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Hmmm ... Wonder if that slow riatsu drain is what did in Renji and Nemu. Bet they are constantly exposed to it to kerf them virtually dead. If that's the case I wonder what would happen if the exposure ended (preferably permanently) or how Sayael would feel if the riatsu drain was re-tuned to suck up hollow riatsu instead if shinigami/human.

I'm betting Sayael will claim the slow riatsu drain was an important and non-dangerous test when in reality it is quite dangerous. Makes you wonder if he stores the riatsu or what he uses it for. Another possible scenario I could imagine him trying would be to refine the machine so it would secretly drain Aizen's riatsu and let Sayael adapt it to himself to make himself the top barracuda in the soul society pond.

Glad Karin and Grimmjow are working through their issues. I'm still holding out hope for an eventual Yuzu/Starrk pairing (happy one with Starrk the doting daddy of a litter or two of puppies of his own).

Kinda wonder if Unohanna can reverse all the alterations that have been done to the others if given the time and freedom to do so. (like could she restore Soi Fon's and Byakuya's voices if their 'owners' were suddenly gone for good along with Aizen ... But that would still be a long ways off.

Great fic,
Mofaf1

Glad the information was interesting, same happen to me, HOLY CRAP! O.O
Love your story but you already know that hahahahaha
Hate Szayel with all my guts and I was so happy when daddy Grimm almost kick his ass hahahaha Grimm and Karin are such a lovely couple, they already love each other so much, just hoping that one day Hime and Ulqui have the same, if someone can show Ulqui how to love is Hime, well he already loves her, the problem is that he is a beast xP and hoping that Yuzu gets the job as nanny so she and Stark can get close hehehehe that would be another lovely couple *sigh* take care please, thank so much for the update, can't wait for next chapter, Ulqui and Hime!! yeah!!!, big bear hug =)and I love you even if you make me suffer in some chapters hehehehe

I suspect you meant sure of his former colleague as opposed to college.

This story is amazing! I had seen it (frequently) and avoided reading it because I typically dislike Grimmjow Het but now I'm fantastically glad that I did. I really look forward to seeing Rangiku (eventually) and I hope there is some peace that can be found for Bya-bo. Death is all that would help Renji now, too sad.

I'm glad that Soi Fon is still resisting where she can, I'm very glad that Gin has been slipping Unohana birth control. Little rebellion, were it matters the most.

This story is epic, I look forward to watching it evolve and conclude. Please keep writing! Your portrayal of the Arrancar, in all their variety and complexity, is truly beautiful.

wah.. poor byakuya! i hope his hell ends soon.. and hopefully a comet will crash into the kuchiki manor n kill his entire stupid butt sucking family! >:D n even worse, poor renji!! what can happen to break his spirit like that? :X i dun wanna noe.. who will be the next taicho of the new squad? n u said szayel would experiment on karin n her child? o.0 NovaAlexandria, u keep me on the edge of my seat, waiting fer ur next update! i love u so much fer updating so regularly n frequently!! XOXO

Purely chilling, all the more so because you used one of the most emotionally giving characters in renji and you pretty much made him less than a hollow, bereft of even negative emotions of anger, regret or hunger. Poor Renji, he almost always gets the raw end of the deal in any story...perennial loser despite his loyalties and best efforts...perhaps that is why it feels more tragic than the physical pain and humiliation the other characters feel. Poor Byakuya, though his fate doesn't seem worse than Yumichka or SoiFon's and honestly Renji's as well, just more graphic. great job, especially because of the terrible places you dare to shine a light.

WOW! Um.....I kinda don't know what to say to that.....Hope I'll be seeing Karin soon, and Orihime. I was wondering if you were going to have a plotpoint following Yuzu. I think you've done a great job with her character so far and was hoping you would have a love interest for her waiting in the wings.

I've been reading this particular story of yours for some time now and while the plot is an interesting 'what if', and the characterizations not far from cannon, I have one problem with the overall story. It's difficult to try to get into a story, start reading and have a sudden spelling error or grammatical mistake throw the whole thing off. I think the spell-check function in whatever word processing program you're using could catch the majority of them with the right settings. The others will require someone with proofreading skills to go over it and make the necessary edits. I see grammar issues that involve punctuation and its placement and a few verb-use problems, as well as a lot of 'passive voice' (while not incorrect, a writer needs to keep it to a minimum). If you like, I can go over each of the chapters you've already posted with this story, make the corrections and highlight the changes in Word 2010. Please let me know if this is something you'd be interested in.

Holycrap I haven't reviewed in awhile (bad net connection among other things). But I've read every single chapter including the last one 'Crimson'. I really felt bad for Byakuya and Renji being almost a souless parody of life (I'm just getting poetic again. Always HAPPENS. LOL). It was specially painful since in some way Byakuya understood and felt a bit of pity for his former subordinate (the chapter just impacted me!). I really love fics that push the senses unlike other stuff, so the fact that you delve into territory other writers wouldn't dare touch makes me LOVE reading this! And also... I can't stop wondering about Yuzu's possible fate (why do I have a feeling that it's gonna get messy?). And about your review in my Grimm/OC. Yup, it'll be disturbing to people that have sensitive stomachs. I'm really going to cross a boundary there. *cringe* Hope to see an update soon! =)

I KNEW it!! I knew that when I read that Karin had inserted her reiatsu into Grimmjow during his Claim that she'd Claimed him back!! NOW the big question from my little skull-blanketed corner is- "did she do it on purpose, or on accident, and how long will it take good ol' Grimm to realize what she's done?" Ohhhhh, I do so look forward to the next chapters of your work, even if I DO have to endure more of the horrific images of Yammy abusing Byakuya to get at them.

This is my review for chapter 16. I am behind. I did have to skip the chapters with Byakuya, i like him too much. But i am glad Karin finally noticed the baby in her! I wonder what he/she will look like. I also wonder what is gonna happen with Yuzu, if she will become more than a background character. And i really hope you will spend some time with Uohana and Aizen. Thats all for now!