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It's lovely that 'Karin-chan' tells her little pet Szayel not to harm Byakuya further, but it doesn't lessen the fact that Yammy rapes him whenever he feels the need. Nor does it change the fact that 'little pet Szayel' destroyed Renji's soul and made him a zombie. Or...that pet Szayel has done untold damage to other shinigami with his experiments. Try as you might, you're not going to get me to like Szayel or Yammy or Nnoitra in any way unless they undergo a radical change of heart. In fact...I can tell you--I'm only going to like Yammy when he's dead.

WAAAAH KAWAIIIII~

I love this story, I spent like 2 days straight just reading it!! Start to chapter 48, and wow!!! This was good. I loved the way the smut just added to the plot not took away from it, and not in too corny a way.

Wonderful. Just wonderful!!

~Sarah

Loved the way you handled your Tesla/Tatsuki chapter. Also I was worried that Tesla lived with Nnoitra in your fanfic (I don't think you made that all that clear that he didn't in previous chapters) and if that was the case Nnoitra might direct some of his violent outbursts at Tatsuki then Tesla wouldn't be able to do much about it. Looks like that's not as likely to happen as I was afraid it was.

By the way I have thought of something funny. You know how Grimmjow was using Karin's pregnancy to one up Ulquiorra well I thought that if you had Both Orihime and Tatsuki get knocked up about the same time and before she moves in with Tesla it would cause some confusion over who the father is to people who don't know what's really going on. Then have Ulquiorra let Grimmjow believe he got them both pregnant at first just to piss him off.

The best Arrancar to have tied to my bed would be Grimmy since he would have the most priceless facial expression in that situation.

The chapter is fine. Actually I'm probably not going to quit reading unless you write about something that seriously distresses me since I can opt to skip a chapter if it distresses me. I might pout because I don't care for a particular pairing but I can always hope that in the next fic you'll give my choice of pairing a try ... I can wait ...
Now then ... If you utterly obliterate one or more of my favorite characters there might ... MIGHT ... be an issue with my reading the fic.

As for my espada of choice? ... Aaaargh ... I can't decide ... First off I'm not a Dom type so THEY wouldn't be the one held prisoner ... and which one I'd like to spend time with would depend on my mood at the moment.

All night long ... Tesra ... Pigs are rumored to have the most stamina and staying power of any animal on Earth

Slow and cuddly ... Starrk ... He seems the type to just relax and take it slow and easy and be content to cuddle a lot

Experimenting ... Szayel ... of course

Oral play ... Nnoitra ... he's got the tongue for it

Hard and fast ... Grimmjow ... He's the ruff type

A challenge ... Ulquiora ... it would be fun to make him react

If I had any arrancar chained to my bed. It would be Grimmjow or stark. Those two or my favorite ones. I can't get enough of them. Love love loved this chapter. The pairing is great and I wouldn't be suprised if you made Tatsuki pregnant. Update soon!

Love the latest chapter! I found Tesra's "first time" to be quite entertaining! Now which Arrancar would I have chained to my bed? Does it have to be just one? I would love to have both Grimmjow and Ulquiorra. But if I can only have one, sorry Grimmy, I am just way too obsessed with Ulqui! Actually, he's chained to my bed right now, at least he was last time I checked.......well, at least in my dreams!

Great chapter again. It was cool to see that level of akwardness that plagued that whole chapter, mixed with hilarity and a tad bit of sexy time. As of the question of the week... I'm male (one of the few) so my choice is pretty much default. NEL freakin' TU!!! Oh, and for the record, I don't know how you're going to explain Isshin's "past", but my theory always was that he was the ex-captain of the 11th squad. In order to escape and "elope" with Misaki, he cooperated with Kenpachi to fake his death. Notice how Isshin only has the sleeves of his old haori, and Kenpachi is missing his?

Love it! love it! Love it! I think this pairing is going to be one of my favorites and I hope we see more of their developing relationship! You're a very skilled storyteller and I look forward to each chapter!!

happy tats deflowering was consensual & non-violent. it was rather funny how quick ulqui was in getting rid of her. the descriptions of tesla's brain cells were the funniest part of chap.

i'd have grimmy chained. luv ulqui, but he's a little too slim & emotionless for my taste if he were a real human.

"How long to you think it will be before Orihime finally conceives?"

Well, there is a fine line between what I think and desire and as a (horribly) bias individual I would have to say; soon! But seriously, I am guessing it will be soon enough so that play dates with Ajuga will be possible.