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I have been wanting to reread this for a while, but I knew you were close to finishing the first part so I put it off. Might be my project for this weekend! I am absolutely amazed at what you have done with Szayel. I hated him. I mean hate.But you have turned him into a pitiable creature and finally a character I want to see triumph. I meant to tell you about the Hallibel and Toshiro chapter that it is some of the most sincere work I have read from either character, let alone the two being in the situation they are in.
Quite possibly the other thing I would add is that you do an excellent job of showing how the children mature emotionally and educationally but sometimes, it would be a nice reminder how big they physically are. And I totally could have missed some subtle references.
After I reread everything, I am going to try and give a better review of the overall work (besides, you know, that I love it lol) Best of luck with all teh craziness that the holidays bring and I hope we hear from you soon!

Well, I can say I thoroughly enjoyed this fic as I did your "Crossbreeding the Future" series (though I did skip past the rape scenes for my own sanity), and I eagerly await the coming of Part II, and January is fine by me. Untl then, Laters.

Well, sad to see it end for the moment. Truly was a bittersweet ending as they have seemingly found a solution to the swarm but still have problems at home and some people are still suffering abuse at the hands of their masters and they are all under the rule of a mad pseudo god. Hopefully Soi fon and a few other characters will get a bit more spotlight in the sequel. This story had some ups and downs but overall I enjoyed it immensely although I have never been a fan of time skips. I am also surprised Ichigo with his freaking savior complex hasn't mounted any more rescue attempts for other claimed individuals that aren't treated well by their masters. I patiently await the sequel.

I have followed this story for nearly a year, to see it come to an end¡ I really enjoyed reading, the "fluff" was there but also some very dramatic scenes.... i have read every chapter at least twice and have to give you tumbs up for making this scenario work (slavery and Stocolmo's sindrome turning into readable and beliavle fluffness.... not an easy feat¡)

Now i am afraid i must forget about it for a good while and stop checking every day for updates, until time allows you to get around to publishing part 2..... good thing though, as i have finals to contend with. Please do continue, this ending....... is not an ending¡, it leaves way too many lose strings, too many things in motion and too many interrogants...and a maniac on the throne and the worlds just about to collapse¡

This monster was truely a work of art. It made me cry, it made me yell out in joy. I hope, I can read the rest of the story. I think you should call Part 2 'Price of Victory' like they have to pay some sort of price because of their victory unsettled the Balance.

Nemu's babies sound gorgeous! And Renji being the doting uncle is sooo sweet. I've really loved this story and have happily read every last word. I look forward to part two even though it might be awhile. I think my favorite couple was Grimm and Karin, but I really enjoyed reading about Tatsuki and Tesla (tesra). Again, thank you for all your hard work on this mammoth piece of work! Take care.

Wow, I started reading this fic about a month ago, and while I'm usually not used to stories with sex in them (this is the first fic I've ever read through till the end on Adult Fanfiction), this was one of the most interesting fanfics I've read recently! Szayel is one of my favorite characters, and I enjoyed his characterization in this fic. I've never given much consideration to Karin as a deep character, so seeing her as the main character here was quite an interesting experience! The plot started getting more and more exciting towards the end, and I was eagerly awaiting the last 3 chapters after I finished reading the first hundred or so in about a week.

Good job, congrats for finishing Part I, and I look forward to Part II as well! :D

It has been truely awsome, Can't wait for part 2 :3

Let me start with saying this is my first review ever on any site. When I first noticed this story it had mid 90 chapters. What caught my eye first though was the Grimmjow and Karin pairing. After the first chapter I could not stop. In about three nights I was caught up in the story and tired at work each day. While waiting for the next chapters I read your HMK trilogy and was engrossed with the tale. A similar reaction awaited your Byakuya and Orihime stories. Your writing style is phenomenal. I await the continuation of this story with well placed hope. To pass the time however, I think I will reread this tale two or three more times.

Such a good chapter!!! I'm glad the Defense Net worked, and I can't wait see what else happens, and oh just one more chapter for part 1, I'm a little sad, but we can look forward to part 2!