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Will be interesting to see if Orihime gets pregnant now, with or without Ulqui's permission. I'm surprised Tatski isn't sighing a bit at being the only human there without a partner now that Yuzu is gone (it would be hilarious if she got the urge to catch a 'butterfly' once spring hit ... Wonder how fast Szayel would take to hiding if she went with Orahime to her appointments ... Or if he'd actually try to make arrangements with Ulqui-san ... Not that the pairing would ever happen). I half wonder if Tesla convinced Nnoitra to let Rangeku go because seeing one of her friends with a baby might awaken her own maternal instincts ... And even though he hasn't said anything I'm sure he'd like to be a daddy too sooner or later).

I thought Byakuya was rendered speechless by a procedure done by Szayel ... Will be interesting to see how he ends up talking to Karin and who his mystery visitor is ... Must be someone who can fix his voice somehow.

Hugs,

By the way, in my previous post I mentioned Szayel finally getting to see the baby. I know Szayel held her very briefly during the delivery but since that was an 'under duress' situation and he passed her off to Nemu as fast as possible it really doesn't count. He didn't really have time to register all the possible outcomes. So my prior question concerning Szayel and the baby is more about once he isn't in a high stress and super rushed situation. Like say the first 'well baby check' when she gets a bit fussy (cholic or hungry ... Or suddenly full diapers) and he has time to worry about Karin and/or Grimmjow's reaction to the baby fussing. Also, what would he do if the baby got a 'death grip' on his hair or his mask/glasses and wouldn't let go?

loved this chap. one of my faves (the previous ulquihime chap for now wins though). grim is just too adorable & i adore the domesticity of it all amongst the awful setting they are in. can't wait for the ulquihime kid (i hope you are gonna add one) so that we can see how scary espada deal w/2 little super-powered terrors with zero impulse control or common sense. especially ulqui. its gotta pull emotion outta him.

read on lj someone's commentary on this fic (it wasn't so favorable) & wondered if he/she got an advance copy of future chaps. he mentioned more chaps that we've seen posted & threw in that tats gets raped. i really hope that's not so. so much awful stuff has already happened to so many characters i can't bear thinking there's even more horror down the pipeline.

await baby shower w/baited breath. someone please do artwork of ajuga & fam!

I love this! Please try to update a lil faster or more than one chapter at a time if you can!

Hello I like your story. The characters are very believable. I like Ukitake and Starks relationship. I have a question as long as I gave credit to you could I make my own version of your story. Most of my pairings will be differant, though I might keep the Karin x Grimmjow. I will probably have yuzu with Tesla or Syazel's brother or Stark and Tesla. Thank you for reading. Could you answer by reveiw on of my stories please and thank you

Ha I love Karin Threatening to castrate Grimmjow

Another awesome chapter, I have to say this is really something. You've put a great deal of work into this, it really is a wonderful piece of fanfiction. I do have a request though, I really would like to see more the interaction of Rangiku and Nniotra, I find them fasinating, considering their personality types and how you're portraying them. I would also like to see more Aizen and Unohana. Other than that I love Karin and Grimmjow and Orihime (who is my favorite character) and Ulquiorra (who's my favorite for Orihime).

At some point it would be nice to see what the survivors are getting up to, especially Yuzu, since I would hoping she would get to stay with Karin and be the couple's sense of normality, and she was a nice addition to the extended family that lives at the Estate.

I am curious if you have any plans for Byakuya to regain his ability to speak, or just get him away from the situation he's in? Or if, like in reality, he has to suffer the situation indefinitly?

One last question, will we ever find out why it is that Karin and Grimmjow could conceive and couples that have been trying for five years could not?

Happy again … anyway I think I understand why you avoided kissing (not just because you said you do NOT like them, but it’s strange to imagine Karin and Grimmjow kissing … maybe not so strange, but somehow disturbing) :)) I bet you’re screaming at me “Just choose something!!!”

Sorry for the last review ... I am not a Orihime fan (Bleach is divided in two: Rukia and Orihime fans … I’m a Karin fan =)) ), and when I realized how far she and The bat had come … I kind of snapped

But I totally loved this chapter … it was super cute … and somehow refreshing, optimist.
Sooo …. the pervert in me is asking .. when will we see some smexing between Karin and Grimmy … I do not want to see the kitty castrated, but … the sacrifice may be worth it :D

I know it’s hard to “please” all the reviewers. Everyone is asking you something ... and it’s hard to comply with all of them; just as an information: stick to your plan, I’ll be there … reading and reviewing … promise

When did I become a walking cliché?

*chuckles* Well I could look at it as Szayel let slip upon immediately identifying the gender but Karin didn't take it seriously or took note of that, being too distracted with the image and all.

Ah, I see *chuckles and nods in agreement* I can very vividly imagine that, though still I can't help wonder how he would deal with a son. Anyways, I pity Ajuga for having such an instinctual over protective father once she hits that rebellious stage XD The chapter is quite a delightful and amusing read :D

Hmm...I don't know how I feel about kissing. In reality it does look kind of....well, disgusting in a way as you put it (and I've never kissed anyone before mind you, I never really had a relationship at all, not that really I'm interested). But in fantasy it looks hot, so I've no problems reading a story or seeing an artwork or animation of fictional characters kissing but, seeing real people doing it in films is another story.

Whoops, sorry for rambling *comically pitches a tent here and waits patiently for your next chapter*

PS: Just call me "Storm". Black is kind of, weird, I donno why XD