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Aizen really is a DICK. A colossal, humongous dick, at that!

I pity Gin. He might not exactly be a "good guy", even when taking into account that he was actually planning to kill Aizen from the start, but damn, he doesn't deserve the suffering he's enduring now.

And it is indeed true that the only good Yammy is a dead one... At least THIS Yammy. Horrible thing is, I think he's pretty in character. He just strikes me as the kind of sicko who'd enjoy tormenting people the way he's doing it to Byakuya.

Keep up the good work!

Oh oh oh!! It's a double post!! -squeals-

I'm starting to despise the Kuchiki clan a whole lot and hope that they kinda crash and burn together with Yami.
And Aizen is sick in the mind, not that we don't know that already. Sigh.

Great chapters as usual. I'm just wondering though, will the hidden Reio dood that's Karin's ancestor will have greater power than Aizen himself? It'd be hilarious if it turns out that way and destroy Aizen. Also, I wonder how will the other Espadas react when they find out Grimmjow is the consort of a princess (I'm going to assume Karin is a princess) and how Byakuya's brain will implode when the Kurosaki he dislike so much turns out to be much more 'regal' than him.

Questions this week!

Royal Lineage : Me! Somewhat. I was suspecting that her lineage might either come from the true King himself or the King from Hell or something, since his drones are grasshoppers and bugs kinda reminds me of belzabub.

Gin: Well.. he is rather pitiful but I don't really feel sorry just yet. Actually, I kinda respect him a lil cause throughout (both canon) and in here, he has been doing things his way to protect those he can despite knowing what the outcome will be.

So I read all of this and overall this is a good story, but there are things I don'tagree with so it made it really hard to read. The Orihime chapters were by far the hardest to read since I don't think Orihime would have reacted to a situation like that, but on the plusside I believe you have Tatsuki down except for her sex scene. The sex for her bothered me, because I feel like she would have been much harder than she was. I do understand it has been six years, but it is very hard for me to see Grim and Karin (I am sure I just spelled her name wrong). I liked there pairing at the start. I applaud you for thinking of something so unique, but as there pairing continued I lost interst completly. They are the main characters which makes this even harder to read since I have grown to really dislike her since her and Ichigo interacted. I am a recent fan of Bleach and I have read alot of the manga and I am by no means an expert, but Karin could have had more will she is Ichigo's sister. On the other hand I love the uniqueness of her power. You are simply amazing at coming up with a power and enemy that is believable. I really enjoy Byakkuya (I feel as if I spelled that wrong) even though I don't like that he is getting raped all of the time I do love how whenever he is written about in a chapter he has a strong will and still has emotions that make his behavior believable. I also enjoy Haribel being with Toshiro it was very interesting and you pulled it off well. Your characterization of Aizan is crazy good. He is definitly a beast! I am on the fence about Matsumoto (Spelling :()but I don't hate it I am just waiting to see more. I do won't to see more of Soi Fon since for some reason I feel her fall from grace is so very real and though disturbing I can see it happening. Retsu is perdect. I love the #1 espada and I can't remember his name right now, but he is awesome and his pairing with the white haired captian is wonderful in the weird respect they have for one another. Overall I guess I am saying I love your attention to the little details that make this story so facinating, but for the main characters I am missing the connect.

I think gin has had enough, man I'm starting to feel sorry for him.

I have wanted to see Gin again for awhile now but I'm almost regretting it! I'm glad there is going to be a little Aizen around though, there is just something about it I like.

Great two chapter! Love them both!

