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by NovaAlexandria

person Anon
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Would like to see Unohana finally get hugely pregnant with a vengeance. Preferably with an element of public humiliation or pregnant by something like a dog, but Unohana getting pregnant at all is enough for me.
person JOler
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ouch ... I feel sorry for Szayel's lab. I don't know if Karin liked the workout more, the chance to visit her friends more, or a break from the kids more.

Glad to see Ajuga is learning to talk better. I believe she will probably be as adept with words as Hana is with numbers ... and that Szayel's interest in Hana might increase because she is so good with numbers (may test her with increasingly difficult problems and such ... which wouldn't really be a bad thing since it would just make her learn more complex math quicker).
person Codry
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god ... i can’t believe she spanked him. Really … I’m trying to comprehend the fact that Karin really, as in really, spanked an Espada. She’s such a vixen.
I have a little question ... I can guess the answer, but it can’t hurt to ask. Does Grimmjow know about her royal blood and implicitly his daughter’s?

Hell yeah … it was the best thing I ever read. So … is there any chance that we will see some “refreshing” the claim between Grimmjow and Karin
person bleachfan7
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very enjoyable couple of chaps. saw artwork too. dag, aizen is such a monster just idea of 'punishment' by anyone strikes such terror. i'd expect ajuga to age faster since she's half hollow. can't imagine hollow would mature slowly given the imminent dangers. growing quick would have become an evolutionary adaptation, no?

grim is such a cutie pie in dad mode. his libido got the best of him in end though... heehee.

super psyched to hear next chap will include some u-h time. & non-traumatic park time is cherry on top.
person Nightqueen
schedule July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Absolutely love this last chapter! I soooo didn't see the spanking coming but did I laugh my way to the end!!! You are a terrific storyteller! I rather love the relationships Karin has made with all the various inhabitants of the Soul Society. Although she's very young she's taken to the role of mother like a duck to water. I think that's exactly what Szayel needs a mother figure to keep his experimenting tendencies under control. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for this tale. You really have brought these characters to life!
person FY
schedule July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wish I had Starrk's cero guns. Those were pretty beast. This chapter was cute and fluffy and nice!
person FY
schedule July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lmao! This was awesome. I wasn't sure what she was going to do at first then when she told him to bend across her lap I was like oh nooo. Worst fears confirmed. I wish I could draw. I'm taking a digital imaging class this fall. One of my first projects will be an expiremented on Ajuga. With octopus tentacles! So cute.
person FY
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Most stories wane off and get less exciting but not this one! Sorry I'm not reviewing as adamantly. It's a pain to do on my phone (my computer is being fixed qq). But every so often I will. I always have a million thoughts running through my head and them I go to write the review and I have no idea. I'm just excited.
person FY
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank god you are going to kill him off. I don't care how. Just do it. My tummy feels sick. Yammy is disgusting. Physically and all over. He's just gross.
person FY
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I feel like I have to review. Having Tesra slap Noittra was so win. I've warmed up to Noittra a little but am still iffy. I did not forsee Karin claiming others. It's awesome though. Amazing concept. Oh. The other thing I was thinking about! Szayel and Ajuga's interaction is so cute and creepy at the same time.