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by NovaAlexandria

person Silva
schedule March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ho. Ly. SSHIT. More. Please. As soon as possible, because I need my fix and this story is a good quarter of my addiction. 'cuz your writing is just.......holy SHIT. Keep it up, for the love of god, never quit.
person jensofia
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I thought that you were going to have Yuzu either raped or become one of Szayel's experiments. I'm actually relieved that she was rescued instead. However now I am a lot more nervous that Orihime is getting raped again. From what Ukitaki had observed it seemed Ulquiorra was having his way with her and I doubt she would be in the mood right after what happened.

person Janiegal
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
soo.. -deadly? amazing? bad ass?- KAWAII!!~~ LOLOLOL made me laugh my ass off.. its so great that yuzu gets to go back to the human world, but poor karin! now she's all alone.. i do hope that she gets to hang out more with orihime n tatsuki.. she chose grimm over her family.. it squeezed my heart when she was being all "kurosakis are survivors" >< cant wait for more!!
person Kia
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great job as usual. I think I've read just about everything you've written on here and NEVER been disappointed. Keep up the great work :)
person Hitsuzen
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You def. needed to post the two together for maximum impact. I dunno, maybe I am a weird one but I didn't find that sad at all, I mean it was hard for Karin to confront her brother and give up her sister but the reasons behind those choices are clear and logical. She did the right thing and it will hurt for a bit but I'm not broken up about it and she'll be fine, she's strong.

Ichi's even more of an idiot than usual though. I mean just imagining that showing up six years later all 'Ichi to the rescue!' and that it would be okay? That's pretty stupid, he's supposed to be what 22 here? He could do with a little more growing up in my opinion, that's still a very 'teenage' thing to do.

And I'm glad that Karin finally got to see the kitty ears, I always found Pantera to be the most attractive release and it's hard to really think 'soul sucking monster' with kitty ears and a tail.

Great story, great update and I look forward to the next chapter. Whether Grimmjow realizes he has a heart, hollow hole or no, Karin is re-teaching him how to have emotions and it's beautiful to watch. Thanks for sharing!
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Yuzu is gone and Karin isnt..........=(
Makes me sad but at the same time happy....*mixed emotions*

It was heart wrenching =( But it got better in the last bit with the KAWAII RESSURECTION!!!
person Rez
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Maybe I miss something, but why Orihime coudn't go? I mean physically. Her power can undo anything, even death, so Claim wouldn't be such a problem.
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The choices made were sad, but Karin had her reasons for wanting to stay. About Yuzu, it saddens me that it was how things turned out and the drama in which you wrote it was wonderful. I wonder when Ichigo will know all the truth about Karin, Grimmjow and the pregnancy. *The idea gets me excited. I'm into dramatic unveilings! LOL*
person Dark
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how happy i am at what happened at Yuzu! You scared me there for awhile! Also Karin's reaction to Grimmjow's transformation was so cute and funny! lol
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I nearly cried! it wasn't Yuzu I was worried about, I thought for a moment you were going to kill Ichigo! Poor Ichi, though. You have to feel bad for him. But I had been kind of hoping on a Yuzu/Ukitake (adorable), or a Yuzu/Stark (intriguing) pairing, so this throws a wrench in that. I'm loving this story, but I really hope you don't have any plans to kill anyone off...unless it's Ulquiorra, or Yammy, or Szayel, or Nnoitra. Ooh, you could kill off Nnoitra (for hurting Karin, duh), and then Halibel could claim Rangiku (what lesbian wouldn't), and then Rangiku & Toshiro can be reunited!! Okay, I'm going to run off and live in my fantasy (fantasy) world now. You're doing a great job! I just wish this thing had a notifier like ff.net does...I keep missing the updates and then end up having to read 4-5 chapters at a time at 1am...and then leave rambling reviews...