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Yeah, that was a tad emotional, wasn't it? And while Yuzu might not know for a fact that Karin is preg, doesn't mean she hasn't been suspecting. And she can still spill the beans to Ichigo about Karin sleeping with Grimmjow, so there's that. Also, I would like to add the image of Yachiru in normal modern clothes was very cute. Well, until chapter 31, then. Laters.

Thank you for these amazing chapters, and for the fast updates.
I’m more than sorry for the fact that I did not review earlier….

I saw you have over 10000 hits (it‘s just a matter of time before you got 100 ratings). Congratulations!! (you deserve them).

I promise I will review on the ff.net version.

Now … let’s get down to business.

First of all: thank you for not killing Yuzu and for informing us, the readers, that she will not be raped.

Second: I found it amusing when Karin asked Aizen for the tea receipt (not so hard to believe, but highly amusing :d )

Third: I gotta confess that I was shocked when Karin said those things to Ichigo, even if I know “they” were for his own good. She could not tell him that “You see Ichi-nii … I‘m pregnant and claimed by Grimmjow, which is by the way your Arch Enemy … sooo … sorry .. Cannot come with you … have a nice life … ohh. Almost forgot. Take Yuzu with you, I do not want to see her claimed by any arrancar .. I believe that all … not sure. I‘ll send a letter when I remember”

And the last but not the least: Even if the moment with Karin’s breakdown was indeed depressing, I loved the scene in their bedroom “Badass”.. yeah right

And the last thing. I may not be a Orihime fan … let me rephrase that … I am NOT an Orihime fan, but … I hope that little bat didn’t do anything drastic … That’s why I love Grimmjow and Karin … at least they are acting like adults (hugging and cuddling … that sounds more like teenagers in love :)) )

omg! that was sooooo amazing! i felt sooo bad for karin when she chose grimmjow over her own brother! cant wait also, im reading the other version on ff.net its good.

Wow! Both of these chapters were absolutely amazing. Heart wrenching watching Karin do what she felt was best for both herself and the rest of her family! For just a minute I really did think you were going to kill yuzu and was very happy to see she was only rescued by her big brother! I love watching the pairings you've chosen to write about grow and evolve especially Grim and Karin! You're a gifted writer and I can't wait for your next chapter.

the baby reacting to both karin & grimm was my favorite part, followed by starkk's floundering at what to do then speedy takeoff once uki got there (i expected to read that the ground smoked like in the cartoons roadrunner showing speed).

wow. yes, super sad for the family & friends--heartbreaking. at the same time, i'm so happy that you didn't kill/maim/injure yuzu. i expected some tragedy to physically befall her. this is painful for her separation from karin, her other half, but now she's reunited w/ichi. ichi will hear from her how well grimm actually treats karin, easing that anxiety some.

hime seemed genuinely worried over ulqui, so she's bonding, yes? hoping he won't revert to raping her in the adrenaline frenzy. hoping next scene w/them will show her calming/nurturing influence on him--plus he didn't use full power to fight, so is her influence showing in ulqui showing restraint & not just killing zaraki? hope so. want their love story to be as tender/deep as that of karin/grimm. hope you can update soon!

Good chapters. Rather moving and well written. Keep up the good work!

I feel Ichi's pain! And Karin's! An already broken family is shattered even more . . .

Great chapters!