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Will there be another Noitra/Rangiku sex scene? From what you have hinted at in your last chapter those 2 have quite the potential to have some very hot sex if Noitra is in a good mood.

I love your story keep up the good work!

Is it terrible for me to say I really liked your characterization of Noitra in this chapter? I love that he is someone who you are never really sure how he will react whether it's lazy indifference, brutal violence or an oddly domestic contentment. Given his chauvinism and general disregard for anyone else - male or female - I thought it was great to show he's someone who can apologize with relative ease...he seemed like someone with too much pride and not enough self-awareness. I'm not trying to overlook some glaring character flaws (like chauvinism or rape) but I think in some ways this portrayal of Noitra is much more interesting than Grimmjow or Ulquiorra because most people want to like the latter two and find good things in them whereas it is easy to write off Noitra as just another bad guy. Great job!

Love it. You know I was sad when Noitra died, I really wanted him to have a chance with Nel =( Rangiku is in heaven compared to others, she is smart, she is keeping herself alive. Noitra is not that bad, being a sexist pig is not that bad, compared to Yammy he is an angel. Looks like Karin really will be a force of change, good, the only one I really hate in bleach is Aizen, well and I didn't like Tousen too much either hehehe, Yammy to me was simply an idiot but here I am hating him with all my heart and Szayel was not one of my favorites but maybe I will change my mind but still not so sure after what he did to my beloved Renji T.T Thanks for the update, take care and hope to read you soon.

Nice chapter :)
At first I was afraid for Matsumoto, but since you said that it will be a light chapter, my only option is to believe you and HOPE. Can’t wait for a Rangiku Karin meeting … and I’m just as curious about The Claim Meeting: D … can you blame me?
Also I did not forget about what you said in chapter *searching … (after 2 minutes) … found it* 16 about “Byakuya starts crossing paths with Karin”

… Ohhh … Let’s not forget about your irony.
:) We are “clever people”

this chap rocked. love that karen is no push over, regardless of how much stronger the opponent was & that she is able to do so much just by instinct--so cool. the scene where they cuddled in 4th & when he inspected her, claiming the bruises would be revisited on noi was the sweetest thing from grim yet. if he cares this much w/o a heart, his human self would be the perfect hubby (so sweet in his own gruff way). & can't forget szayzel's moment of weakness & his own realization he's becoming a softie.

Hehe I love this chappy. I had to laugh at one of the errors in there babe, you have "Comma Toast" instead of comatose hahaha. Umm there is also a spot were you've missed taking out the /b/ bold italics, accept now I can't freakin find it- curses. Stupid AFF changing the system mid-story. Loved seeing ma boy again this chapter- even if he was a naughty boy- I love you Nnoi, I wanna have your babies! Haha sorry I'ma shut up riiiight, now.
xx

OMG!! You made me cry!!! I was not so sure if Karin was able to return the claim! I am so happy that they are mates. Szayel reaction was unexpected, would be nice if this relationship will bring a change of heart in other Arrancars, at least it is changing Ulquiorra. Poor Noitra hahahaha he is a bastard but I never really hate him, if Matsumoto is smart enough she can keep him happy and avoid problems, I always thought that Noitra was in love with Nel, maybe Matsumoto reminds him of Nel. Knowing that Karin and Grimmy are mates is going to bring more problems to Ulquiorra, I have the impression that he sees Orihime as his mate but no so sure how that though is related to the claiming, does that mean he doesn't care she can't return the claim? mmmmmmmm Hoping that someday Orihime would be able to claim him with her powers *sigh* he did a lot of stupidities because he is only acting by instinct, he can't handle or understand feelings, he doesn't know how but I have faith he is learning little by little.

Szayel getting soft? Intresting.

Hope Nniotora suffered! The sexist pig. I'm worrying about what he'll do to Ran, though.

Awesome chapter!!!

*blink* Bad Szayel! Bad bad!*throws scalpels at him like darts* He's such a naughty little bitch. Anyway, Ooooohhhh, secrets coming! Can't wait. And Szayel, not alone.....hmmm, I see a panicking Karin unconsciously and accidentally drawing on Grimmjow's reiatsu to deciamate the man after he scares her, and Grimmjow showing up to tear apart the remains. Oh well, that's just what I'M envisioning, you always like to surprise me and good. Anyway, back to college, and now to get some lunch.