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for Prize of Victory

by NovaAlexandria

schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, not ashamed to admit enjoying the dark ones. I was really hoping since you are using multiple pairing that i would see Gin though. i always like the bad guys more, to me Ichigo is the most boring character in bleach, except when he goes hollow. cant wait to see how things develop between Grimm and Karin. i like how he waited until she was the age of consent, i might be a girl perv but wouldnt like reading about anyone w an 11 yr old.
person Mirrors
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I could just bawl right now! I had written down a long ass review and when I went to post it my internet connection went caput! *pouts* But I like how Grimmjow in his own way is showing some concern for Karin. Maybe its a love/hate thing. He hates her brother and is 'enjoying' her company (I put enjoying to not sound too vulgar). As for the shadow readers, man they're so annoying but a friend of mine that happens to be one explained that some people reading particularly strong fics are too struck dumb to come up with anything good to say and/or they are kind of embarassed to openly admit liking it. I love darkness and morbid dark humor, reading and writing it brings a 3-dimensional view of the characters and makes the emotions for the readers all the more intense. It would be nice that shadow readers would at least aknowledge that and support the author to show that they're on the right track and writing something meaningful for their literary pleasure. (I could just go on about this.)

What I can't wait to see is Ichigo's reaction to what Grimmjow has done with Karin. *shudders in delight* That's going to be awesome.
person Mirrors: forgot password *winces*
schedule December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You are keeping the story! Loving the possibility of some Grimm/Karin too (I've seen very rare fanfics for them and they actually have a good chemistry in fanfics. I think it's their personality types. Both tough and gruff, fighters to the core. LOL)I haven't given up on Love, Hate and Something In Between. It's just that I had some computer issues and now there's climate problems where I live (an earthquake just recently) that has everyone walking on eggshells. I have part of the next chap of the story done and some ideas that will be very dramatic and maybe gory for the faint hearted. I won't give too much detail though *mysterious look*. Can't wait to see where Price of Victory will go and how all of the relationships proceed. :-)
person Anon
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!
person Mesh
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I believe the picture you're referring to is "Victory" by sarahpixen: http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/308304

As for the story, I liked it. D/S Ulquihime pushes many of my kink buttons, as does vampire-esque claiming. ;)
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I actually saw that drawing and squealed like a little schoolgirl! Its a really good one to get lots of wicked ideas. *evil kinky look*
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww nice yummy possessive UlquiHime. I liked Ulquiorra going after his prize:)
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man I messed up! I always do that. So you planned it as a two shot? *pouts* Its cool, it kinda leaves me anxious and conjuring alot of possible outcomes like the reactions her friends would have and what Ulquiorra really meant. He's so hard to read! Hehehe... But the best guys are.