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i have been fallowing this story for a very long time, when ever i seen a posted chapter it made my day just a bit better. congrats on a very well writen story im sad to see it final end but knowing their going to be a part to make it very much worth they wait of it all. thank you again for creating this story it was just perfect

enjoyed this chap a lot. can't help but be extra pleased when ulquihime is featured. the kids are a cute bonus. ajuga & her line about daddy smelling funny & who's lefty-san had me smiling in real life. & absolutely agree that men showing good parenting skills are sexy/appealing. that goes for showing kindness to animals & treating the elderly in general but in particular their moms/grandma's with respect.

Finally Szayel gets a break, he does deserve one. I really enjoyed this domesticated chapter. It was great to see that Ajuga has gotten over that scene with Gin. I really loved that Ulquiorra was supportive of his son's losses and the way he made Diaemus feel better, his reward was pretty nice too. I can't wait for more! Your imagination, creativity, and writing are completely amazing and on behalf of all of your loyal readers I would like to thank you for taking the time to continue your wonderful stories. Prize of Victory and The Real King are two of my favorites. I also wanted to let you know that I love how you keep your characters in character, but also how you let them grow, accordingly, with their experiences. I liked that you had Toshiro grow a bit and, for me, it did not make him OOC or take anything away from that chapter. You're awesome and I hope you never stop writing, and that your muse is very good to you. Hope all is well with you and your family.

When the Defence Net went up successfully and Szayel slumped in relief, you could practically hear the angelic choir singing, "Haaaaalllllelujah! Hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah!" Etc., etc. Looking forward to the final chapter, and I don't suppose we're ever going to get to find out just exactly what was wrong with Diaemus's vocal chords, are we? Ah, well. Laters.

These kinds of chapters were what hooked me to this story even though the plot can't move forward very well if this was all you wrote. LOL I look forward to seeing what happens next and I applaud your talent for writing even though you've got all kinds of real life going on. Just wanted to thank you for all your hard work on behalf of all your loyal readers.

I want to see a Ajuga/Diaemus pairing where Ajuga partially claims Diaemus. Only if you want, it's only a suggestion

I am soso glad things worked out for Szayel; no matter how bad he can be, he's gone through enough. And you have made the most horrifying, monstrous Aizen I've ever seen. That's been shown before multiple times, but this latest threat is just...you really have a talent for coming up with cruel punishments.

The little slices of life we got from GrimmKarin and Ulquihime were wonderful. Hooray, Diaemus's speech problem has been fixed! Also, I don't know why, but it was really heartwarming to see Ulquiorra on the list of males Grimmjow trusts with his daughter.

Can't wait for the next (and final) chapter!

So glad Szayel got through another chapter unharmed, even though, we still got to find out what Aizen would have done to him and Karin if he had failed. As for the kidlets, Diaemus is so cute, tormented by a loving, overprotective mother. He's tolerant of her attentions, but thinks he doesn't need them. He'd wise up if he was denied. Ajuga seems to be coping with her recent trauma with Gin. She's behaving as if she hadn't witnessed anything which is very mature of her, as far as staying safe goes. I'm sure she's counting up the grievances against Aizen, biding her time.

I wanted to drop by and say your story is AMAZING. I am hooked, constantly checking back to see when its updated. xD Although I admit, the MoP has also grabed me by the ankles, dragging me away to pandaland. Keep up the amazing work!

Review for Household Changes: Toshiro.

I love how you've developed Toshiro and have had him getting older and stronger and I love the way you've portrayed Toshiro and Halibel, it's a great change and I like how they've gotten closer and been able to better understand each other. It's fantastic. I'm hoping to see more of Soi Fon she's always been one of my favorites. Thank you two so much for the hard work!!!