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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to recommend a piece of fanfiction from here on the site, actually the piece that brought me here in the first place: http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/authors.php?no=1296789090
Sadly, its incomplete. I don't know how you'd feel about finishing another author's work, but I think it lends itself to your writing skills. Safe to say its been abandoned, last update (of any kind from that author) was early 2007.
Sadly, its incomplete. I don't know how you'd feel about finishing another author's work, but I think it lends itself to your writing skills. Safe to say its been abandoned, last update (of any kind from that author) was early 2007.
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm finally up to date with this fic after going MIA for a while and I must say that I love it more and more! That chapter with Azayel's punishment made me smile like an idiot the entire time while reading it. I'm starting to hate Nnoitra less now but I hate Yammy now more than ever. I remember you asked if we saw the Royal Blood twist coming and I didn't. And yes I have read the last chapter of Bleach and I'm happy I finally know what Urahara and Isshin were talking about because somehow I was imagining the worst. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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August 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uuuu … I love Grimmjow and Karin so much.
Ohhh .. yeah I read the latest manga of Bleach. Truth to be told, I hoped that the mystery shinigami would be Karin, but I guess Kubo doesn’t want to make Karin important. After all she has fewer followers than Hinamori.
I’m not going to continue on this subject because I may exceed the M+ language limit.
I was a little unimpressed because the last manga was too predictable. It was a déjà vu for Aizen’s impressive entrance. I was something like “Yeah, he’s bad … so? I knew that from the start. I mean, look at his face. Aizen version 2.0. Please upgrade it”
Ohhh .. yeah I read the latest manga of Bleach. Truth to be told, I hoped that the mystery shinigami would be Karin, but I guess Kubo doesn’t want to make Karin important. After all she has fewer followers than Hinamori.
I’m not going to continue on this subject because I may exceed the M+ language limit.
I was a little unimpressed because the last manga was too predictable. It was a déjà vu for Aizen’s impressive entrance. I was something like “Yeah, he’s bad … so? I knew that from the start. I mean, look at his face. Aizen version 2.0. Please upgrade it”
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August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I did read the latest Bleach chapter! I nearly squealed I'm excitement. So excited.
Anywho, this chapter was nice. I'm glad to see Matsumoto happier. Orihime too! I'm excited for Ajuga to be growing up. That's going to be a hell of an adventure for Karin and Grimmjow.
Anywho, this chapter was nice. I'm glad to see Matsumoto happier. Orihime too! I'm excited for Ajuga to be growing up. That's going to be a hell of an adventure for Karin and Grimmjow.
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August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i realy like your story. sincew ukitake is my favorite character, cant you make a love story for him too, when he is with stark aniway wy not with him. they match quiet well
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August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. So Ajuga is turning into quite the huntress much to her mom's chagrin I take it. Cute scene with Ulquiora and Orahime. Love how sweet Nnoitra and Tesra are being with the girls. So glad Nnoitra and Rangeku are getting along better ~ hope Rangeku doesn't have problems with the bugs since she hasn't fought in a while. From his comment I wonder if Nnoitra would have given Rangeku her Zanpakto back if he had the option (what better way for him to say 'I love and trust you' to her ~ and shock the panties quite literally off her ~ than that?) I wonder if Rangeku realizes that she has Nnoitra hooked so completely that he'd probably give his own undead life to protect her if he felt it would keep her safe (and that he kept her hidden and locked away because deep down where even he couldn't find it an insecure little whisper kept telling him that he was totally unworthy of the Goddess he'd taken and she'd either leave him for someone more worthy or be stolen by someone who wanted to hurt him and take his greatest treasure).
Sadly no one locally carries the manga so I am reliant on the televised version and way behind the manga most likely.
As for Szayel, I'm sure from his point of view none of his punishments are humorous or enjoyable. I agree about the nickname and how kids are when teasing someone (shudder ~ given that hollows and reapers are pretty much immortal once they become adults ~ could you see Ajuga as a flirty fledgling adult setting her sights on Szayel as her first NON-food conquest ~ and literally going all 'sex-kitten' on him ~ not to mention the horror and mortification Karin, Grimmjow, and Nemu would feel). Wonder if the terror of watching those two will change his attitude about having kids of his own (especially if Ajuga decides he is a hunt worthy practice target ~ especially hen bent over so she can get a good claws assisted perch on his rump while nipping the back of his neck ~ not seriously sinking her teeth in of course but still grazing his neck).
Hope Ajuga is safe and well after the bug attack. Know mom & dad will be in distress ~ wouldn't want to be the one to tell either one that we STILL haven't found her ... Would be great if Szayel's tracking device was helpful in finding her though.
Sadly no one locally carries the manga so I am reliant on the televised version and way behind the manga most likely.
As for Szayel, I'm sure from his point of view none of his punishments are humorous or enjoyable. I agree about the nickname and how kids are when teasing someone (shudder ~ given that hollows and reapers are pretty much immortal once they become adults ~ could you see Ajuga as a flirty fledgling adult setting her sights on Szayel as her first NON-food conquest ~ and literally going all 'sex-kitten' on him ~ not to mention the horror and mortification Karin, Grimmjow, and Nemu would feel). Wonder if the terror of watching those two will change his attitude about having kids of his own (especially if Ajuga decides he is a hunt worthy practice target ~ especially hen bent over so she can get a good claws assisted perch on his rump while nipping the back of his neck ~ not seriously sinking her teeth in of course but still grazing his neck).
