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by NovaAlexandria

person rosuki
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
BAW! So sad but so cute! Great job!
person bleachfan7
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
explanations are necessary, and this was done well. we get a sense of karin's emotional confusion & longing for support/friendship. I wondered if now that ulqui is relaxing somewhat, if the twins and tats/hime would be permitted to interact more. the could help each other out so much and that female bond can be so important when dealing w/stressful life issues (as they are in this au).

also wondered if hime would be trying to get ulqui to make love face to face. if she's trying to love him (again) then i'd think facing each other would be an important show of greater intimacy & partnership, as opposed to just him 'claiming' her. sure would be funny if he paralleled grimmy's obsession w/trying every position he can think of upon discovery of joys of changing routine. would do a happy dance if both the ulquihime & grimmkarin couplings moved to full mating claim as described so they could really be able to protect themselves when guys aren't around (and shows the guy's trust in them).
person rosuki
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHH Shunsui and Nanao!!!
I know I am such a sap. It was one of those chapters that needed to be done to explain everything, nonetheless it was good. Great job! T-toshiro...I love him and Rangiku...treat them o-ok?I hope? Can't wait!
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, is very interesting, not so sure but is Karin pregnant xP? she is taming Grimmjow, well hahaha they are taming each other, they will be a strong and great couple as it will be Orihime and Ulquiorra. Can't wait to see Ulquiorra and Orihime as mates, she was the only one able to break the iron grip he had over his emotions, is not really his fault he is an ass hahahaha, he simply didn't know how to deal with emotions, it was just like he had forgotten everything about feelings, that is why for me they were perfect for each other because Orihime is all heart and he didn't know where his heart was, an angel saving a fallen angel =). One question, not so sure but did he always take her in his first or his second release? I love the way you write your characters, their actions and their reactions, how can I said this? you keep them real, any fan story will always have a bit of OC because is not written by the original author and that person is the only one that know the characters inside and out, but you story is very close to that =) Reading about Byakuya was hard, I couldn't read all the chapter, it was too much painful, is Renji alive? Hope he is, Byakuya and Renji is my second fav couple in bleach. And Ukitake and Starrk, mmmmmmmm, I don't know why but sounds like a very interesting couple, Uki doesn't seem attracted to Nanao and I feel like she will never forget Shunsui, mmmmmmmm but you are the writer not me hehehehe. Thank you so much for sharing, love the fact that your boyfriend supports you =) take care ok and hope to read you soon, XoXo.
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know I was reading some reviews and all I could think was mmmmmmmmm if the last time Orihime and Ulquiorra had sex was great because she was willing, what will happen when they finally make love and face to face?? O.O Holy Cow!!! *¬* nosebleed, nosebleed!!! hahahaha people call him a cold hearted bastard but he is not cold at all, nope, He is hot, smart, strong, passionate, a great lover and he is in the road to learn some manners mmmmmmmmm Orihime is a very lucky girl =) ok, now I will stop thinking about that or I will die from blood loss!!! hahahaha Read you soon, =) XoXo.
person star
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still enjoying the story. Since you've mention that soi fong's still alive, I hope you'll do a chapter or part of a chapter on her, just for fun.
person Onba
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cat in heat, lol! I wonder if bats go into heat, though? I'll have to check.
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love youuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!! hahahaha One of my fav pairings is Ulquiorra and Orihime!!! (I was devastated when he died T.T) Last chapter was so adorable, poor Ulquiorra hope Orihime really teach him how to properly show his love, he already loves her and if one day she is able to return that love, he is going to love her even more <3 Am I wrong or Karin is already pregnant??? Can't wait for next chapter, love your story and hoping you keep writing it, thank you so much for sharing, take care and read you soon. =)
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I actually loved this chapter. (especially how Tatsuki teased Orihime afterwards and said that she ought to get herself an Arrancar. LOL). And Ulquiorra's somewhat shyness in thanking Orihime for helping him with his little dilemma added a cuteness and I still felt as if it was something that he would do in that situation and that's very rare to find in fics. Can't wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ulquiorra was just too cute! xD

Seriously, I loved your description, I could almost seem him there in the room, all cat-like, lol.

This claim you speak of sounds familiar, I probably read it in another story of yours, I remember it was StarkxGrimmjow, now that was hot. I could be wrong though. >.>