rate_review Reviews

Excellent fic, just as enchanting as when I read it before. A very enjoyable read.

Btw you have 'chapter eight' written at the top of 9 :)

OK I usually wait till I've finished a story to review, but I just read ch 5 and just HAD to say something. Renji jerking off while watching Byakuya take a shower OMG!! Not that I blame him, but I just knew he was gonna get caught. I thought for sure Byakuya was gonna turn and see him, or Renji was gonna bask too long and Byakuya was gonna come into his room. I was reading between my fingers, talking to my computer "Oh my God! He's gonna see you! Naughty, naughty, you'll get caughty!" Anyways sorry for the ramble :) loving this so far, and I will review when I'm done.

Oh you're good!! 2 reviews before I've finished the story? Not many can make me do that lol Anyways, ch 6, with Byakuya dreaming..very, very, very nice smut. Like, 5-star stuff, I loved it. BUT, more importantly, Byakuya just agreed to stay! I know he doesn't realise he's dreaming, but isn't staying in the dream EXACTLY what the 'bad guy' wants? Renji needs to come back, because I bet Byakuya's riatsu is about to mess up. btw his dream, who he's dreaming about, awwww poor Byakuya. Is this a dream he would've had anyway, or is that arrancar somehow preying on his secret pain?

Freakin awesome! I love this story so much! The slow build was very nicely done, when they were naughty it was written in lovely, tasteful detail, and while the ending may have been anti-climatic (as the chappies name indicated) it was very well done and a tad funny. hehe Byakuya and pda Renji is in trouble! I know you are done with this, but I'd love to see a follow-up on how they did afterwards. Ooooh how would they feel during the zampakuto rebellion?? Oh and I loved the talk they had in bed. The way Byakuya opened up seems like the way he really would, and I was glad when he apologized for his earlier words. This was so wonderful, and I enjoyed reading it.

This story made me cry. It was so sad, but the end was awesome.

I'm so sorry I didn't review the other chapters! I got pretty busy and completely forgot about this fic. Yesterday I came to see if you have updated it and saw that it was already finished. I'm so ashamed.

Well, onto the review per se. You said you didn't like these last two chapters, right? Well, I loved them, so don't worry about it. They were amazing. Also I really enjoyed that dream of Byakuya. I felt like blushing all the while. This was a very good fic, and I think I'll take a look at the others you wrote too.

Oh, and thank you for answering my other review. In answer to your question, no, I don't have an account there. I'm just on ff.net, though I can't dismiss the possibility of creating an account here someday, because it's getting more and more complicated to write M-rated stuff there. You never know what exactly you can write and what not. Those guys from Literate Union are a pain and I hope I'll never have to meet them.

Anyway, I do have an account on dA (who doesn't, nowadays?), so if you are there too don't doubt contacting me. My username is Akribos-san.

Hoping to read you again soon,

Lady Akribos-san

P.D: sorry for my awful English.

Thank you for writing this fic. I'm always happy to see a new story with my OTP and always looked if was updated. ^_^ It was a rather anti-climatic ending but still a wonderful read.

I was afraid you'd given up on this story, but this last chapter was settled nicely. I love your dynamic between Renji and Byakuya! I think the story ended sweetly, and was amazing to read. Not your normal run of the mill smut of course, but a really good fic! I always look forward to reading what you post. I can't decide which idea I liked the best, so I'm just going to sit back and wait to see what you decide! LOL I know, I'm not much help am I?

It won't let me vote on that other website? Anyways, I would chose #3 if I can vote here. That sounds like fun!

Enjoyed the story through chapter 7 then it seemed to fall kind of flat.

In regard to your survey ... I honestly don't care for AU fics so none of the options really appeal to me. I can handle alternate timeline fics and what if things took a different turn at some point fics as well as behind the scenes fics showing interactions during the gaps in action we see on the show/ in the manga. Perhaps some of your other plot bunnies will appeal to me more.

Keep up the good work.