories, as always.

wow, the baby is so mature! & such a little perfectionist, like ulqui. Hope ulqui understands that forcing claim is rather insulting given they are mates, not rapist & captive anymore. diaemon is just too cute. hope we get more ulquihime sweet/tender scenes along w/them as parents. its cute to have the usual human dynamic of mom worrying so much more over welfare of kids than the dads, despite the supernatural aspect.

So. Cute. It's. Killing. Me.

I wonder how Diaemus and Ajuga will react to each other tomorrow. . .

Oh so Aizen has become interested in trying to find another route at an heir. I love how smart Hana in such a cute little girl! I'm interested to see what else may happen there as she gets older. Will Jushiro and Bayakua ever find their happy ever afters I wonder? I hope things with Gin get better and maybe him and Rangiku could fix their relationship. Off topic but and intersing challenging pairing could be Isane and someone or perhaps Soi-fon she's always been my favorite I know she has a thing for Yourich but perhaps she can grow out of that thanks to someone I wouldn't know who though, but it would be interesting to see her with someone maybe even an Arrancar

AHHH!! Aizen is freaking me out!! I feel so happy that he didn't discover that Hana had royal blood.

Wow.... *takes a long breath* That was tense, one of the most fearful scenes I have ever read. Wow... you didn't need to terrify us to that extent. Pregnancy hasn't lowered your writing skills at all. *still shaking* First, you have Juushiro blinded; I ranted to my sister for days, and I did it ever after the nightmares were revealed too; now, you make things even worse and more disturbing by that B** being interested in Hana. Hurry up, Grimm, Uqliorra, and Stark and co. We need a rebellion quick. I am not sure Aizen bought that lie. It was almost too easy. Now I need to read something nicer.

I have been reading this for a few months now. I stumbled on it one late night and devoured all the chapters up to 40, where it ended. I was sucked in completely. I loved the dark beginning of Ulquihime, which I had been looking for ages. Then, I fell in love with Grimmjow x Karin. I told my sister about the fan fiction, too. It is one of the best Bleach fan fictions ever. Dark, very realistic, and evil, but really sweet and special too.

I am back to utterly hating Aizen. I feel very sorry for Gin, Byakuya, and you changed my opinion of Syazel. I love the spunk of Grimmjow and Karin, (and //// the delicious sex). I admit to squealing at the cuteness of Ulquihime first few minutes, after the epic fight between Grimmjow and Ulquiorra. Ajuga is one of my favorite OCs ever; I am going to ring Yammy's neck. I love the whole Stark tribe to bits. I continuously check for updates and I have wanted to give you an overload of praise for a long time. You really have something unique here, especially with the few Ichigo and sister moments. Keep writing.

I am reading you first dark Bleach story and its sequel now, though I didn't read the first as closely. I think you took the evil a bit too far there with a couple parts. I might read it more closely later. Sorry for that.

Take care of yourself.

1st happy that aizen recognizes his own stupidity, even if it happened after starkk talked to him. while continuing to shoot himself in foot is good to move rebellion along in story, but it would be weird to have someone w/his intellect & who is usually 50 moves ahead not to continue behaving in his own best interests (b/c he can get his sadistic jollies hurting others not so key to his own security).

2nd, super happy to hear we get more adorable bat-baby & ulquihime family goodness (& maybe a bit of lemon/lime post-baby?).

Glad to see a story where the females are consistently written as intelligent & capable, not frivolous, air-headed, oversexed sluts, or other typical cliches... I like how you have Hana as seeming to inherit the best of both her parents' qualities. The moment w/Gin & Persimmons made me wanna cry for him. His storyline is so tragic so far, but i'm hoping by the end he'll get to collect from aizen his piece of flesh. & hurray for szay being clever enough to speak selected portions of truth while keeping Hana safe.

best wishes for continued healthy pregnancy!