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by NovaAlexandria

schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM


Just found this story yesterday and have enjoyed how unique it is.

I've read each chapter and have to say that....not being a fan of Hitsugaya, I'm glad you haven't spent more than one chapter on him. XD

I'm really unsure who I feel sorrier for at this time---Byakuya or Gin.

Of course, I've enjoyed the UlquixOrihime story, and I love the way you've portrayed Ulquiorra's emotions and thoughts so far. KarinxGrimmjow has held my interest the most...and now I am stuck waiting desperately for the next chapter since I caught this right after an update. Waaaah. ;)

The 'teaser's' in your A/N concerning Ichigo and Yuzu were deliciously cruel because I want to read about them NOW! After reading of Karin's Claiming, of course! LOL....so, stop reading my lame review and start posting more chapters, pleeeeeeease!!! :) And keep up the great work!
person Mofaf1
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Would it be wrong to suspect that the tea is an herbal contraceptive?
person J2IsOtaku
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank u for updating so regularly! I love ur story, the plot is so original.. U made me into an eternal grimm/karin fan! Ganbatte! :)
person Onba
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Gin! I want to hug him and make it better! At least he's not completely broken, though, that sly fox. I'm betting his tea is the reason she hasn't had a kid yet. Stick it to the man, Gin! Stick to the man, just do it without getting caught!

Wonderful chapter!
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I managed to catch up with the story and I must say it was nice having so many chapters to read. So far I'm enjoying it, a lot, and I'm glad to see you followed the manga with Gin's betrayel, it's something new and not many dare or want to do that. I could keep ranting about what I liked but I liked everything so no point in doing that. =P

Now all I want to know are a few things about Ichigo and I'll be very happy.
person Silva
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GREAT MOTHER OF ALL THINGS HOLY I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING. Scare the livin' shit outta Grimmjow and have his instinct go haywire why dontcha? Shhiiiiiit.....terrify him into nearly Claiming her against her will, and be a master-servant Claim rather than a mutual Mate Claim- and here I was hoping Grimmjow was attached enough to let her bond back. I mean, you fuck for three months solid and you're probably willing to keep 'em around the rest of your life if you're a Hollow, right? Antichrist incarnate.....surprised the hell outta me, you did. I can't wait to see what you'll throw at us readers in the next chapter!
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! Poor Gin but anyway I thought it was going to be worst for him, in some way I am relieve Byakuya got the worse deal of them all, seems like Gin is still betraying Aizen, good for him, just hope it doesn't bring worst things for them, hate Aizen, he is such a bastard and the way you have portrayed him is perfect, I think I know what is going to happen to Yuzu, Aizen probably will think that just because she is Karin's sister she is as fertile as her but if Karin is the first to conceive the reason is clear, they must be willing or no baby! Want to know more about Hime and Ulqui =) hahahaha how is the wooing going??? and can't wait to read about Karin and Grimmy's wedding night!!! Ichigo is going to have a heart attack!!!
person Erosu
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story every update and although I do not review up until now I must say that your idea is great and refreshing. I like how the tension now arises with Karin's obvious condition. My heart tugs at what you have in store for Yuzu for she is one of my favorite characters, hopefully not the path of Byakuya bit whatever you already have planned I will respect.

About Gin...Im not going to lie and say he isn't the one I have been the most anxious to see but yes after bits and clues you have given I have a really bad feeling about his fate. Given that captains and lieutenants must be Claimed the lack of mention of Rangiku tells me something went wrong in this note. Perhaps Gin tried protecting her from that fate and Aizen wasn't none too happy about it. Just speculating but all in all I would like to say great job for making my toes stand on end waiting for an update and I am sure to whatever you have in store will be marvelous
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Looooooooove it!!! Grimmy is so sweet hahahahaha he is in love with Karin xP and he is going to be a good dad! =) poor Yuzu =( I don't care how much the characters suffer if they have a happy ending!! Aizen is hot and sexy but I hate him with all my heart!! Poor Gin, sounds like he is having a miserable life =( hahahahaha and I love the fact that Grimmy is thinking that Hime is Ulqui's weakness when he is having the same problem with Karin xD!!! Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa yeah, kittens!! Karin is a twin so... any chance that instead of baby they are going to have babies???
person Onba
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, dear. I have a bad feeling about next chapter. What will Aizen do about this. If Szayel finds out too he'll no doute what to 'examin' Karin! *shiver*

And Gin, poor Gin! I have a feelling Ran is dead . . .