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person Aviary
schedule March 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh no poor Jushiro!!!! I feel so bad for him but I can't say what Aizen's actions are surprising. I like how Aguja didn't know how to control her instincts. I also love how every is giving Szayel a way out.... I can't wait to see Grimm-ji's reaction to Karin being hurt and what Aizen did to Jushiro, and I'm curious of Byakuya's reaction. For your question, perhaps Yachiru I think she's still alive in this one or maybe Rukia can come with Nel.
person Codrynae
schedule March 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've missed you so much TT^TT sorry for not reviewing in like … a decade, but you know: life keeps anyone busy.

Coming back on the subject .. I’ve missed 5 or 6 chapters and this happens … Ukitake gets slashed by Aizen, Orihime gives birth to a beautiful boy. My god … you make me love this story more and more.

I wanna kill that bastard! AIZEN!!! GRRRRRR!!! He really pisses me off.
person mofaf1
schedule March 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can't really give an opinion on the recent filler seasons since I'm way behind and only get to see what is on CN. Sorry about the misunderstanding about the throne too. Perhaps some of the bigger bugs will snag Ajuga, much to Karin's distress, and get her to the throne on time ... to get Aizen out of the way for good. It is infinitely hopeful that Aizen is unaware of Karin's and Ajuga's bloodline proximity to the throne; it's always nice when the bad guy has a dozen or more potential targets in mind and you know he's shooting blind because the real threat is the one or two he doesn't expect. I so hope that the espada are all plotting against him after what has recently happened. I'm sure there are those who noticed that Jushiro was missing from the battle that took place earlier in the day; but then again he has been undergoing treatments.Hmmm ... I wonder if any of his other friends might want to visit Jushiro while he is in recovery ... if Ulquiorra is informed of the attack by Aizen on someone else's pet he might be a bit stressed and if Orahime overhears it she might want to see Ukitake, I'm sure Rangeku would feel the same if she thought Nnoitra might let her visit. Tatsuki would definitely want to see him and I'm sure Tesra would probably let her. If the other two girls weren't able to visit I'm sure Tatuski would inform them of what happened and his current state (and we know how they would make sure their significant males knew of their distress). If Toshiro heard he might even be distressed and we know that Haribel already doesn't tend to be overly trusting of males (like Aizen) in the first place. Can so see Rangeku and Orahime going all out with the waterworks and demanding to know what their 'owner' would do if Aizen tried to do something like that to them with little to no real reason and without saying a word to the owner first.

Hopefully Jushiro is able to survive the week or so of torment from the nightmares. I'm also hoping that Aizen, Barragan, and Yammy (in no particular order) get their just desserts soon. I'd also love to see the rightful heir actually get to the throne soon .. .even if they don't know they are the heir ... lol

Glad the pregnancy is going well.
person Mary Lou
schedule March 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I reviewed earlier, but it disappeared, so I am trying again. In case that both reviews show up, you will know why. Another outstanding chapter. I believe that Aizen has gone too far this time with his attack upon Ukitake. It will be so awesome once Aizen is taken down. It would be ironic if at the end Aizen has to depend on the mercy of Ukitake when he is judged, if he actually survives to be judged. I would rather watch months of fillers than have Bleach discontinued. Uryuu has always been good looking, but he is absolutely gorgeous now. I would love to be able to enjoy that for a while yet.
person frozenflower95
schedule March 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very dramatic Chapter! I love it! Well I mean the style of writing and the way the plot is going, not for poor Ukitake-san :'( Man that's terrible. It's different to be born blind, but to be able to see for centuries, and then suddenly have that taken away from you because of your compassion for others... T_T For some odd reason I really liked that scene when Ajuga was struggling and tearing the flesh of Karin. At first I was like "NO U BRAT! CALM THE F"CK DOWN!" xD and then I went to "D'awwww she just really cares for her 'take-ji" >.< Very well done :)

