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Awww, I like Tesra in yer fic XD I can't wait to see Grimmjow return and spend more time with the family *squirms* I'm kinda missing the GrimmKarin moments (or you could say I want moar).

As for your question about favourite pairings... well I'm sure you could guess mine from my gallery *nervous chuckle* GrimmIchi's my fav yaoi pairing while IchiRuki is my fav het pairing, other than that I generally like any Grimmjow x Anyone and Ichigo x Anyone (of course, depending on who they're paired up with as there are some characters I can't see them with).

I wonder if Karin could practice the claiming technique on Grimjow (she would probally be more comfortable using it on him). Grimjow hates Aizen so much that I bet he would gladly volunteer even if it didn't make Arrancars horny. Plus it would put that spice back into their relationship.

If you're still deciding how Yammy should die, I'd like to see him suffer a fate I read in a Mercedes Lackey novel: get trapped in his mind reliving the horror he's inflicted on others until he truly repents. Since he's probably incapable of repenting, he would suffer for a long, long time. How to achieve this... Well, not really sure, but if Aizen will be sticking around and not killed, his zanpakuto could do this. And there are dozens of kido spells that aren't documented and that you could probably invent.

Just as much as killing Yammy off properly, though, I ask you to inflict some serious vengeance on the Kuchiki "family" who not only forced Byakuya into this situation but hassle him all the time too. Only Rukia and Byakuya deserve the Kuckiki name anymore.

Also wanted to say that I'm quite enjoying the story. I usually exclusively read m/m stories, but something about this one's description pulled me in to try the first chapter, and that hooked me. Now that I've accustomed my eyes to skim over any explicit het sex, I'm in for the long haul. This whole paragraph is meant to be a compliment, really. Kudos for writing a complex, interestng story and characters I love to hate.

fun chap! am dying to see artwork of the baby! please, someone w/skills, do a jag family portrait! love the idea that down the line, they can orchestrate a rebellion against aizen by having karin claim anyone still loyal to him (& if baby has same power & she's maturing at a fast rate, it can be the both of them). too funny tesla got a boner from the experiment. hope we get back to ulquihime soon. started reading this for that pairing. still hopeful there will be a bat-baby hybrid down the road.

OMG, poor Tesra, but seriously what a riot it was *ROTFLMAO* XD


*slaps forehead*...Didn't see that coming...

Lol excellent chapter. Love Karen's ability but she does need an equal vulnerability so she doesn't become too much of a super human woman. It would be kind of nice for her to be able to claim from a distance but it would be better if she couldn't most likely; however now that Ajuga has 'seen' it (presuming it hasn't been done with her present or awake) it would be hillarious if SHE learned to claim from a distance and just focus on what she wanted instead of vocalizing it ... Could you see how much fun she could have with Szayel ... And how much he'd have to grin and bear it to get his samples once she figured out her abilities (and I doubt she'd limit herself if she thought she could get away with it). Of course if Karin COULD claim from a distance then the next claims meeting could turn very interesting (claim that sleazy Yammy and order him to have throat operation reversed ... Then do as Byakuya orders ... Lol .. Same with Baragan and Soi Fon for the voice thing). Next time she could work on Noitra treating Rangeku like less of a 'bound woman'.

In answer to the question ... I'd honestly not given it any real thought (but definitely keep it a secret from Aizen)

Mofaf1

Love your story soooo... much. However, I dislike how karin is now super powerful can do things that humans/shinigami aren't supposed to be able to do, she's like Ichigo, she just get stronger and stronger even when it's impossible and she's had way less training than other characters, she hasn't hit the point of overkill yet like Ichigo has but i feel like she is creeping closer and closer. I do like Nnoitra and Rangiku's pairing though and would like to see more of it. While i do love grimm/karin their relationship feels so domestic right now and I would be eager to see more drama and spice to it later. Also... POOR BYAKUYA!!! DIE YAMMY!

Srry for the late review, but like any other student I’m in session …. Anyway I’m happy that I passed my algebra exam :))

I really felt bad for Byakuya :( You can always add an OC named Codry that will kill him; dunno how yet, but … I’ll come with an idea.

I think that the only person that has the power to kill Yammy is Aizen. Let’s be serious, some locusts cannot hurt the Zero Espada, but I can see Yammy piss off Aizen, because he “meddled” in his business (which can be Karin and her daughter .. or even Hana)
So … since Aizen is such a “good guy” Yammy will have a painful death … a very painful death. I cannot see the “kami” rape a prehistorical ape, but I’m sure there are better ways to make someone suffer, apart from rape.

Or he can let someone else do the job ….

I really like this fanfic! I read the first 37 chapters straight through in one day even though i had exams to study for >.< lol
Can't wait to see where you take this unconventional pairing. I hope Yammy dies as slowly and torturous as possible

I really like the interaction between Byakuya and Karin and really hope to see more of that in the future chapters. I must confess that I skipped through most of the Yammy/Byakuya moments, mostly because I don't have the stomach for it, but I think that was the intention anyways.

In response to your question, I would like to see Yammy killed in the most brutal way possible, preferably being shredded to bits by Senbonzakura. Although, it would likely not be possible, given that Yammy has the Claim over him. Perhaps you could have Rukia to be the one to kill him instead. I like the idea of Rukia being the one to save her brother, and by extension, the Kuchiki clan, although I'm not quite sure how that would play out, since power wise, Yammy is stronger than Rukia.