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OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This chapter was the most eye opener i every read.. by the gods poor sazly.. i wish he;ll get better after this one and come up with a plan to kill off kami... and on a side note u are so lucky to see snow.. i live in mobile alabama and it still warm here.. happy thanksgiving now and hope you dont get sick..

Yeah, okay. I retract part of my statement from the Chapter 71 review. Szay's been through more than enough now. This chapter got more of an emotional reaction out of me.

I like how ya have Orihime stand up like that and I also get the Hollow thinking of it (the rape/Claiming)being two totally different acts. Interesting how things will work out now.

Until next chapter! :D

Poor Szayel, I'm surprized that Karin could move at all with what he was going through. And with her acting as both go between I'm surprized Grimmjow didn't feel more of it. Wonder what Szayel did to deserve it ... probably nothing is my guess ... Aisen was probably just wanting a change of pace from torturing Gin. (hope Ajuga is ok ... actually it would serve Aisen right if the 'bug' alarms suddenly went off in the middle of his 'play' time.

WOW!! These last two chapter were intense! I think that Szayel might just have paid for most of his transgressions in this last chapter. I really do love the way you write. It's way to easy to get wrapped up in your portrayal of the characters and the story you tell completely ensnares you. I look forward to every chapter you write! Sorry to hear about all that snow!

I really liked this chapter! :D Gin can finally catch a break and lighten up around Ajuga (even though it was a little bit). I feel so bad for Gin and hope things will turn up better for him :)

Congratulations on getting pregnant btw! I hope you will feel better in the near future and that your baby will turn up healthy and happy without any complications =D

congrats on your expanding family! hope the morning sickness passes quickly.

i hope gin gets his revenge before story is over. seriously. i wanna weep for him in this fic. i deep hoping somehow orihime can secretly send her fairies to heal him on the inside while letting all the scarring & signs of abuse aizen inflicts remain on the outside, so aizen thinks he's in constant pain but he is actually fine & just faking it.

ajuga has inherited a form of karin's sight, hasn't she? & her smelling skill sounds like a power too, if she can smell sadness, like karin sees reiatsu's. and she can already cloak her reiatsu as a toddler! you've made her a very attractive potential mate, which worries me b/c you had an earlier mention about how children could be claimed if they seemed to have potential. if someone like aizen claimed her, grim couldn't fight it. creepy, but after some of the torture read in this fic, it wouldn't be too surprising for something that tragic to befall her... just hope not.

Yeah, Ajuga is getting to be quite the little handful, isn't she? Can't help but wonder how she manages to go un-sensed like that. Congratulations on your own upcoming bundle of joy! Laters.

Wow! Congratulations! I’m so happy for you *squeals of joy* I wish you an easy pregnancy and a healthy, beautiful and lucky child. I bet your boyfriend is in the 7-th heaven *snicker*
This is my fist correct guess since … ever. Am I good or am I good? :D

I’m sorry that you are under the weather, but I guess it’s expected in your current situation.

Now back to the story. I think that “bonding” Ajuga and Gin was a good and original idea.
Also you explained some things left unchecked in the last chapters. I had wondered, more than a few times, why Aizen didn’t punish Grimmjow (especially after his so called claim on the 8-th, now 7-th espada), but then I realized something. No matter how “bad” Grimmjow had been, he is still pretty powerful and I guess Aizen needs his loyalty complete. If he were to torture Grim the same way he does with Gin, he would probably rebel and do stupid stuff.
That’s my theory.

I feel the deepest sadness for Gin and my hate for Aizen had increased exponentially. That is probably your intention, right? *laugh* The second question that popped in my head the first time Ajuga met Aizen was why didn’t she “smell” him.
At least now she knows what Aizen is capable of!

I think that Ajuga will become very powerful and, just like another reviewer before me, I fear that claming aspect. Here Yammy is very dangerous.

This was one amazing chapter and please be gentle with Gin and Szayel (or maybe I should ask you to make Aizen gentle but I would ask for the impossible)

At the second read I found this little part that amused me to no end “for the specs of dust Aizen had found under the bed.” Seriously … did he have to search under the bed? You know what’s worse? I can totally see Aizen bent, looking under the med for that spec of dust. Gin has just been unlucky to be in Aizen’s presence when he was OCD-ing
Ajuga is such cat … with the natural fear of water.

Congrats and morning sickness usually goes away after a few months. You might keep a food log to see if any particular foods are triggers. I know for me tomatoes in any form triggered or intensified my morning sickness.

Sorry for short or missing reviews. I've been swamped with homework.

Love the chapter. Would hate for Ajuga to see what will happen to Szayel and Gin but ... on the otherhand I'd love to see what she'd end up doing to Aisen, especially if he was totally clueless to her being there. It actually sounds like Ajuga kinda likes Gin and maybe feels bad for him. I wonder if she really left or if her childish curiosity caused her to hide and listen/watch what transpired. Wonder what kind of questions that would bring up to mom and dad ... and the rest of the household. Either way I'm sure Karin will be aware that Szayel is being punished for something; I'm kind of surprised she doesn't get more of a feeling for the pain that is being inflicted to him though.

I'd honestly love to see a pissed Ajuga do a home-style impromptu spay-neuter job on Aisen in a surprise hit-and-run attack from undercover with an immediate escape before she could be seen. Aside from his angry out lashing toward everyone within his range ... I'm sure the last few moments of any onlookers life would be spent in shocked amusement.