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Review for chapter 17: lol. Pussy ants.

Chapter 18 reveiw: -sniff- My precious Gin. Please do something to save him from that awful fate. I hate aizen so fuckin much.

Poor Renji, now I don't know if it would have been better that he died *sigh* you know, it doesn't hurt me so much what Renji did to Byakuya, it hurt me more why Renji did it, that was really painful to me, I always love Byakuya and Renji as a couple, maybe that is the reason and I hate so much Yammy that what I feel when I read what he do to Byakuya is disgust not horror =/ Poor Ukitake, I not even want to think what Aizen did to him and in my opinion Yummy didn't have such an awful fate. Hope to read more soon, great story, take care, XoXo.

I do have nerves of steel...but I still cried. I hope Yammy gets his teeth kicked in soon enough by Byakuya and Renji gets with him...one day. Great chapter still. I think it would be a cool twist of fate if Byakuya actually gets the 5th division.

I love this!!! You made me into a GrimXKarin Shipper now!!! lol I cant wait for the next chapter!

Love you, can't wait to read some more, Karin and Grimmy's wedding night was fantastic, how much I envy that girl *¬* hahahaha you almost make me cry with this chapter you know? first with Ulquiorra =( He loves Hime even when he have been an ass and didn't know how to show his love just his lust, we sometimes believe that girls are the only ones who dream about having babies with the man we love but there are a lot of boys who dream of having tons of babies with the woman they love, Ulquiorra most be feeling like that, he wants kids but most of all, I think he would love to have kids with Orihime. Then you kill me with Grimmjow, when he was thinking that his bond with Karin would never be complete, he loves her, even if he is still uncapable of admit it, he loves her and he is so proud of her and nothing would make him more happy to call her his mate, an equal to him, because she is worth it. I almost cry too thinking of how many died, it hurt like hell, at least Renji and Yummy are alive *sigh*. Looks very interesting what is coming, I love Byakuya and is very hard to read how much he is suffering but he is strong, he have yield in some way but he is not broken, there is still fire inside him. Question, all the Espada are alive? the only I haven't read about is Aaroniero and Zommari =/ mmmmmmmm well, thanks so much for sharing, love your story, take care please, XoXo.

Reading your reviews, someone said that they haven't heard about homosexuality in animals, well for anyone who read reviews like me and it is interested in the subject as I was, this could be helpful:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Homosexual_behavior_in_animals
http://www.news-medical.net/news/2006/10/23/20718.aspx
http://news.nationalgeographic.com/news/2004/07/0722_040722_gayanimal.html

You can find tons of information in the internet, I just want to share a bit, it was very interesting =)

Poor Ulqui! Being out done by Grimmjow must be quite a blow to his ego, lol! Come to think of it, I wonder what Ulqui thinks of little batlings running around? Daddy Ulqui is a strange thought but one I am despratly rooting for!

Great chapter!

this was fun to read. nesting grimm is adorable. i'm guessing orihime's rika are able to block conception--why not 'undo' the effects of noncon sex. but now that its consensual, i wish you'd add it in--know its already been posted she won't be preggers anytime soon, but if this goes into future/timeskip, please please please give us a pretty ulquihime child (opposite sex of grim's so they can be mates as grownups!). blue eyed baby grim + green eyed ulqui baby would be soooooo gorgeous. (or a separate oneshot as a palate cleanser to the grimkarin or other darker stuff since you are many chaps into fic). i love the grimkarin & family storyline, but i love how you write the ulquihime too, even if its not your fav you do it well. both pairings are so sexy.

I am really enjoying this story, love the concept – very different. I feel very sorry for Byakuya and Gin. Seems like Gin has great respect for Unahana. And a wonderful friendship has developed between the two characters. Glad that he is getting back at Aizen in some way and hope this does not backfire, which it probably will. I like that you include other characters and their stories next to your main paring – this makes for a truly great read!