I laughed my ass off … Yammy can be so stupid, but the past part was when he realized (10 minutes later) that Szayel was younger … I was something like WTF

About the question … no … I had no idea that Isshin had royal blood

Yea! A double post! You made my day! Wow, chapter 50, and you have about 100 chapters already!?!? I hope your inspiration continues! Do I feel bad for Gin? Hhhhmmmm. Well, it's not hard to feel bad for anyone being tortured like he was by Aizen. But I think Gin has a lot of balls! Gin totally knew what he was doing and knew what the consequences would be if Aizen found out. If anything, I think I look up to him more than I feel bad for him. I mean, who else would have enough balls to try and pull one over on Aizen, knowing full well that he would eventually find out? Plus Gin totally took responsibility for his actions. He was given the opportunity to have the women be tortured instead of him (even if he didn't know that Aizen wouldn't have gone through with it and would have just killed him). So, even if it was kinda hard reading the torture scene.....I don't feel that bad for him. Plus, I love Gin, I just can't see myself ever really feeling pity for him, I think he's just too strong of a character to feel pity for.

First off, I wanna say that you have corrupted me, utterly and completely - not that I'm complaining, mind you, for opening my brains into such a lustrous world of Grimmjow/Karin. I've been quite a staunch supporter of HitsuKarin (though truthfully, I just adore Karin too much and don't really care much who she is with, excluding OCs) as long as she is the main character. Also, I'm not much of a smut/erotica sort of reader but you truly hooked me with Prize of Victory. Granted, I love the dark themes that came along with it and the whole violence jazz shcbangz thing.

I followed (stalked) you from fanfiction.net due to curiousity since you've mentioned that it's much more darker here and to my pleasant surprise, the story is much more farther along than ff.net! This 'trip' certainly made me feel like a pirate who found a treasure chest on an abandoned island with many more treasures awaiting for their turn since the story is unended yet.

I love how you have developed the relationships for each character, showing briefly about their lives and cleaning up the readers curiousity, tying loose ends. Little Hana and Ajuga are absolutely adorable! Though I wonder if Ajuga will gain a human form as she grows older and her current form be her ressurecion. Also, it'd be rather hilarious if Karin gets knocked up again due to that unique DNA (partially to see Grimmjow in a frenzy again, though it might be more amusing to see him in a craze if Karin gets kidnapped by said drone's master :D).

It's really interesting how the story has developed so far and I can't help but to wonder - are the drones working for someone from hell (since from what I've computed, the drone's master should be of a different species. If not, an additional special ability for a noble family) or one of the lost noble family. Of maybe, someone from the true King's Castle? Since, ya'know, the King's Key opens the gate to the true King or something like that. And if Aizen's whole kami thing might be an ascension but not yet the King's King or something. You've truly made my imaginations run wild in trying to analyze even though I know for sure that The Person, is definitely Karin's ancestor or maybe her Grandpapa.

Finally, for this week's question, I'd say Grimmjow (sorry Karin), or Syazel (kinky kinky).

All in all, I really love reading your fic. It's hard to find such an engaging fanfiction around anymore that truly spurs me to write a long essay as a review. I can't wait for the next chapter and hope that this fic will last for a long long time (yes I love this THAT much). Thank you for your marvelous job so far and please keep it up! :D

Your Stalker,
Mori

True ... it was a funny chapter :)), but I really love this couple: Tesra and Tatsuki. Truth to be told … I love all your couples … it’s your fault that I became a bleach crack fan :))

As for your question … I don’t have to think, because the answer is obvious: GRIMMJOW!!!
I still carry the hope that he’s alive; in the anime I mean. :D

And about Isshin, I have no idea what’s the deal with him, and I have a question … Is he alive (in your story)?

i adore the kids & how they relate to szayzel, especially ajuga. i'm really dying for someone to do artwork of her & parents! you've written her to be considerably more advanced cognitively than her speech abilities seem to be. & she's still only at creeping/crawling stage despite understanding speech & situations. hope yammi's dna is excluded from babymaking process. glad you said it won't be an mpreg situation since poor bya has been thru so much here already. oh, and didn't see hana being royalty too. so she's also gonna be targeted, huh. bya too, and if there is a bya baby, it as well, no? i'm in no hurry to revisit escapees. can't stand ichiruki pairing so even the brief mention in this chap turned my stomach a bit (i was having lunch). lots of excitement coming soon, it seems. can't wait.