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hope aizen isn't a total dick. can grimmy just say he had to help karin out? w/o mention of pregnancy... am hopeful grim can claim her that same night (which i guess is at least 2 chaps away if next one is about aizen, unohana, & gin). if aizen claims her, it will suck big time.

ulqui being nice w/o realizing it is still so sweet to me. love ulquihime.

I may skip the next chapter because I'm not that interested in Bakuya (don't like him much anyway), but I really do enjoy the fact that there IS A STORYLINE, so far the best one is Karin's and Yuzu's. I look forward to reading more of that. Keep up the writing.

SQUEAL! I love this chappy :D AND guess what? I didn't see ONE error in it! :D Well done my friend! Well, considering it's 1am I think I awt to go to bed- just had to read this when I saw you posted it. Man, so much has happened since this, it's weird going back to here :) Niiiiiiight! ~ J

So Karin is the first uh? I bet the claiming somehow prevents pregnancy in all non-arrancar, but its just a guess.

Great chapter!

was checking for update all the time so thx for posting!

hurray for baby grimm confirmation! the lines where karin was 'stroking' grm w/her reiatsu were so sweet & tender i was squealing in my head. very exciting chap. highlights fact that it really is imperative she get claimed asap or else they will keep on getting attacked since grim can't be there 24/7. was wondering if yuzu/ukitake was a viable pairing--can't see any mentioned arrancar being nice enough apart from stark, which i mentioned before i think. still, she probably needs to be protected since she's got no power to protect herself. never would have guessed at aizen/unohana pairing. pleasant little side surprise. update soon!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww love it hahahahaha mmmmmmm Ukitake and Yuzu!! interesting......... nice to know that Starrk and Lilinette love their family, Shunsui was very wise on leaving his best friend and his beloved in good hands =) hope to read more soon, really want to know about Gin too, you know, I hate Aizen and Tousen but in some way I always like Gin xP take care, tons of love, XoXo

Since I first saw it, I've been watching this thing like a hawk does a mouse (and though I feel miserably sorry for both Toshiro and Byakuya, especially Byakuya, I have to confess I do enjoy seeing what you've done with them) and am oh-so-eagerly awaiting to see exactly WHY Grimmjow wanted Karin to learn all about Claiming. I have my suspicions, but I've been proven wrong before, so I want to know SO bad it hurts! And I have a little voice in the back of my head screaming 'C'mon Grimmy, jus' fuckin' give it up an' Mate 'er al-goddamn-ready!' which is starting to get really, REALLY hard to ignore.

I love your story and I love your 2 main pairings but please for the love of God no more Byakuya/Yammy rape scenes! (Unless it ends with Yammy getting castrated then it would be worth the reed.) To me it's one of those things that a so horrifying that I can't look away and I am compelled to read more.

And about the no little bats (for now at least) thing. I can see the reason why you are going with it is because Orihime was too upset to be able to conceive. From what I hear pregnancies from rape are far less likely to occur than from consensual sex because the whole thing with progesterone and esterone levels needing to be right. Since she was basically raped for 5 years it might take awhile for her to relax enough to be able to have a baby again if she wasn't all that fertile to begin with.

Guess what happened to me now...? *pouts* I reviewed and the page froze up! AHHHHHHH!!!! Anyways, I can't stand Yammy (probably since Bya can't stand him). I'm not the kind of person to skip chapters since I'm not squeamish so I read all of them in spite of warnings. Hehehehe... About your A/N! Karin is WHAT??? YAY! I can't wait to see how you'll make the baby look! I'm all hyper now!

this was soooo sweet & cute. the idea of the little family formed in starkk/uki household is like a little slice of happy amidst hell. hope we find a pairing for yuzu so she's not 'fifth wheel' & she doesn't need to leave since karin will definitely need her for super pregnancy. wonder if baby is increasing or will increase her powers in some way. given a.n. about upcoming 2 chaps, presume at least pregnancy will be discovered. hope double-wedding/mating is in works for 2 main couples (hearts in eyes).

hope to see ulquihime relationship progress soon. sad there won't be a little bat-baby, but a kitty-baby is nice consolation. guess tatsuki can still be auntie to kitty baby.