Btw about the newest Bleach chapters... I can't believe Stark is dead T^T He was such an awesome espada! How in the world did he dieeeee?? I really liked him during that espada arc, but then when I started reading ur fics, I liked him even more. I hate how kubo killed him off D':

Anyways how's your baby doing? Hopefully happy and healthy? Best regards I know I haven't sent a review for a long while but I have been reading ur fics as soon as the chps are out! I really love this story :D
schedule March 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
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person try10
schedule March 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I've fallen in love with this story. Even if some ppl find a couple of scenes dark, I think that they are awesome. You need to have a lot of talend to write something like that. Sometimes when I read your story I imagine the pain that the characters feel. I really like the fact that they don't act OOC at all. :D Please continue writing it cause you are doing a great job. XD

This is the best Bleach fanfic I have ever read.
person Tokoloshé
schedule March 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The attack on Jushiro seems to be the catalyst that is needed for others to take action against Aizen (I can only hope). We at least have Stark now really taking notice. Love to see how this will affect the story now. Hope Jushiro will have some sight left and is not completely blinded. Don’t think Aizen will overlook anyone that helped Jushiro.

Glad that your pregnancy is going well although not so nice about feeling tired constantly.

About the question. I also think that there were definitely other survivors but don’t think that they will make an appearance soon. I am so looking forward to the next Manga chapter and hopefully more explanations. Think Ichigo is holding back information from his friends (Ishida).
person Nightqueen
schedule March 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think I could hate that bastard Aizen more than I already did! This chapter just proved me wrong! My hate knows no bounds when it comes to that evil piece of crap!! He needs to pay and pay dearly! I just hope everyone that has found new families and people to love can band together and do something about this.... I can't even think of something evil enough to call him! LOL Terrific chapter!!!
person JOler
schedule March 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter.

Poor Byakuya for having to put up with Yammey every night like that. Poor Karin for getting hurt while keeping Ajuga from being so reckless. And most of all, poor Jushiro for being attacked so viciously because he expressed concern for someone else to a person he felt needed to know and whom he thought might have a reason and way to help the distressed individual. Hopefully Karin is ok. Again, hopefully Gin, Szayel, and Starrk don't get reprimanded for aiding Jushiro. I wonder if this will finally start an underground movement to overthrow Aisen ... perhaps with the help of the hidden survivors. I know Orahime will be seriously distraught when she hears. I wonder if she will find a way to express her feelings that will actually reach Ulquiorra (ie If someone tried to hurt our son while you were gone and I did something to protect him but that made HIM angry enough to cripple me like that so I was useless in battle and at home would you still just accept it?!). As sweet as Jushiro is I'm sure many of the arrancar respect him highly. Some like Yammey and Barragan might not but most of the others probably do. If Karin and Jushiro are both unable to hold down the taichow post for a while (Unohanna might insist on bed rest for Karin too) who would cover the squad (they'd balk at an arrancar leading them).

I'd honestly like to see most of the supporters/friends/subordinates of Jushiro baracade themselves some place safe during the next attack so that the bugs are able to bypass the defenses (and the few who are fighting or being forced to fight) and let the bugs actually reach and destroy Aisen ... I know it won't happen but still. It would also be nice to see the command bugs find Karin when Szayel is near enough to overhear them. Even if she dismisses them he'd ask the all important questions "why is she so important?", "what do you want to do with her?", and if satisfied that it is in everyone's best interest (ok maybe not Aisen's or Yammey's or Barragan's) he'd be the one to realize this and possibly even ask "how can we help ... and still survive?"

Of course what I'd like to see the most is for Ajuga to visit Gin and sit her tushie on the throne then get a rush of power as it races to her, mama Karin, and papa Grimmjow ... and all away from Aisen (preferably leaving him weaker than a normal human). And then Orahime is given the go ahead to heal everyone while the ones who took too much pleasure in the pain of others got their due.

Also would still love to see Nnoitra freakout if Rangeku got preggers. Hmmm .. And Renji get his Zanpakto and soul back.