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by NovaAlexandria

person speedgo41
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yoroichi..
person AnonX
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, but not so nice for Byakuya. Yammy seemed, how to put it, less than pleased. And a displeased Yammy is... rather unpleasant to deal with (understatement of the week).

Also, nice question there at the end, which Shinigami would I want tied to mah bed, hmm? Lulzer, that's hard to answer... Lemmme think...

Alright, Soi-Fon, Kuchiki Rukia and Kotetsu Kiyone.

I have a thing for petite, lively women. Although... Kotetsu Isane... She's pretty hot too, and she's, like, super-tall and, well, demure/shy/meek(something like that?, so I suppose I like 'em that way too.



person Xeno
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good chap. It really made me laugh! PoV needs more Byakkun... As for the question, I honestly have to take the easy way out and say Matsumoto. As a more abstract pick, I might choose Nanao-chan. It would be nice to bring out her tsundere side. Like I said before though, I'm male, so my picks are a tad bit limited. On a side note, how old are Ajuga and Hana-chan? They're acting like they're 3 and 7!!!
person Lilibet
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your work keeps getting better and better.
Thank you so much for updating . I had a really bad week and reading your story really made me feel better.
To answer your question I would choose Byakuya, but it's soooo hard to choose just one. I want to play with most of the guys.
person jensofia
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Who to pair Ukitake with? Is Kiyone still alive in your fanfic? I was re-watching an old episode where she was arguing with Sentaro over who respected their captain more and at one point Kiyone accidentally blurted out "I respect you so much that I'd even say I love you." If that was a genuine Freudian slip she had this pairing might work
person JOler
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Hope something happens to Yammey soon ... he's seriously starting to get on my nerves. Glad Byakuya is going to try to set up some teachers for those wanting to learn (hope things settle down soon so Lily-chan can join in the learning experience). Love Hana's attitude when the servant messed up his math.

Hmmm which shinigami ... Well, I may miss one or two ... Byakuya, Ukitaki, and/or Urahara. (they are all smart, polite, yummy hot, and relatively polite and gentle natured considering everything ... And Urahara has a bit of a humorous side on occasion ... But while looks are nice for first interest it takes brains and personality to keep my interest ~ and they have acceptable personalities in my opinion).
person Karinkurosakihitsugaya913
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter. It ia so cute. I just love those two girls. I can't wait to read the next chapters. If I could tie a shinigami to my bed it would have to be hisagi. I just love him. Or shunsui. I love both. Lol. Update soon.
person jreel08
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I want Kyouraku Shunsui tied to my bed but I wouldn't have to tie him down cause lord knows he's a playboy.

Good chapter. Kind wish either Rukia or Karin would off Yammy. Suddenly wishing Renji was okay too :(
person bright
schedule July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Keep turning out chapters, I'm still enjoying your story! As for your question, the choices are rather limited for a heterosexual male, but I'd say unohana and her lieutenant for my main pick, because she's the most appealing out of the bunch. Maybe Soi Fon, but only if she was very very unconscious. (If these characters can use reiatsu to augment their strength in their fists, they can use it anywhere. If she were awake I'd never be able to use a certain piece of my anatomy again.)
All the other characters are unappealing: Matsumoto is probably a slut, rukia and hinamori annoy the heck out of me ><
person ChelseaPlume
schedule July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I can rightly say why yaoi is so popular, but it's probably because the vast majority of the readers and writers on here are female, and we seem to like the image of men making love to men. I sometimes like that too, except when the male in question is definitely hetero, and they have been portrayed as gay. Also, I can't say I like the ones where all of the gay men are loving partners and all of the women are bitches. Seen that a few times, too. A nice balance is much preferrable to a one-sided rant. Also, don't care at all for portrayals of relationships between minors (12, 13, etc) and people who are far too old to know better (23,25, etc) that just freaks me out. Hey, though, I know that's just me!