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Sorry for the late review, but I didn’t read your new chapter until now.
I loved this chappy … god damn it ‘cause I love them all. And Ulqui had been indirectly saved by Karin *snicker* so much for the great 4-th Espada

I had a little add for the previous chapter which can related to the actual one “I wonder if Aizen did send Uliqu there in order to check Karin’s range. And I am curious to know who was the one Aizen was really looking for. Anyway I’ll find out at some point, so no need to worry”

Karin is such a vixen. I love her so much (even if Kubo gives a fuck about her existence). And Grimmjow is a lucky guy and vice versa *sigh*

You know I’m not a big Orihime fan. As a matter of fact I don’t like her too much, but for some reason I kinda liked her in this chapter.

adored this chap, i guess because it included so many character's views/feelings. adored the final ulquihime parts, and for all the complaining about how difficult it is to write ulqui, you do it amazingly well! believe in your writing skills.

the grimkarin parts were great too, grim's rageful slaughter because they tried to hurt his mate was wonderfully sexy in a way, especially in noting in the shower scene he did what she needed as opposed to his 'old' self that was more about self-gratification. ajuga's feelings of accomplishment & karin feeling pride in her was a great little bit as well (& neat that no one was able to catch her despite the fact she's only 2+ years old chronologically). even szay's excitement over having so much new data/specimen's was funny & adorable in a way.

It took me till this chapter to realize just how far the story has progressed. I really love this story and look forward to reading it every week. Keep up the good work you wonderful person you

another good chap. i got anxious when reading the summons to aizen, immediately jumping to the torture scenes of gin & szayzel, so i'm glad things did not go badly thx to attack distraction. freaked a bit at idea of sending ajuga off to szay alone, even if she is quick--if swarm knows its karin's child, & they know karin has royal blood, its logical they will target the relatively defenseless little one down the road. were the numbers the location of where portal opened up, for szay to investigate?

hope we get to hear about the effectiveness of karin's team-building exercise on the unit, and of the effectiveness of not just shinigami but humans ori, tats, & karin in fighting, protecting & healing post-battle (ori can reverse wounds & karin can use kido & medical knowledge from growing up at clinic, & tats can help out w/bandaging & helping out w/arrancar, since as you wrote early on, the shinigami caregivers were skittish around them).

Feel better. have they talked about doing an endoscopy, to peek inside your GI tract? you might have GERD or bleeding ulcers.

I like the idea of Karin standing up to Aizen(when she said about finding her brother), but at the same time realizing that he’s stronger and not to be “upset by anything”. It was an interesting discussion and it became interesting once Aizen got into his bossy demeanor.
Good job with this one again *thumbs up*
I did see the image BlackStorm had drawn, because yesterday I searched on deviantart grimmjow&Karin photos. Anyway amazing photo and an amazing chapter as well.
I hope your stomach is fine and it’s noting serious; who knows maybe you’re pregnant *giggle*

As always your story keeps me guessing and your amazing writing skills arose my jealousy (maybe awe is a better word … idk)

O.O must have more... This is one of the best Fan Fics I've ever read. You really should think about publishing it.

Love the scene in the garden. Poor Ajuga ... She didn't stop when told to and got a big booboo. Yoruichi got a bit of a shock too. Wonder how the others will react to the news that's taken back. And the ice cream distraction ... a guaranteed way to distract almost any kids.

Poor Szayel (and consequentially Karin), wonder what Yammey did to Szayel in order to get his way again ... Otherwise why would Yammey be so happy? I'm sure Karin will take aside trip to see what's going on.

Chap was great.

I haven't reviewed in awhile so I am going to say that I loved the way you handled all the character interactions in the last 2 chapters. Lets hope Ulqui's hollow form is a fruit bat Orihime will have enough to worry about a kid that can fly away from her let alone hunt everything that moves. Speaking of which I thought Orihime would have a craving for fruit. But oh well normal food for Orihime is funny too. Based on Tatsuki's reaction to Szayel'a question I am now fully for her having one since it would be a lot more interesting to see Tatsuki fight Szayel every step of the way when it comes to any sort of cooperation. Plus it would be funny to see a kid that loves to play in mud for more Szayel torture which I can totally see Tatsuki using that as a sort of revenge for having to put up with his experiments. Just hope for that kid's sake he or she inherents more human-like physical features than Ajuga did.

Yikes! I have a bad feeling Aizen knows about Karin's ability to claim.

how did you become such a good writter

Sorry for my late review and I must add that this is a review for your previous chapter, I mean chapter 65, because I didn’t find the time to read chapter 66 (& I wanna review after each chapter I read)

So first of all … I HATE YAMMY! more than I hate Aizen (and you made me hate him pretty badly in your story) Tatsuki was amazing and so IC that it scared me (I found her threats incredibly funny, but I doubt the mad scientist shared my opinion ).

Ok .. gotta go finish the next chapter