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ukitake would be cute with yuzu. He needs someone that would be sweet to him. I'm not quite sure how that would fit with your current story but it just was what my brain was screaming when I heard the question.

Also, I have a question for you. How do you get started when u write fan fiction? I have lots of ideas but I'm not quite sure how to get started. I started stories from other animes before without problem but it so hard to start bleach ones for me. Feel free to email me if you would like. My email is posted publically on my profile page.

As always, devoted fan. Reread this once a week!!!!

Don’t worry about some stupid reviewers … they are just jealous that they aren’t amazing writers like you :d
I loved this chapter …but still ... fluff doesn’t burn *laugh*
I have a little question for you; it doesn’t involve the story’s plot. You said that Ulqui is hard to write, but don’t you think that Aizen is even harder?

I think Nanao is perfect for Ukitake. I know that you probably fear the cliché of your best friend’s girlfriend, but … duuno … it’s your choice. I’m such a great help, right?

Lad to see Rangeku finally have some much needed 'girl chat' time. Glad Tatsuki and Nnoitra hit it off so well ... He probably won't fuss too much if Tesra makes it a habit of bringing her by for visits and Tatsuki might even get Tesra to help Rangeku coax Nnoitra into letting both girls go out with Tesra on occasion since there will be another female in the group. Hope to see a bit more of how things are progressing ... Still hoping to see Nnoitra go into shock and panic mode if Rangeku gets pregnant (even if it takes a while longer).

That flamer was just jealous because you write so well ... they had plenty of warnings and could have just skipped any section that was too disagreeable to them.

Ukitaki pairing? Unohana would be first of course ... But I'd think if Nel could control which version of her she would be in that would be a good pairing too ... She did show her mature caring side by taking care of her fractiones like a mom would, she was mature enough to calmly put Nnoitra in his place about being a bully, and she still shows a caring side toward anyone who behaves nicely (like Ichigo and friends ... even if they aren't of hollow origin). Besides ... She could meet Ukitake as a grown up and not let him see her little girl side for a while if she had that control ... and could let him see her inner (occasionally outer) child once he was hooked on her. Afterall Grimmjow is taken and that is who she is normally paired with.

reguarding Ukitake's potential relationships i've seen some greats story's revolving around him and Nemu. However, with the direction your story's going this pairing wouldn't work you'd it.

I love this chapter! Tesra and Tatsuki are now one of my new favorite couples! They are so wonderful to watch! I hope you continue to write about them in the future! Love this whole storyline and the way you've written the characters! Terrific job!

i don't think gin deserves all that torture, aizen & yammy do. gin did bad things trying to not have aizen suspect betrayal was coming, so even though he had good intentions, he did have some punishment coming. its very different from the true evil of an aizen or the stupid selfish brutality of a yammy. really, i don't think i'd even wish all that's happened to gin in this fic on aizen, its just too horrific to wish it on anyone. its akin to what we christians expect hell will be like--eternal endless pain & torture.

are there condoms in sereitei? for tats i mean... actually, ori can undo any conception that may accidentally befall tats, now that i think about it. also, am sure its not gonna happen, but if ori could get to gin, she could reverse all the damage done to gin's body & make him strong again, so when time comes for aizen to die, its gin after all that he's been thru to finally strike the killing blow. that way he finally redeems his vow of vengeance for rangiku. curious to learn who else bugs are gonna go for that has royal blood. wish ori was one of them since i'm wishing there were more ulquihime in story (again, know that's not happening).

Poor Gin! Whatever shit he's caused in the past, he's more than paid for now. His single minded devotion to keeping Rangiku, and now Retsu, safe, more that exculpates him for the bad things he once did. After all, he did do them for a 'good' reason (even if he enjoyed it while he was doing it). Gin is one of those great undiscovered characters who linger behind the scenes for much too long, and then they die and you realize you really would've liked to learn more about them. That's why I'm pleased he's still in your story. Also...I've been meaning to tell you this for a long time, but I really think your portrayal of Aizen is probably the best one on this site. I haven't ever seen Aizen as a sexual being. Sex, for him, would be a means to an end, and not the end in itself. Others have portrayed him as rapist and sadist, and lover, but to me he never seemed like sex would be a necessity for him so those stories about him never ring true to me. That he would use sex as a weapon, absolutely, but probably not do the deed himself but have someone else do it for him. I think the only thing that ever truly turns Aizen on is power, pure and simple. Your Aizen pursues sex as a means to have a child, but it's all 'wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am' and I'm sure Unohana is forever grateful for that! The Aizen that falls in love and chases others (It seems to be mostly men, for some odd reason lol), is giving up that power by doing so. Just thought I should share!

Can't wait to read the next chapter. It sounds cute. This chapter was great. The person that I think will be a perfect match for Ukitake would be Unohana. That is who I thought he would always be with for some reason. She is like a mother figure and he is lime a father figure.

The appointment that got interrupted was cute (except for Yammy ... He just has this way of making the cutest or most romantic scene do a massive crash and burn). Glad Karin was able to stop Szayel's machine from exploding ... and that little Hana is of interest as well to him ... it's going to make her sooo happy.

I hope Yammy's samples all get lost and Byakuya's samples are the only samples used. Since no clue is given concerning the potential egg donor I'd say it would be nice if it was another 'royal decendent' so the 'mystery strand' can get stronger. I wonder if Szayel will insist on blood samples from Byakuya if the fertilization takes place (and blows up his machine again ... Informing him belatedly of the presence of the mystery strand).

I'm also curious ... Can all members with the 'mystery strand' cast a claim? Can the members with the strand help boost each others abilities? Now that Ajuga has seen mama cast a claim several times (she might see riatsu like mama ... we don't know yet) would it be possible for her to cast a claim on one or more unsuspecting individuals? (that could be so funny and so distressing at the same time). Wonder if Hana will develop a similar ability. Wonder if Karin might be persuaded to act as an emergency donor if she's there and Yammy threatens to rip Szayel apart because he's being uncooperative (because of Karin's last order) ... of course Yammy wouldn't have to know that both samples being used to create the fetus are from Buakuya ... Making all donators in the royal line ... (oh well, just have to wait and see).

Pout, I know he has to grow back up but ... Wish we could have seen more of chibi Szayel... maybe next time ... and maybe we can see the others chibified as well and so we can see how they play together.

I knew there was something special about Karin's lineage and suspected it was from the shinigami side of the family ... just didn't think about it much.

Ouch ... I realize why Aisen is doing all that but I do feel bad for Gin since he has done things to protect his other friends. I hold Aisen more to blame since he started corrupting Gin while Gin was a little kid and more or less positioned himself in a parental/mentor roll in Gin's early life. I believe it was Aisen's corrupting influence and Gin's view of Aisen as a father substitute that led Gin to make some poor choices and decisions at critical times.

Personally I'd love to see two weekly posts (more on occasion) since you are so far ahead ... Like on Wednesdays and Saturdays or some similar split.