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January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you evil prego women leaveing it just their... i cant beleve it.... gah why why why... now i have to wait another week to find out what has happin
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January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I Loved this chapter, because unlike the last two it was happy. A little angsty, but happy nonetheless.
Those three put up quite a scene in font of the unknowing Arrancars. Those fools had no idea they were just playing a role *smirk* I feel smart (for once in my life)
Karin is kind of young … now that I think. When I was her age … *dreamy eyes*
Ulquiorra gets an earful from Tatsuki-chan. Hmmm I wanna see that happening
Those three put up quite a scene in font of the unknowing Arrancars. Those fools had no idea they were just playing a role *smirk* I feel smart (for once in my life)
Karin is kind of young … now that I think. When I was her age … *dreamy eyes*
Ulquiorra gets an earful from Tatsuki-chan. Hmmm I wanna see that happening
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January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Guess this is the 'Don't ask ... Don't tell' chapter
Ukitake had avoided directly asking about Byakuya's home conditions and Byakuya didn't tell ... until Karin left them each with no choice but to confront the issue. Glad it is helping Byakuya to heal inside now that he's opened up. I think it will help Ukitake a bit too.
And the other 'DA ... DT' ... Ok let the arrancar's think it is Grimmjow who claimed Szayel and 'gifted' him to his mate as a babysitter ... They don't need to know Karin did the claim directly (though from his sneaky and demeaning actions I think Aisen is clued in).
Hmmm Tatsuki giving Ulquiorra an earful? Wonder what that will set in motion ... he lets Tatsuki and Tesra be together but technically Tatsuki is his so he might feel obligated to have a discussion with Tesra and possibly his master Nnoitra ... and that could lead to Nnoitra and Tesra having a discussion ... and if what Tatsuki has to say is what I think she might have to say ... Nnoitra might start thinking of upgrading his and Rangeku's relationship by asking with a little sparkly gold hint ... (provided Rangeku doesn't die of shock he might experience his most mind blowing night ... day ... week ... month ever). Of course if Ulquiorra listens to that hint he might be a bit surprised too.
Ukitake had avoided directly asking about Byakuya's home conditions and Byakuya didn't tell ... until Karin left them each with no choice but to confront the issue. Glad it is helping Byakuya to heal inside now that he's opened up. I think it will help Ukitake a bit too.
And the other 'DA ... DT' ... Ok let the arrancar's think it is Grimmjow who claimed Szayel and 'gifted' him to his mate as a babysitter ... They don't need to know Karin did the claim directly (though from his sneaky and demeaning actions I think Aisen is clued in).
Hmmm Tatsuki giving Ulquiorra an earful? Wonder what that will set in motion ... he lets Tatsuki and Tesra be together but technically Tatsuki is his so he might feel obligated to have a discussion with Tesra and possibly his master Nnoitra ... and that could lead to Nnoitra and Tesra having a discussion ... and if what Tatsuki has to say is what I think she might have to say ... Nnoitra might start thinking of upgrading his and Rangeku's relationship by asking with a little sparkly gold hint ... (provided Rangeku doesn't die of shock he might experience his most mind blowing night ... day ... week ... month ever). Of course if Ulquiorra listens to that hint he might be a bit surprised too.
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January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
glad chap shows bya is mending his shredded soul slowly. hopefully he'll become indispensable to aizen & yammy won't be allowed to abuse his pet anymore. also neat to have bya & karin getting along so well. his constant disparaging thoughts about ichi tickle my funny bone lots. & of course its nice to see the 'created' family together helping each other out (am including szay & now bya). its not just the stark household members, but the humans & close friends that seem to work like a family unit (core, then cousins, aunts/uncles, etc). &fc ajuga's empathic sense via smell continues to develop--she's gonna end up being a lie detector of sorts, not just spot on re: what people fea
can't wait til next chap if you will feature ori, tats, & ulqui! woohoo!
can't wait til next chap if you will feature ori, tats, & ulqui! woohoo!
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! Byakuya was forced to suck off Yammy once in public and people still don't know the true extent of his abuse until now?! That certainly is a whoa moment! Yammy needs to die really soon though it's good to see things are already improving for Byakuya. Please keep the chapters coming I am enjoying your story as always.
P.S. I hope you had a merry Christmas and a happy New Year and good luck with motherhood.
P.S. I hope you had a merry Christmas and a happy New Year and good luck with motherhood.
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January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is my favorite (know i had said that at least 10 times, but anyway)
Love the way Karin found a way of that tangled situation.
Happy 2012 and hope to hear from you soon!
Love the way Karin found a way of that tangled situation.
Happy 2012 and hope to hear from you soon!
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December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Correction to last review ... matron not matrimony ...
Of course I'd love to see Szayel (as well as Renji and Nemu) have to move in with Karin and Grimmjow just for added protection ... I think coming home and finding 'Pinky' there would make Ajuga and Hana almost as ecstatic as having Ukitaki-Ji home and better. It's been a while since we saw Rangeku and Nnoitra too ... wonder how they are doing (wonder if Tatsuki or Tesra might have mentioned some 'romantic' human customs ... wonder what Rangeku would do if Nnoitra managed to show up with a huge bouquet of roses one day for example ... hmmm he might just get a smile instead of a smirk on his face again). Would love to see those two get mated ... and maybe if we are lucky Nnoitra will get guidance from Tatsuki ... via Tesra of course ... on how to guarantee a non-claim enforced enthusiastic acceptance when he asks? (ie dozens of red roses, dinner and slow dancing at finest restaurant and dance hall around, taking a vaguely submissive pose on one knee (getting Rangeku's eyes on the verge of popping out from shock) ... and presenting her with a super fantastic ring ... ya know ... the whole fairy tale proposal most little girls dream of. (and of course Nnoitra's stomach tied in knots the whole time)
Soooo wanna see Aizen, Yammy, and Barragan put through as many tortures as possible ... with no chance of escape ... and for an indefinite amount of time. (or if that can't be arranged in a way that allows them to be locked away unseen forever ... I suppose a suitably painful death would do ... though to would be interesting if Karin was able to use the power of Aisen's Zanpacto and seal those three together with them seeing the others through an illusion as their 'victim' of choice so that each would receive the treatment that had been forced on the other's previous victims. ...)
