rate_review Reviews

Still very much enjoying your story here. I check the page daily for new chapters and enjoy reading them when get posted. Here's hoping you do something with harribel or nel, as they're the more interesting espda.

Is it bad for me to be all 'on the edge of my seat' excited to see what's going to happen after the next two chapters? I can't stop guessing what's going to happen to her! I get hyper and stuff! And I found interesting how Karin noted that a certain 'two' weren't claimed, persay (I wont say who they are since people have to read chapter! Hehehe). And Aizen came out nicely (it's rather fun writing him, since he's got that murderous/charming type of attitude that puts people on edge because you don't know what he's truly up to.) As always, can't wait to see more!

Wow, I finally know what Karin's power is! At least if she doesn't have more, but it's still unique for her to do that. And I can't wait to see what the baby is going to look like (I like fic babies. I've got a soft-spot for them in spite of the dark theme of dead ones in my fic *wince*). As Nnoitra, a lot of people will probably be shocked by this, but I've always kinda liked him. (He's such a cruel complex character with the whole hating strong females thing and seemingly slightly perverted... I don't know. I might write something with him in the future just because of that. Heheheheh...) And Ulquiorra wanting to have babies is cute, but I wonder if he's willing just to compete with Grimmjow... So many questions, I guess I'll have to wait and see what's going to happen next! =)

Darn it! I had to repost this review! (I luckily did the whole copy/paste thing just in case. LOL)

Thank you for making Nnoitra .. err *thinking*… gentle … yeah gentle.
Also with every update you make my dream come true :))) … I’m serious … You don’t believe me? Too bad *talk to the hand* :d

Now … If you asked why, I might consider telling you :D

Okay I’ll tell you: From the start I flirted with the idea of a “relationship/friendship” between Karin and Dartz …. Not romantic, just closer. I thought “What would happen if suddenly Szayel and Karin become bf” =))

the rape made me wanna cry for her. the apologizing later rang so true to battering in relationships it creeped me out. is it possible he too might slowly change his view of women & learn to let her be w/o keeping her chained & barefoot? does tesla have a thing for ran? if not, & he's just compassionate, he's my new hero (after your gin & his aid to unohana w/o her knowledge despite what horrors he's undergone). happy for next chap!

I like this story and I wait impatiently for the next chapter. I have seen couples that I was not expecting what was interresting
But may I asked: will there be chapters on Escape, to know how they survive and how you they take the news of those who are caught? if they have plans to try to get out?

Anyway good continuation!!

(I am a french, so sorry for mistakes/faults)

Okay, so I don't completely hate Nnoitra like I thought I would. Still, he's a jackass where it counts. Hoping for more of Orihime in the next chapter.

hmm.. noitra just confuses me.. he seems kinda bipolar.. well, at least matsumoto's fate does not seem too bad.. i hope to see more grimm/karin scenes ^^ it seems like i can never get enough of them.. please keep up the good work!
p.s.: sry im not very good at constructive reviews. i'll still show my appreciation though! :D

I gotta tell you, I got hooked on your story because your HMK kids first one had Unohana. Then I looked up your other stories, and this one caught my attention. Favest chappie by far was 18 (cause it centered around Unohana XP) but overall you're writing is very good, with only a few grammatical and spelling errors.

I am getting very intrigued by where this story is going and cannot wait to read more

I actually liked this chapter! I'm glad he's not to abusive to Matsumoto and he got what he deserved. Great job and I can't wait to see what happens next1