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Poor little Byakuya, he wasn't sure what the proper etiquette for premature ejaculation was!!! Buuuuha ha ha.... This was great!

But I'm glad they moved on a bit! Quite far even if you take into account that we're talking about Byakuya!
I love it! It's worth waiting.
Patience is a virtue, after all! (So now I'm virtual! Ha ha ha.... no, that joke was lame...)

I'm wondering if Ichigo was acting like that on purpose? I'm guessing he'd really sensed Byakuya, and decided to play Devil's advocate! LOL anyway, it worked. Although, now that these two have gone this far without really talking, I'm looking forward to see how you resolve all this. I've loved this story, and I hate to see it end. I look foward to more soon..I hope.

OH NOES! Don't tell me Renji thinks this is a one-night stand? That would be bad. You didn't have to say what you did in the beggining, I thought it was very well written and I enjoyed it. I LOVED Yourichei(SP?).

Oh awkkkkward. Byakuya is super awkward lol.
Glad to see that you updated! Can't wait for the next chapter!

This is such an amazing story, you really know how to keep a reader hooked! I'm continually checking back for updates and cannot wait for more. This has got to be one of my favourite renji/byakuya fics out there.

Well hello. Same Anon from before - I'm glad you were pleased with my comment, and I assure you I haven't said anything I didn't mean too, and I am most certain I didn't exaggerate at all.

Chapter Six was truly wonderful - it made me feel like I was there in the dream, feeling Byakuya's uncertainties and having the nudging feeling something's wrong. I liked all the small hints along the chapter.

But that was a long while ago.
Let's talk about Chapter Seven.
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Well. Dear writer, since I have good faith in you, I'm sure that in the next update I will be able to collect the pieces of my broken heart, along with Renji, and continue onwards to a better future with puppies, rainbows and merry gay sex.
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Dear god women, that was excellent, but so, so depressing. I shared the sadness with about four other friends. And then! They were sad, too.
Stupid Byakuya and his stupid emotional defects. Take the "Royal family important business" and shove it where Renji's cock could've been if you weren't such a stuck up bitch.
Yeah.
So.
Love your writing. Keep it up!
Hurreh.

P.S
The sex scene was hot.

OH NO! Eternal sad face!!
I suppose it would be more realistic for Byakuya to resist Renji before they finally get together but man, reading that scene... super harsh. But again, expected for someone like Byakuya. Hopefully Ichigo will be able to lift Renji's spirits!!
Great chapter! Keep going!

Byakuya is such a pussy! LOL Poor Renji...this is breaking my heart. I really want to hear what's going on in dick-wad's mind right now. I hope he feels like shit! Anyway. I look forward to more of this great story. I was thrilled to see it updated. Please don't make us wait too long. Later!

THAK YOU! I really needed this! There was practically NO updates for any cool stories recently. Thank you so much! This was great! Renji is awesome and Byakuya is ... as always. GO RENJI! I hope he will do billion of really cool stuff and Byakuya will really regret to be such an ass and coward. And I hope he will miss Renji terribly!
I also really hope that the next update will be sooner than the last one... ^_^