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by NovaAlexandria

person Janiegal
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay nanao!~ n protective papa grimmjow.. *hugs self & wriggle* why was szayel so excited when karin said she have a twin? is that a hint? ;D
person Onba
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ulqui is so clueless and I love it! Ha! How will Grimmjow answer his new question, I wonder?

Awesome chapter!
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ulqui hahahaha he is really confused!! It is nice to know that he is not compiting with Grimmy anymore, He is following his instincts, sad but true, poor Ulquiorra didn't have a clue about feelings. I love the fact that him and Grimmy are starting to develop some kind of weird friendship, of course any of them would never admit that xP, mmmmmmmmmmmmm wondering if to conceive there must be not only a willing woman but it must exist some kind of feeling for the man, arrancar, espada, whatever hahahaha xP. Yuzu.... that is going to be another part hard to read. Szayel is a bitch and I hate him, hope Papa Grimm kick his ass soon. And of course hoping some day Ulqui understand feelings and become a good husband and father *sigh* at least is sweet to know that He thinks of Orihime as his mate =) awwwwwwwwwwwww He loves her even if the poor idiot can't understand his own feelings, is nice to know that Hime is learning how to tame him xP. I love you and I hate you at the same time hahahaa, please keep writing, love your story, take care, big bear hug, XoXo.
person bleachfan7
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
3rd review attempt--this is so frustrating (seriously annoying site feature)! won't bother retyping long comments again.

thumbs up for chap. love grimkarin interactions, her power which saved her again, uki's willingness to take physical punishment for nanao's benefit, & wondered about how yuzu would get by if grim couldn't protect her. her medical skills are of value even if she's human w/no powers like karin, i'd think, so maybe aizen would still let her live... happy to hear ulquihime's up next since love them bunches too (even more than grimkarin).
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
At least I am sure I will never have any intention of joining the angry mob, if such mob even exists to begin with =P. I must say I was quite shocked with what happened to Renji, really sad and scary too, I guess Renji is 'dead', or at least his spirit is. Quite ironic how he so easily overpowered his Captain when he struggled so much in the past. As always, loving your fic.
person hitsuzen
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*cries* Maor! I'm so addicted to this story! What was Szayel thinking? He's lucky that Grimmy's disinclined to tattle, Unohana might though if Karin thinks to mention it!

Hah! I was trying to guess who had Matsumoto and I guessed correctly, with how much of a perve you've painted Nnoi and her rather impressive *ahem* assets it seemed an obvious choice. I guessed that Nemu was the other one of Pinky's pets as well. I kinda figured he'd have some degree of desire to claim Mayuri's 'child' particularly as he used her for his Phoenix gestation technique once already. I like how you painted that the 12th division was just like 'here's the new boss, same as the old boss' and the relatively seamless nature of that transition. Working under one barely human madman is probably pretty good prep for working under the slighly less human madman. I wonder if Akon survived, I suspect that he's one of the 'terminations' that you mentioned. Though perhaps not, he had been the longest running seated officer in the division though and I think at some level that would lead him to feel that he had to stand up for the others, which would generally be fatal, on the other hand being around for that long and growing up under Mayuri might have lead to a very great deal of pragmatism. He certainly wasn't shy about modifying his body in emulation of Mayuri.

I'm glad that Nanao gets a division and think it would be good for her. I know Grimmjow is going into crazy nesting mode but I hope that he stays under Starrks protection for a little while longer as leaving Yuzu with the baby is optimal all the way around. Particularly considering her strong maternal instincts and the fact that she's highly unlikely to have children of her own. I really really look forward to next chapter and hope you update soon!
person beliefinkakashi
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! It was a lovely chapter! I cannot wait to find out Yuzu's response to Karin's pregnancy!
Love it!
Good luck, Hope you update soon!
person beliefinkakashi
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic!
I've never read a story with Grim/Karin before... that is interesting and new! Too bad they cannot mate, and I cannot believe she is pregnant!
I love your claiming idea! It is brilliant! Its just too bad what happened to Bakuya and Renji, they have it the hardest. I want someone to save them from their fate! T_T But you do what you have got to do!
Love what you have!
Good luck, cannot wait for more!
person Onba
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Szayel was owned! Go Karin! I wonder why he wanted to drain her, though?

I'm glad Nemu is alive. SzayelxNemu is also a pairing I like, but its so rare!

Great chapter!
person Kazes
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY! HAHA I get to be the 100th review! ... do my reviews still count Novs? Hehe, I like this chapter, ya gotta love a worried Grimmy :p I wonder if others will predict what's coming with Karin and ya know... the next Szayel meeting... ;) YAY! 100 reviews!