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Hmmm ... An alternative torture/death for Yammy ... Once Szayel determines the gestation/breeding cycle of the bugs ... Have Yammy totally piss off Aisen, have his abilities neutralized for a short time while he is handed over to Szayel. Once Szayel gets hold of him a few 'bug eggs' are emplaned into his scrotum and penis ... Then a dormant bug is implanted in the muscular ring of his rectum (the bug to be undrugged if he tries to rid himself of the other bugs). That way he has a choice ... Keep his dick and balls and let the bugs hatch and start feasting on him there ... Or castrate himself and the bug start eating him ass first.

I would have Yammy die in the most humiliating and painful way possible! Like have him know how it feels to be in Byakuya's place. I also really enjoy Byakuya and Karin's interaction so I really do hope you have more in store or us!(Also there interaction has actually had me looking for ByakuyaXKarin but don't worry GrimmjowXKarin are my top fav!) Anyways, Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

So, I had to go away and think about your question on how Yammy should die. That was after I read your last disturbing chapter with him and Byakuya. (You know you're doing your job when your readers have to go away and collect their thoughts before reviewing.) And, this is my idea. Byakuya regains Senbonzakura and releases in its bankai state. Since he can direct the petals with his hands lets explore how exact his control of them is. I think he should send them down Yammy's throat, up Yammy's ass, and, in a show of precision targetting--right down the slit of his penis. Oh, how glorious a revenge would that be. Not ripped to shreds from the outside in, but from the inside out, in an almost exact duplication of what Yammy has been doing to him! Can't wait to read the end of this story. I am looking forward to much vengeance and death and destruction. Bring it on!

Hmmm....is it bad that I check the AFF Bleach Archive regularly for a select number of stories and this is one? NAH! Lol I hardly ever look into new fics on this site but simply keep a check on older ones...like yours! This story is so brilliant, from the characters to the plot. And yes, Yammy needs to die. Preferably a slow, agonizingly painful, torturous death. Should I feel guilty for that? I don't think so. How would I kill Yammy....rip his guts out and have the other Espada deem him weak and end him. Torturous enough? Not quite but close ;)

For killing off Yami, here's an idea: have him bicker with Harribel at a meeting. Aizen could then be very cross with both of them, and to settle the argument have them fight to the death WITH their claims alongside them. Would be nice to see a 2v2 battle with mr kuchki trying to figure out a way to harm yami the entire time. Afterwards you could have harribel claim byukua as a prize, and have orihime restore his speech.

Might be nice to have inter-espada conflict going on. I think harrible and her claim could easily take yami and his is byukua was trying to help them.

skipped most of this for b/c its a dark yammy/bya abuse one, but did read snippet of the tea session w/karin & seeing hime & tats. am happy he got a chance to talk w/karin some. hope yama dies painfully and slowly of course, preferably being violated like he does to byaku regularly.

Hm, how would I kill Yami? Painfully of course, and slowly. Eaten alive by locusts, perhaps? Oh! How about executed by Aizen! Its plausible, Yami excels at being stupid and violent, never a good combination. Aizen would enjoy it too, I'm sure.

Wow! This story keeps getting better with each chapter. Yammy should get his little yammy cut off before he bites the dust. Can't wait till the next chapter.

YAY!! I love this story so much. I love Grimmjow and Karin pairing and I love how you intertwine everyone's story together. Great Job!!

Sorry I didn't get to review last chap. Both chaps are excellent. Glad to see Grimmjow agreeing to letting the girls have a 'sleepover' and (after reading both chaps) for Ulquiora agreeing to it ... Too bad all the surviving captives can't be 'sheltered' together in the most (or second most ~ since Aisen would take the best for himself) place while the Espadas, fractiones, taichous, and fukutaichous fought the bugs ... To give the claims and claimers a little less to worry about. (know I'd be worried if I was in either position).

Hmm how to see Yammy gotten rid of ... Aizen use his power to temporarily immobilize him so Szayel can truss him up spread eagle in mid air in an observation room ... Drain almost all of his riatsu ... Then do the observation hehehe ... With internal and external monitors going to collect all possible data ... Insert ONE live captured bug in his rectum via a huge dildo shaped container ... Then monitoring the bug's progress as it eats it's way out of yammy and then finishes the meal ... To see if there are specific targets the bug goes for first as well as any changes (energy or otherwise) that take place while the bug is feeding. Of course by the end the food source would be totally gone but ... Well he did prove useful to Aizen in the end (presuming he pisses Aizen off in some super big way before this all happens and is used as an example.

Due to the two claims rule I guess Byakuya would then be given to one of the three with one claim (Grimmjow, Noitra, or Harribel ... Most likely the last since the two males would probably not want him near their female in the event of another pregnancy. I kind of wonder if Aizen will eventually ask for Harribel or her fractiones to attempt to get pregnant as well since it would still be a mixed breeding pair and two males would make that request a bit easier to fulfill since the fertility of each could be low at any given time, especially after participating with one or two in one night already ...