Hope Ajuga is safe and well after the bug attack. Know mom & dad will be in distress ~ wouldn't want to be the one to tell either one that we STILL haven't found her ... Would be great if Szayel's tracking device was helpful in finding her though.
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August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read the new bleach and Im just happy things are somewhat back to normal.
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August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
enjoyed this chap a lot. got a bit of ulquihime--thx for that!!!! wish scene had started at beginning so we knew how they ended up in park near grid. doesn't seem like an ulqui thing to do that outdoors where someone might see (definitely a grimmy thing), but the exchange of affection & the interaction w/zanpakto was such a nice touch. loved that most.
love the family scenes w/grim & ajuga doing hollow-stuff. the 'mama cook' was just so damn cute, even though i could imagine her w/blood & animal fur bits covering her face & body. to be karin (or any mom) in that setting & keep a straight 'oh what a good little girl' face on would take such inner strength!
the double date was cute too, & i hope things get better w/noi as he sees her fighting--that he deems her more of an equal than property.
chap of bleach not very surprising. the shorter hair & i guess lieutenant arm band on r was nice. i's updated outfit was nice too.
love the family scenes w/grim & ajuga doing hollow-stuff. the 'mama cook' was just so damn cute, even though i could imagine her w/blood & animal fur bits covering her face & body. to be karin (or any mom) in that setting & keep a straight 'oh what a good little girl' face on would take such inner strength!
the double date was cute too, & i hope things get better w/noi as he sees her fighting--that he deems her more of an equal than property.
chap of bleach not very surprising. the shorter hair & i guess lieutenant arm band on r was nice. i's updated outfit was nice too.
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July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm ... Feel so sorry for Szayel (though you know he adores the kids ... Guess he will just have to get Nemu to make a child proof area for the kids to play where he can see and talk to them at all times ... And still be able to step away for a few if needed ... Perhaps with monitor screens so he can safely see what he needs to without giving the kids access ... He's gonna need an area like that anyway if his 'fertility experiment' with Nemu is a success).
Wasn't sure what to expect in the way of punishment ... wasn't sure how old he appeared at this time until just before the spanking (he seems a bit old for that but ... you never know). I rarely laugh at anything truthfully, though you did manage to get a grin to cross my face. Actually I would probably have told him about the weekly babysitting first ... and told him I'd need more time to decide on the specifics of the rest of his punishment ~ and for him not to worry because I definitely wouldn't forget (then give him an evil contemplative grin) ... with any luck he'd be so terrified about what I was considering behind that grin that he'd squeak in falseto any time he was in my presence and develop a very embarrassing bladder (and possibly bowel) disorder as well. Let him explain why he had such a serious accident when he saw me at the next Claim meeting (turns around while chatting with one or two other Espada or even briefly with Aisen ... then having to bolt for the door and do a quick cleanup and change) ... lol (evil grin). He'd probably torture himself so much with his own imagination that all I'd have to do would be give him a contemplative once over while he was looking in my direction (looking like I was considering my 'punishment' options for his transgressions). Of course a quietly whispered "just wait for it ... I like to hear you whimper" might be added on occasion just for good measure.
Now if only she (or someone else) could torture Yammey like that until he had a complete nervous breakdown ...
Wasn't sure what to expect in the way of punishment ... wasn't sure how old he appeared at this time until just before the spanking (he seems a bit old for that but ... you never know). I rarely laugh at anything truthfully, though you did manage to get a grin to cross my face. Actually I would probably have told him about the weekly babysitting first ... and told him I'd need more time to decide on the specifics of the rest of his punishment ~ and for him not to worry because I definitely wouldn't forget (then give him an evil contemplative grin) ... with any luck he'd be so terrified about what I was considering behind that grin that he'd squeak in falseto any time he was in my presence and develop a very embarrassing bladder (and possibly bowel) disorder as well. Let him explain why he had such a serious accident when he saw me at the next Claim meeting (turns around while chatting with one or two other Espada or even briefly with Aisen ... then having to bolt for the door and do a quick cleanup and change) ... lol (evil grin). He'd probably torture himself so much with his own imagination that all I'd have to do would be give him a contemplative once over while he was looking in my direction (looking like I was considering my 'punishment' options for his transgressions). Of course a quietly whispered "just wait for it ... I like to hear you whimper" might be added on occasion just for good measure.
Now if only she (or someone else) could torture Yammey like that until he had a complete nervous breakdown ...
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July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
U know, I have been wondering, what will happen when Aizen finds out Yuzu is gone? So anyway kill Yammy and let Grimmjaw "claim" him (read: let Karin persuad Grimmjow to let her claim her, since Aizen doesnt know who's who's pet). Been playing with that idea for a while... just thought I'd let you know. Love the story! Keep it up and give us more Karin/Grimmjow goodness.