Of course I'd love to see Szayel (as well as Renji and Nemu) have to move in with Karin and Grimmjow just for added protection ... I think coming home and finding 'Pinky' there would make Ajuga and Hana almost as ecstatic as having Ukitaki-Ji home and better. It's been a while since we saw Rangeku and Nnoitra too ... wonder how they are doing (wonder if Tatsuki or Tesra might have mentioned some 'romantic' human customs ... wonder what Rangeku would do if Nnoitra managed to show up with a huge bouquet of roses one day for example ... hmmm he might just get a smile instead of a smirk on his face again). Would love to see those two get mated ... and maybe if we are lucky Nnoitra will get guidance from Tatsuki ... via Tesra of course ... on how to guarantee a non-claim enforced enthusiastic acceptance when he asks? (ie dozens of red roses, dinner and slow dancing at finest restaurant and dance hall around, taking a vaguely submissive pose on one knee (getting Rangeku's eyes on the verge of popping out from shock) ... and presenting her with a super fantastic ring ... ya know ... the whole fairy tale proposal most little girls dream of. (and of course Nnoitra's stomach tied in knots the whole time)
Soooo wanna see Aizen, Yammy, and Barragan put through as many tortures as possible ... with no chance of escape ... and for an indefinite amount of time. (or if that can't be arranged in a way that allows them to be locked away unseen forever ... I suppose a suitably painful death would do ... though to would be interesting if Karin was able to use the power of Aisen's Zanpacto and seal those three together with them seeing the others through an illusion as their 'victim' of choice so that each would receive the treatment that had been forced on the other's previous victims. ...)
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December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I know Yammy is relatively slow mentally but I honestly wonder how long it will take him to connect the dots ...
Dot 1. Karin and Ajuga adore Byakuya.
Dot 2. Karin HATES him because of how he treats Byakuya.
Dot 3. Karin would love to see he is as frustrated as possible.
Dot 4. Karin likes to see Byakuya happy.
Dot 5. Karin now controls Szayel via a claim (or through Grimmjow's claim ...)
Dot 6. Szayel is the only one that can make it possible for Yammy to get Byakuya pregnant.
Dot 7. Byakuya would be unhappy being pregnant. (see dot 4).
Dot 8. No way in H*** is Karin gonna let Szayel make Byakuya preggers (though she might be spiteful and have Szayel do the reverse ... plant a fertilized egg in Yammy ... now who would the donors of that unfortunate egg be ... maybe that annoying old matrimony and Yammy?)
Either way ... it shouldn't take him long to realize a kid ain't happening no matter how much he threatens Szayel since Szayel has been claimed and ordered not to do it by his owner.
Of course it will make everyone take notice of Karin and how strong she is ... even if she is JUST a human.
Dot 1. Karin and Ajuga adore Byakuya.
Dot 2. Karin HATES him because of how he treats Byakuya.
Dot 3. Karin would love to see he is as frustrated as possible.
Dot 4. Karin likes to see Byakuya happy.
Dot 5. Karin now controls Szayel via a claim (or through Grimmjow's claim ...)
Dot 6. Szayel is the only one that can make it possible for Yammy to get Byakuya pregnant.
Dot 7. Byakuya would be unhappy being pregnant. (see dot 4).
Dot 8. No way in H*** is Karin gonna let Szayel make Byakuya preggers (though she might be spiteful and have Szayel do the reverse ... plant a fertilized egg in Yammy ... now who would the donors of that unfortunate egg be ... maybe that annoying old matrimony and Yammy?)
Either way ... it shouldn't take him long to realize a kid ain't happening no matter how much he threatens Szayel since Szayel has been claimed and ordered not to do it by his owner.
Of course it will make everyone take notice of Karin and how strong she is ... even if she is JUST a human.
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December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
satisfying chapter, with some good things coming byakuya's way at last (despite the price he had to pay) & a respite for szayzel from aizen's rape fetish. also finally got to see ori help uki, something I've been dying to see happen since I first read/saw that uki was so sick in canon & ori had rejecting power. goody!
hoping we'll get to welcome chibi ulqui to this fictional world soon (or at least a sonogram scene where he's seen in all his glory, & we get an awww moment from stiff ulqui). am betting the girls will have a great time baby-sitting & get into all sorts of fun situations (as when lilynette would sick ajuga onto sleeping starkk) in between the angst & battles with swarm & aizen's twisted misdeeds.
happy new year to you & yours!
hoping we'll get to welcome chibi ulqui to this fictional world soon (or at least a sonogram scene where he's seen in all his glory, & we get an awww moment from stiff ulqui). am betting the girls will have a great time baby-sitting & get into all sorts of fun situations (as when lilynette would sick ajuga onto sleeping starkk) in between the angst & battles with swarm & aizen's twisted misdeeds.
happy new year to you & yours!
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December 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hope Karin's plan works ... and Szayel isn't in danger. Hope Jushiro doesn't have that bad type of TB. Sounds like Byakuya is gonna savor every moment he can away from Yammy and Yammy is gonna snarl every moment Byakuya savors.
Happy holidays.
Happy holidays.