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for Prize of Victory

by NovaAlexandria

person Codry
schedule October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
“Only you could make text look intimidating, Byakuya-bo,” – this phrase made my day. I’ll keep it in mind for eternity *laugh*
And Ichigo might find out about Karin&Grimmy having a child.

… Aizen having an “interest” in Karin is a BAD thing, very bad. I guess I’ll have to wait and see.
Also I have to admit I’m pretty much sure that if Aizen finds out about her blood lineage, since he cannot conceive with Unohana (you told up so a few chapter back), he’ll force himself upon her. I don’t know what scares me the most: the possibility of Aizen raping Karin or Aizen raping Ajuga. I think the second because for some reason I think Karin would be tough enough to get over it.

BUT I don’t want either of them. Seriously, none!
person Black Storm Van Pendragon
schedule October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay~ Yoruichi's back! :D Pfff...the image of Ajuga nomming on Ulquiorra got me laughing into fits (again), I can picture Grimmjow laughing his ass off coupled with a maniacal proud grin somewhere....until he had to grab Ajuga safely out of Ulquiorra's reach the moment he felt him react....*stares off into space in amusement*
person bleachfan7
schedule October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
adorable chap. i really enjoy the 'domestic' chaps, ori's interaction w/ajuga & ajuga's saying ulqui smelled like food was my favorite part. so cute. definitely nice to see human karin showing she's got something to contribute & in general showing that all the claimed human women are competent & powerful in their own way, despite not having the level of reiatsu that espada have. dying for batbaby to make his/her appearance. really hope its a boy & the story goes long enough for ulqui's son & ajuga to become mates when grown. the royal blood business & aizen is really creepy (w/the implications of what aizen would do)--no safe place if anyone found out, since bugs may have an equally bad ending in store for the royal blooded folk as aizen would (he'd kill ukitake & all nobles left that might have some royal blood i'd assume).

til next chap, which i'm guessing will not be fluffy at all.
person JOler
schedule October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The visit with Szayel was definitely amusing ... and at the end it was a bit distressing. Hope Szayel is ok and Yammy gets stuck carrying any baby if he forces Szayel to do gene splicing. Nice seeing the interactions with Byakuya. (hoping something happens to Yammy soon).

Hmmm ... Sounds like Yoruichi got a bit more of an active 'welcome to the garden' than she is accustomed to; hope she is ok.
person dragoon_gal
schedule October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say I LOVE this story! It's amazing and I've been reading it for the past few days. I have to say keep up the good work and the cliff hanger on the end of 65 was mean, just saying. I hope you update soon though! Thank you for helping me procrastinate, I'm suppossed to be writing a term paper but your story was much more interesting. Again thank you so much for writing an awesome story!
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's been awhile and I was happy to catch up to the story. You are so creative with the things you think of. Karin being able to claim is amazing. I am actually growing fonder of her and Grim dude a bit. I still dislike Orihime, but I see how it adds to the plot. Tatsuki and Tesla are pure gold. I love pairings that you wouldn't normally think of, but they fit so well.
person bleachfan7
schedule October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
really enjoyed this chap. ajuga is such a cutie, & seeing ori & tatsuki in my mind's eye interacting w/the bundle of energy ajuga is made me chuckle, esp when at szayzel's. the scene w/bya at garden was lovely, but am wondering what (if any) horror befell ajuga at end of chap & also what yammy did to szay. update soon
person Onba
schedule October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, poor Yororich (how do you spell her name again?) is going to be eaten! I hope the gang can save her!

Great chapter!
person Black Storm Van Pendragon
schedule October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit, I cracked up, split my sides, and keeled over in absolute helpless laughter at the thought of Orihime suddenly eating NORMALLY due to her pregnancy and Szayel's “So you are saying strange eating habits have become normal?” isn't helping it ROTFLMAO XD Genius! I never thought of that possibility before XD Ah, I felt sorry for the unborn child before, now not anymore X'D ....Pfff.....*kneels over again*

Thanks, this and your latest TRK chapter made my day *hugs you tight*
person mandy
schedule October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i know who the cat is... i know who the cat is.. poor chick she cant get a break at all.. and by the way will bya-sama get his voice back because i think it so hot and get rid of yammy he is sick *gags* but other than that i look forward ever friday to this this fic and i check everyday just in case u put an extra on up.. thank thank you for making this story