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November 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
bravo.. when i check here on thurday and friday i actual got scared that you where not going to post something at all.. CONGRATS ON THE PREGO NEWS.. that is so awesome.. and i really hope you feel better too.. and so cant wait to see who is joining gin in the room this time i hope it not it not the 8th i know karin will be so mad..
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November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just got to the section where you explained what happened to Renji. How terribly sad! Poor soul.
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November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been really enjoying this piece. Thank you for writing for us!
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November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heya! I finally got onto this site!!! I am sooo happy I get to read the original, un-cut version of your wonderful story ^.^
Thoughts on the cut scenes that weren't there on fanfiction: There were some scenes that shouldn't have been cut because it helps the reader know more about what happened to the other characters. But I understand that u might have had to due to the darker contents of it... But anyways, I thought the scene where Yoruichi was talking to Rukia about what she saw shouldn't have been cut. But since it was on fanfiction, many will be left puzzled as to why randomly bring Ichigo up again (mind you they might have seen it coming too :p)
Thoughts on story thus far: Amazing job. Not only does your story contain fluffy scenes, but also smexy, and dark ones too. There is a lot of variety in this fiction (which is great) and your story doesn't only focus on the couples alone. Another thing that you have which I find other authors don't is the existence of a PLOT! Yes a plot! There's more to it than just sex! I love your little twists and plot thickening scenes as well! Can't wait to read more of your lovely story.
Till next time~
Thoughts on the cut scenes that weren't there on fanfiction: There were some scenes that shouldn't have been cut because it helps the reader know more about what happened to the other characters. But I understand that u might have had to due to the darker contents of it... But anyways, I thought the scene where Yoruichi was talking to Rukia about what she saw shouldn't have been cut. But since it was on fanfiction, many will be left puzzled as to why randomly bring Ichigo up again (mind you they might have seen it coming too :p)
Thoughts on story thus far: Amazing job. Not only does your story contain fluffy scenes, but also smexy, and dark ones too. There is a lot of variety in this fiction (which is great) and your story doesn't only focus on the couples alone. Another thing that you have which I find other authors don't is the existence of a PLOT! Yes a plot! There's more to it than just sex! I love your little twists and plot thickening scenes as well! Can't wait to read more of your lovely story.
Till next time~
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November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it's taken me this long to realize how far this story has progressed since the begining and also makes me realize how sad i'll be when its over because you are a magnificent writer
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November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooh it's nice to see Orihime getting bold in bed.
I had been wondering since chapter 65 what Yammy's alliterative motive was; I never suspected it was an attempt to claim Ajuga via the Baruya tribe method. Speaking of which is Ajuga able to tell if people had their claims renewed recently by sensing it or smelling it? Because Tesla doesn't strike me to be the type to renew a claim during the act unless it is necessary.
I had been wondering since chapter 65 what Yammy's alliterative motive was; I never suspected it was an attempt to claim Ajuga via the Baruya tribe method. Speaking of which is Ajuga able to tell if people had their claims renewed recently by sensing it or smelling it? Because Tesla doesn't strike me to be the type to renew a claim during the act unless it is necessary.
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November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so pumped to see how you write ulquiorra during orihimes labor. XD thats going to be amusing. But anyway awesome story keep up the good work.
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November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Karin has everyone's attention for one reason or another ~ and some may not like 'the other'.
lol ... The walking food ... aka Ulquiora ... should be very happy that Orahime made Ajuga promise not to hurt him since Ajuga is one of the few who can already damage his hiero with little to no effort. It sounds as though Ajuga has developed a first, little girl type, crush on Szayel ~ wonder if Szayel, or anyone else, has noticed this fact or if they think she just likes him as a 'grown-up play buddy' with lots of pretty and strange toys.
Sounds like Nnoitra is smitten ~ hook, line, and sinker ~ and has started thinking of Rangeku's happiness first a bit (shocking I know).
Hmmmm ... Ajuga don't eat or drink ANYTHING at the garden unless one of the riatsu sensitive individuals checks it first (seriously don't trust Yammy to not try and make a play for an unsuspecting ~ possibly distracted ~ Ajuga. Thanks for the belated warning about underage claiming Tesra, hopefully it isn't too late. (talk about some pissed parents if Ajuga ever did come home with someone else's riatsu mixed with her own, and mama saw it).
lol ... The walking food ... aka Ulquiora ... should be very happy that Orahime made Ajuga promise not to hurt him since Ajuga is one of the few who can already damage his hiero with little to no effort. It sounds as though Ajuga has developed a first, little girl type, crush on Szayel ~ wonder if Szayel, or anyone else, has noticed this fact or if they think she just likes him as a 'grown-up play buddy' with lots of pretty and strange toys.
Sounds like Nnoitra is smitten ~ hook, line, and sinker ~ and has started thinking of Rangeku's happiness first a bit (shocking I know).
Hmmmm ... Ajuga don't eat or drink ANYTHING at the garden unless one of the riatsu sensitive individuals checks it first (seriously don't trust Yammy to not try and make a play for an unsuspecting ~ possibly distracted ~ Ajuga. Thanks for the belated warning about underage claiming Tesra, hopefully it isn't too late. (talk about some pissed parents if Ajuga ever did come home with someone else's riatsu mixed with her own, and mama saw it).
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November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read the whole chapter before my operating System course and I had to check for time to time for indiscrete classmates reading over my shoulder. But then it got to the smutty part … I was something like “What if they see that I am practically reading porn on the internet … I have a reputation to keep”, but then I realized “Fuck it, because it’s a well-written porn”
In case you didn’t realize, I am trying to praise you *smirk a la Codry*
Now I loved all the scenes (as always), but I guess that Karin’s interaction with Ulqui was the best. I felt a little animosity burning somewhere in there … maybe it was just my imagination.
I don’t need to add that I loved this chappy. If I ever forget to tell you, please know that it is implicit.
I’m very sorry 4 your busy schedule, but I guess that we(I) do forget that people on this site have their problems, issues etc …
Btw … how is your stomach? Maybe my presumption from 2 chapters back (I think) was kind of childish, but I prefer to be an optimist.
In case you didn’t realize, I am trying to praise you *smirk a la Codry*
Now I loved all the scenes (as always), but I guess that Karin’s interaction with Ulqui was the best. I felt a little animosity burning somewhere in there … maybe it was just my imagination.
I don’t need to add that I loved this chappy. If I ever forget to tell you, please know that it is implicit.
I’m very sorry 4 your busy schedule, but I guess that we(I) do forget that people on this site have their problems, issues etc …
Btw … how is your stomach? Maybe my presumption from 2 chapters back (I think) was kind of childish, but I prefer to be an optimist.
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November 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
another great chappie! adored the ulquihime, w/hormones making ori a lot more proactive & managing to shock ulqui. karin's patience w/her squad's questions was humorous, and the interaction between ajuga & ulqui made me laugh. the playful spoken/unspoken banter between besties tats & ori & later tesra was cute along w/ajuga having things go over her head. finally, that last exchange w/nnoi that had ran in shock at his warm attitude gives me hope he doesn't have to die a slow painful death after all.