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September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I honestly loved this! The drama (even if there was lack of romance) was beautiful to me. I've always found your writing style interesting since you delve more into the emotions of the couple involved. Its very rare for writers to make the readers feel like in the character's shoes. Keep up the good work. And lemme tell ya, writing something romantic is extremely hard! I've been trying and I just make it all angsty. *winces*
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August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AWWW MORE THEN ONE!
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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like that orihime is a lot stronger. Also liked the twist with the assassination plot. Very original. Wish there was more romance, but given the original twin blossoms says they hadn't slept together since the daughter was conceived, guess there's no chance of that.
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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
its good but I'll be honest. Its unromantic. And if I remember the prequel correctly this (un)romance will last for 5-6 years. And even then there wont be any spark.
Byakuya didn't even try to make her first time pleasurable. It was just duty. I men come on, the guy must be at least a century old and he needs oil to make a woman (a woman who constantly saves his life) wet? meh
But as I've said the writing is good. Maybe the next story will be more romantic.
Byakuya didn't even try to make her first time pleasurable. It was just duty. I men come on, the guy must be at least a century old and he needs oil to make a woman (a woman who constantly saves his life) wet? meh
But as I've said the writing is good. Maybe the next story will be more romantic.
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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I never thought Orihime and Byakuya would be a good couple but you have convinced me. please add more and update me whan you have. I think this is my favorte fanfiction so far. -Axel
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story..Byakuya/Orihime is a pairing not seen alot and you are doing very well! Keep up the good work!!!!
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story, more soon Chapter 4!
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a clever tale! I've always loved Byakuya. This is an interesting plot, and I can't wait to see what comes next. I want him to get better, and I hope healing the tree has some significance. Thanks for all your hard work. I look forward to more.
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, hey NA! Wow, I'd forgotten how much I enjoyed your writing :) I love this story, everyone is beautifully in character and reading it is so effortless. Looking forward to more :)
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You mean it's almost over??? I was hoping for a nice long juicy story. Oh well...This was a very exciting chapter. Thanks for all your hard work.