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by NovaAlexandria

person Codrynae
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wings and a boy … I’m so happy *making plans for the wedding … between him and Ajuga of course* my head if full of crazy ideas of what might happened after the baby is born *khe* there are so many that I cannot distinguish between them *sigh*

“Wow, so other than Starrk-san you have never slept with anyone?” -- only Orihime could ask such a question.

Good chapter, but I must confess that I’m literally dying to find out what will happen in the next one.

Hmmm … though question *staring at the empty wallet* There are many places/countries I would like to visit. Being a European my first choice would definitely be somewhere in Europe. Though I find Paris/London/Berlin/Vienna/Rome kind of consummated (also my mother had been there and she loved it, but they are not my first choice) I guess that somewhere in Eastern Europe, especially my neighbors because sadly I know nothing about them: Serbia, Bulgaria and Hungary. I wanna go to Kiev as well and maybe Poland. Yep … if only I could teleport myself there it would be more than fine.

Anyways I loved this chapter!
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
sweet chap, both for learning about baby & cute ajuga scenes.

think i'd either go to new zealand, because it looks amazing from what i've seen in movies like the lord of the rings trilogy & whale rider; or alaska, since it too seems amazing from what i've seen in media & what i've heard from friends who have gone.
person gollumsfriend
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM


Awww!!! Such a sweet chapter! I *almost* got teary as Ajuga was giving Byakuya her gift.

A really lovely update overall, thank you!
person Tokoloshe
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Actually forgotten why Aizen want to have the child in the first place. He really is a tyrant through and through! Just hope that Unohana just don‘t fall pregnant and if she does a rescue will happen soon for the safety of the child. Orihime is having a baby with wings! So cute. Yes also think he will be a heart breaker. I loved what Ajuga did for Byakuya – really heart warming. He needs the kindness after what he has been through and still enduring.
person Black Storm Van Pendragon
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yus~! I knew it'd be like Ulquiorra's Segunda Etapa and a boy~! *punches fist in the air, and sympathetically pats pouting Ajuga* Ah the thought of Ajuga drawing is quite an adorable sight.

As for the weekly question....well, to be honest, I never really gave it much thought because of various personal reasons and financial issues *shrugs*

Ooooo...I kinda miss all the family moments between those three (Grimmjow, Karin and Ajuga) *squirms with curiosity and anticipation, and waits patiently for the next chapter*
person JOler
schedule February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Too many places I wanna go and just as many reasons for wanting to go to each....

Love the scroll Ajuga made for Byakuya ... I think he and Zenbonzakura needed the little emotional and psychological lift it gave (and continue to give).

Hmmm ... Sounds like a pretty little girl is already getting a bit jealous of the new baby (not playmate ... It's a ....boy ewwww ~ Ajuga's perspective of course). My guess is she has a 'school-girl' type of crush on Szayel and will be jealous of anyone that might threaten her ownership of the title 'favorite experiment'. Of course she's gaining interest in Gin too ... and might bond somewhat over the mutual dislike of Aisen now that she knows Aisen is responsible for Szay being hurt so bad and for Gin's mistreatment .... and that Gin tried to kill him like she'd probably like to do ....

Hmmm daddy-daughter talk and hunting trip ... Interrupted ...hmmmm. So is Karin upset because Ajuga is too young to hunt? Or maybe the topic of the convo? Or possibly the outcome of the interruption? (she'd probably wail on his ass if either Barragan or Bugs dragged her baby girl off ....)

Kinda hoping for a very preggers Orahime and Ulquiorra to have a romantic lake-side wedding with many in attendance ... and Hana and Ajuga whistfully watching the grown ups dance ... and wishing in softly spoken thoughts that their current crush would ask THEM to dance. (ie Hana likes 'sensei' and Ajuga moons over Szay). Of course Szayel and Unohanna are both there ... Aisen would insist on performing the ceremony himself and with Orahime due at any time having her doctors in attendance is only wise...


person Nightqueen
schedule February 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ajuga did an absolutely beautiful thing. That scroll, the picture and the words upon it gave Byakuya a little piece of himself back! It was truly a wonderful heart warming moment to read about! Orihime is going to get her adorable baby wings included!! I loved that scene when she found out the baby was a boy with a tail and wings!! This is truly one of my favorite stories and I look forward to the update each week! Thanks!!!
person Codrynae
schedule February 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Gin … I really feel for him and now that Ajuga knows what happened with her precious Szay … I think that Ajuga has the potential of becoming very powerful and smart and I love the way you’ve decided to present her evolution. As always I am mesmerized by your writing *smile*
Also I am a fan of MatsumotoxGin :)

Cola FTW Even if it depends of the country. For example in Canada/USA Pepsi tasted better, but in my country Cola is yammy (this comes from someone who drinks water once a month)

Sorry for the late/short review but … exams
person Joyleaf
schedule February 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter to go up! I am so excited about Ulquiorra and Orihime's baby! :D I feel so bad for Ran and Gin though, but you are doing such a great job on the story!
person JOler
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm ... Actually Ajuga was humming the tune so it could be explained away as having been overheard from a passing street vendor or possibly by someone else at the 4th or something ... I'm sure Gin and Rangeku aren't the only ones who know the song.