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Damn this is some funny shit. I never expected half of these pairings. I LAUGHED my ass off at the sex talk. I was hoping for some Orihime but bleh this is just as awesome. Rare to see our favorite scientist in porn, let alone a fic.

If you ever update email me please.

Oh Gin you evil, evil bastard. Excellent work my evil comrade in arms. I caught a mistake I meant to point out earlier and forgot. It's Tia Harribel, not Harribel Tai. Remember, Hollows are Spanish origins, so family names last. I find it somewhat amusing people get so use to Americanizing the Japanese names that they do it for the non oriental style as well.

Honestly, I wish they would stop doing that, especially in the 'official subtitles' where you can clearly hear the screw up. I find it culturally insulting to switch a persons name around like that just because they think non oriental people are too stupid to figure out the family name comes first in some cultures.

Gin is so mean to Szayel. However I have to agree with that one sentence in your ending author's note. If Gin asked me (and thats saying he'd have to ask...commands and expectant looks work just as well) to do anything I wouldn't complain, protest, or do anything that might come out as some form of no. I love how you had him all seductive and things without breaking character really really nice. Now tearing away from Gin's obviously drop dead gorgeousness....Nnoitra and Harribel, huh? Interesting if they hook up. I always imagine Nnoitra with former third espada Neliel. Still very interesting. I love this story and can't wait to read more of Gin..and slightly wondering if Ulquiorra will get pissed off and maybe have *cough* fun *cough* with Grimmjow lol. Waiting for the next chapter. :)

EPIC WIN

It was great. Please update when you have time. I am enjoying the story and absoutely love it.

Dear god I could not stop laughing. Easily the funniest chapter to date my friend. I can't even begin to pick out the best part because it was all rolled into one hilarious scene. Victory is up to 206 pages now and still trekking. The end is still no where in sight and you know me, I like to finish a story before I post.

:O OMFG!!!!! I lovie this story so freaking much!! You rock!!! Are you going to update soon?????? I love this great job keep it up!!!

Epic as usual my friend. Got a few good laughs this chapter. Of course Szayel would have countermeasures in place for himself. Victory is on page 161 now and going smooth. Got snagged for a day on dialogue evilness.

I actually found this funny. The thought of a bunch of horny Espadas running around seems interesting and the Gin talking about sex was interesting. I'm really curious about where this fic could go. :)

As epic as i remember it to be when you sent me the draft :) You know me, I can't wait until the next chapters. My own work is coming along nicely, but you know I hate posting until it's done. Still, I will probably send you a sneak peek at the next love scene ;)